Acrolinx and minor edits

Author: mattmcinnes

articles/virtual-machines/.openpublishing.redirection.virtual-machines.json

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             "redirect_url": "/azure/virtual-machines/sizes/previous-gen-sizes-list#memory-optimized-previous-gen-sizes",
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+        },
+        {
+            "source_path_from_root": "articles/virtual-machines/dv2-dsv2-series-memory.md",
+            "redirect_url": "/azure/virtual-machines/sizes/memory-optimized/dv2-dsv2-series-memory",
+            "redirect_document_id": true
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     ]

articles/virtual-machines/sizes/general-purpose/bv1-series.md

@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@ ms.reviewer: mattmcinnes
 ---
 
 # Bv1 sizes series
+[!INCLUDE [previous-gen-header](../includes/sizes-previous-gen-header.md)]
 
 [!INCLUDE [bv1-summary](./includes/bv1-series-summary.md)]
 

articles/virtual-machines/sizes/general-purpose/dsv2-series.md

@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@ ms.reviewer: mattmcinnes
 ---
 
 # Dsv2 sizes series
+[!INCLUDE [previous-gen-header](../includes/sizes-previous-gen-header.md)]
 
 [!INCLUDE [dsv2-summary](./includes/dsv2-series-summary.md)]
 

articles/virtual-machines/sizes/general-purpose/dsv3-series.md

@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@ ms.reviewer: mattmcinnes
 ---
 
 # Dsv3 sizes series
+[!INCLUDE [previous-gen-header](../includes/sizes-previous-gen-header.md)]
 
 [!INCLUDE [dsv3-summary](./includes/dsv3-series-summary.md)]
 

articles/virtual-machines/sizes/general-purpose/dv2-series.md

@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@ ms.reviewer: mattmcinnes
 ---
 
 # Dv2 sizes series
+[!INCLUDE [previous-gen-header](../includes/sizes-previous-gen-header.md)]
 
 [!INCLUDE [dv2-summary](./includes/dv2-series-summary.md)]
 

articles/virtual-machines/sizes/general-purpose/dv3-series.md

@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@ ms.reviewer: mattmcinnes
 ---
 
 # Dv3 sizes series
+[!INCLUDE [previous-gen-header](../includes/sizes-previous-gen-header.md)]
 
 [!INCLUDE [dv3-summary](./includes/dv3-series-summary.md)]
 

articles/virtual-machines/sizes/includes/sizes-previous-gen-header.md

@@ -11,4 +11,4 @@
 ms.custom: include file
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 > [!NOTE]
-> These virtual machine sizes are a [**previous generation series**](../previous-gen-sizes-list.md). While older VM sizes are supported until further notice, we recommended using newer generations for improved performance and security. Check out the sizes overview's [**list of VM size families by type**](../overview.md#list-of-vm-size-families-by-type) for a selection of newer sizes.
+> These virtual machine sizes are a [**previous generation series**](../previous-gen-sizes-list.md). While older VM sizes are supported until further notice, we recommended using newer generations for improved performance and security. Check out the sizes overview's [**list of VM size families by type**](../overview.md#list-of-vm-size-families-by-type) for a selection of newer sizes.

articles/virtual-machines/dv2-dsv2-series-memory.md renamed to articles/virtual-machines/sizes/memory-optimized/dv2-dsv2-series-memory.md

@@ -13,6 +13,8 @@ ms.date: 12/21/2022
 
 **Applies to:** :heavy_check_mark: Linux VMs :heavy_check_mark: Windows VMs :heavy_check_mark: Flexible scale sets :heavy_check_mark: Uniform scale sets
 
+[!INCLUDE [previous-gen-header](../includes/sizes-previous-gen-header.md)]
+
 Dv2 and Dsv2-series, a follow-on to the original D-series, features a more powerful CPU. DSv2-series sizes run on the 3rd Generation Intel® Xeon® Platinum 8370C (Ice Lake), the Intel® Xeon® Platinum 8272CL (Cascade Lake), the Intel® Xeon® 8171M 2.1 GHz (Skylake), the Intel® Xeon® E5-2673 v4 2.3 GHz (Broadwell), or the Intel® Xeon® E5-2673 v3 2.4 GHz (Haswell) processors. The Dv2-series has the same memory and disk configurations as the D-series.
 
 ## Dv2-series 11-15

articles/virtual-machines/sizes/memory-optimized/includes/eadsv5-series-summary.md

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 ms.reviewer: mattmcinnes
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-Eadsv5-series utilize AMD's 3rd Generation EPYC™ 7763v processors that can achieve a boosted maximum frequency of 3.5GHz. The Eadsv5-series sizes offer a combination of vCPU, memory and temporary storage that is ideal for memory-intensive enterprise applications. The new VMs have 50% larger local storage, as well as better local disk IOPS for both read and write compared to the Eav4/Easv4 sizes with Gen2 VMs.
-
-Eadsv5-series virtual machines support Standard SSD, Standard HDD, and Premium SSD disk types. You can also attach Ultra Disk storage based on its regional availability. Disk storage is billed separately from virtual machines.
+Eadsv5-series utilize AMD's third Generation EPYC™ 7763v processors that can achieve a boosted maximum frequency of 3.5 GHz. The Eadsv5-series sizes offer a combination of vCPU, memory, and temporary storage that is ideal for memory-intensive enterprise applications. The new VMs have 50% larger local storage, and better local disk IOPS for both read and write compared to the Eav4/Easv4 sizes with Gen2 VMs. Eadsv5-series virtual machines support Standard SSD, Standard HDD, and Premium SSD disk types. You can also attach Ultra Disk storage based on its regional availability. Disk storage is billed separately from virtual machines.

articles/virtual-machines/sizes/memory-optimized/includes/eadsv6-series-summary.md

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 ms.reviewer: mattmcinnes
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-Eadsv6-series VMs utilize AMD's 4th Generation EPYCTM 9004 processors that can achieve a boosted maximum frequency of 3.7GHz. These virtual machines offer up to 96 vCPU and 672 GiB of RAM. The Eadsv6-series sizes offer a combination of vCPU, memory and fast local NVMe temporary storage that is ideal for memory-intensive enterprise applications.  Eadsv6-series virtual machines support Standard SSD, Standard HDD, and Premium SSD disk types. You can also attach Ultra Disk storage based on its regional availability. Disk storage is billed separately from virtual machines. 
+Eadsv6-series VMs utilize AMD's fourth Generation EPYC™ 9004 processors that can achieve a boosted maximum frequency of 3.7 GHz. These virtual machines offer up to 96 vCPU and 672 GiB of RAM. The Eadsv6-series sizes offer a combination of vCPU, memory, and fast local NVMe temporary storage that is ideal for memory-intensive enterprise applications. Eadsv6-series virtual machines support Standard SSD, Standard HDD, and Premium SSD disk types. You can also attach Ultra Disk storage based on its regional availability. Disk storage is billed separately from virtual machines.