edit pass: custom-event-quickstarts

ShawnJackson · ShawnJackson · commit 8cf555ba3ebe · 2024-06-25T16:09:48.000-05:00
diff --git a/articles/event-grid/custom-event-to-eventhub.md b/articles/event-grid/custom-event-to-eventhub.md
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Event Grid topics are Azure resources, and they must be placed in an Azure resou
 
 Create a resource group by using the [az group create](/cli/azure/group#az-group-create) command. The following example creates a resource group named `gridResourceGroup` in the `westus2` location.
 
-Select **Try it** next to the CLI example to open Azure Cloud Shell on the right pane. Select the **Copy** button to copy the command, paste it in the Cloud Shell window, and then select the Enter key to run the command.
+Select **Open Cloud Shell** to open Azure Cloud Shell on the right pane. Select the **Copy** button to copy the command, paste it in Cloud Shell, and then select the Enter key to run the command.
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az group create --name gridResourceGroup --location westus2
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ endpoint=$(az eventgrid topic show --name $topicname -g gridResourceGroup --quer
 key=$(az eventgrid topic key list --name $topicname -g gridResourceGroup --query "key1" --output tsv)
 ```
 
-To simplify this article, you use sample event data to send to the custom topic. Typically, an application or an Azure service would send the event data.
+For the sake of simplicity in this article, you use sample event data to send to the custom topic. Typically, an application or an Azure service would send the event data.
 
 The cURL tool sends HTTP requests. In this article, you use cURL to send the event to the custom topic. The following example sends three events to the Event Grid topic:
 
diff --git a/articles/event-grid/custom-event-to-function.md b/articles/event-grid/custom-event-to-function.md
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ In this section, you use Visual Studio Code to create a function with an Event G
 1. Hover over your project and select the **Deploy to Azure** button.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/custom-event-to-function/deploy-to-azure-button.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the button for deploying to Azure."  lightbox="./media/custom-event-to-function/deploy-to-azure-button.png":::
-1. In the drop-down list of the command palette, select **+ Create new function app**, and then select the Enter key.
+1. In the dropdown list of the command palette, select **+ Create new function app**, and then select the Enter key.
 
 1. For **Name**, enter a globally unique name for the new function app, and then select the Enter key.
 
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ In this section, you use Visual Studio Code to create a function with an Event G
 1. Right-click your function, and then select **Open in Portal**.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/custom-event-to-function/click-to-view-functions-app.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows selections for opening a function in the portal."  lightbox="./media/custom-event-to-function/click-to-view-functions-app.png":::
-1. Sign in to Azure if needed, and confirm that the **Function App** page appears for your function.
+1. Sign in to Azure if necessary, and confirm that the **Function App** page appears for your function.
 
 1. On the bottom pane, select your function.
 
@@ -97,9 +97,9 @@ In this section, you use Visual Studio Code to create a function with an Event G
 
 An Event Grid topic provides a user-defined endpoint that you post your events to.
 
-1. On a new tab of the web browser window, sign in to [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
+1. On a new tab of the web browser window, sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
 
-1. On the search bar at the topic, search for **Event Grid Topics**, and select **Event Grid Topics**.
+1. On the search bar at the topic, search for **Event Grid Topics**, and then select **Event Grid Topics**.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/custom-event-to-function/select-topics.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the selection of Event Grid topics." lightbox="./media/custom-event-to-function/select-topics.png" :::
 1. On the **Topics** page, select **+ Create** on the command bar.
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ The cURL tool sends HTTP requests. In this article, you use cURL to send the eve
 
 ### Azure CLI
 
-1. In the Azure portal, select **Cloud Shell**. If you're in the PowerShell mode, select **Switch to Bash**.
+1. In the Azure portal, select **Cloud Shell**. If you're in Azure PowerShell mode, select **Switch to Bash**.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/custom-event-quickstart-portal/cloud-shell-bash.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Bash window in Azure Cloud Shell.":::
 1. Set the `topicname` and `resourcegroupname` variables that are used in the commands.
@@ -295,16 +295,16 @@ If you plan to continue working with this event, don't clean up the resources th
 
 1. On the toolbar, select **Delete resource group**.
 
-1. Confirm deletion by entering the name of the resource group, and then select **Delete**.
+1. Confirm the deletion by entering the name of the resource group, and then select **Delete**.
 
-The other resource group that appears on the **Resource groups** page was created and used by the Cloud Shell window. Delete it if you don't plan to use the Cloud Shell window later.
+The Cloud Shell window created and used the other resource group that appears on the **Resource groups** page. Delete this resource group if you don't plan to use the Cloud Shell window later.
 
 ## Related content
 
 Now that you know how to create topics and event subscriptions, learn more about what Event Grid can help you do:
 
 * [About Event Grid](overview.md)
-* [Route Blob Storage events to a custom web endpoint](../storage/blobs/storage-blob-event-quickstart.md?toc=%2fazure%2fevent-grid%2ftoc.json)
+* [Route Azure Blob Storage events to a custom web endpoint](../storage/blobs/storage-blob-event-quickstart.md?toc=%2fazure%2fevent-grid%2ftoc.json)
 * [Monitor virtual machine changes with Azure Event Grid and Logic Apps](monitor-virtual-machine-changes-logic-app.md)
 * [Stream big data into a data warehouse](event-hubs-integration.md)
 
diff --git a/articles/event-grid/custom-event-to-queue-storage.md b/articles/event-grid/custom-event-to-queue-storage.md
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Event Grid topics are Azure resources, and they must be placed in an Azure resou
 
 Create a resource group by using the [az group create](/cli/azure/group#az-group-create) command. The following example creates a resource group named `gridResourceGroup` in the `westus2` location.
 
-Select **Try it** next to the CLI example to open Azure Cloud Shell on the right pane. Select the **Copy** button to copy the command, paste it in the Cloud Shell window, and then select the Enter key to run the command.
+Select **Open Cloud Shell** to open Azure Cloud Shell on the right pane. Select the **Copy** button to copy the command, paste it in Cloud Shell, and then select the Enter key to run the command.
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az group create --name gridResourceGroup --location westus2
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ endpoint=$(az eventgrid topic show --name $topicname -g gridResourceGroup --quer
 key=$(az eventgrid topic key list --name $topicname -g gridResourceGroup --query "key1" --output tsv)
 ```
 
-To simplify this article, you use sample event data to send to the custom topic. Typically, an application or an Azure service would send the event data.
+For the sake of simplicity in this article, you use sample event data to send to the custom topic. Typically, an application or an Azure service would send the event data.
 
 The cURL tool sends HTTP requests. In this article, you use cURL to send the event to the custom topic. The following example sends three events to the Event Grid topic:
 
