Merge pull request #260109 from ElazarK/introduction-fixes

reworded m365 paragraph

Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

articles/defender-for-cloud/defender-for-cloud-introduction.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 11/02/2023
 
 # What is Microsoft Defender for Cloud?
 
-Microsoft Defender for Cloud is a cloud-native application protection platform (CNAPP) with a set of security measures and practices designed to protect cloud-based applications from various cyber threats and vulnerabilities. Defender for Cloud combines the capabilities of:
+Microsoft Defender for Cloud is a cloud-native application protection platform (CNAPP) that is made up of security measures and practices that are designed to protect cloud-based applications from various cyber threats and vulnerabilities. Defender for Cloud combines the capabilities of:
 
 - A development security operations (DevSecOps) solution that unifies security management at the code level across multicloud and multiple-pipeline environments
 - A cloud security posture management (CSPM) solution that surfaces actions that you can take to prevent breaches
@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ Microsoft Defender for Cloud is a cloud-native application protection platform (
 > [!NOTE]
 > For Defender for Cloud pricing information, see the [pricing page](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/details/defender-for-cloud/).
 
-When you [enable Defender for Cloud](connect-azure-subscription.md), you'll automatically gain access to Microsoft 365 Defender.
+When you [enable Defender for Cloud](connect-azure-subscription.md), you automatically gain access to Microsoft 365 Defender.
 
-The Microsoft 365 Defender portal provides richer context to investigations that span cloud resources, devices, and identities. In addition, security teams are able to get the complete picture of an attack, including suspicious and malicious events that happen in their cloud environment, through the immediate correlation of all alerts and incidents, including cloud alerts and incidents.
+The Microsoft 365 Defender portal helps security teams investigate attacks across cloud resources, devices, and identities. Microsoft 365 Defender provides an overview of attacks, including suspicious and malicious events that occur in cloud environments. Microsoft 365 Defender accomplishes this goal by correlating all alerts and incidents, including cloud alerts and incidents.
 
 You can learn more about the [integration between Microsoft Defender for Cloud and Microsoft 365 Defender](concept-integration-365.md).