Fix typos in working remotely using Azure services doc

Author: rambk

articles/networking/working-remotely-support.md

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ This article describes how you can leverage Azure networking services to enable
 
 Not all networks (for example, the Internet backbone, private WAN, and corporate core networks) are experiencing congestion because of Covid-19. The bottlenecks are commonly reported only in home broadband networks and VPN gateways of on-premises networks of corporations.
 
-Network planners can help ease the bottlenecks and alleviate the network congestion by keeping in mind that different traffic types need different network treatment priorities and by some smart load redirection/distribution. For example, real-time tele-medecine traffic of doctor-patient interaction is of high importance and delay/jitter sensitive. Whereas replication of the same traffic between storages is not delay sensitive. The former traffic must be routed via the most optimal network path with higher quality of service; whereas it is acceptable to route the later traffic via sub-optimal route.
+Network planners can help ease the bottlenecks and alleviate the network congestion by keeping in mind that different traffic types need different network treatment priorities and by some smart load redirection/distribution. For example, real-time tele-medecine traffic of doctor-patient interaction is of high importance and delay/jitter sensitive. Whereas, replication of the same traffic between storages is not delay sensitive. The former traffic must be routed via the most optimal network path with higher quality of service; whereas it is acceptable to route the later traffic via sub-optimal route.
 
 >[!NOTE] 
 >Towards the end of this article, links for Covid-19 preparation articles leveraging different Azure networking features and ecosystems are listed.
@@ -41,9 +41,9 @@ Microsoft network is designed to meet the requirements and provide optimal perfo
 
 Azure scalable VPN gateway support both Point-to-Site (P2S) and Site-to-Site (S2S) VPN connections. Using Azure VPN gateway you can scale your employee's connections to securely access both your Azure deployed resources and your on-premises resources. For more information, see [How to enable users to work remotely](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=2123770). 
 
-If you are using SSTP, the number of concurrent connections would be limited to 128. To overcome this limitation we suggest transitioning to OpenVPN or IKEv2. For more information, see [Transition to OpenVPN protocol or IKEv2 from SSTP](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=2124112).
+If you are using SSTP, the number of concurrent connections would be limited to 128. To overcome the 128 connections limitation, we suggest transitioning to OpenVPN or IKEv2. For more information, see [Transition to OpenVPN protocol or IKEv2 from SSTP](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=2124112).
 
-To access your resources deployed in Azure, remote employees could use Azure Bastion solution, instead of VPN connection. For more information, see [Azure Bastion COVID-19 update](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=2123939) for further details.
+To access your resources deployed in Azure, remote employees could use Azure Bastion solution, instead of VPN connection. For more information, see [Azure Bastion COVID-19 update](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=2123939).
 
 For aggregating large-scale VPN connection, to support any-to-any connections between resources in different on-prem global locations, in different regional hub and spoke virtual networks, and to optimize utilization of multiple home broadband networks you can use Azure Virtual WAN. For more information, see [Struggling to cater to work from home needs? Here is where Azure Virtual WAN can help](https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=2123769).
 
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Following Azure services can be leveraged to enable employees connected to Azure
 
 Azure VNet-peering: If you deploy your resources in more than one Azure regions and/or if you aggregate the connectivity of remotely working employees using multiple virtual networks (VNet), you can establish cross connectivity between the multiple Azure Vnets using virtual network peering. For more information, see [Virtual network peering][VNet-peer].
 
-Azure VPN based solution: For your remote employees connected to Azure via P2S or S2S VPN, you can enable access to on-premises networks by configuring S2S VPN between your on-premises networks and Azure VPN gateway. For more information, see [Create a Site-to-Site connection][S2S].
+Azure VPN-based solution: For your remote employees connected to Azure via P2S or S2S VPN, you can enable access to on-premises networks by configuring S2S VPN between your on-premises networks and Azure VPN gateway. For more information, see [Create a Site-to-Site connection][S2S].
 
 ExpressRoute: Using ExpressRoute private peering you can enable private connectivity between your Azure deployments and infrastructure that's on your premises or in a colocation facility. ExpressRoute, via Microsoft peering, also permits accessing public endpoints in Microsoft from your on-premises network. ExpressRoute connections do not go over the public Internet. They offer secure connectivity, reliability, higher throughput, with lower and consistent latencies than typical connections over the Internet. For more information, see [ExpressRoute overview][ExR]. Leveraging your existing network provider that is already part of our [ExpressRoute partner ecosystem][ExR-eco] can help reduce the time to get large bandwidth connections to Microsoft.  Using [ExpressRoute Direct][ExR-D] you can directly connect your on-premises network to Microsoft backbone. ExpressRoute Direct offers two different line-rate options of dual 10 Gbps or 100 Gbps. 
 
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ Covid-19 is also creating a need for people to go online more. Even those who ar
 
 ## Microsoft support for multi-cloud traffic
 
-Even for your deployments in other public clouds, Microsoft can provide global connectivity. Azure Virtual WAN, VPN or ExpressRoute can help in this regard. To extend connectivity from Azure to other clouds, you can configure S2S VPN between the two clouds. You can also establish connectivity from Azure to other public clouds using ExpressRoute. Oracle cloud is part of ExpressRoute partner ecosystem. So you can [set up a direct interconnection between Azure and Oracle Cloud Infrastructure][Az-OCI]. Most service providers, who are part of ExpressRoute partner ecosystem, also offer private connectivity to other public clouds like Amazon's AWS and Google's GCP. Leveraging these service provider, you can establish private connectivity between your deployments in Azure and AWS/GCP via ExpressRoute.
+Even for your deployments in other public clouds, Microsoft can provide global connectivity. Azure Virtual WAN, VPN or ExpressRoute can help in this regard. To extend connectivity from Azure to other clouds, you can configure S2S VPN between the two clouds. You can also establish connectivity from Azure to other public clouds using ExpressRoute. Oracle cloud is part of ExpressRoute partner ecosystem. So you can [set up a direct interconnection between Azure and Oracle Cloud Infrastructure][Az-OCI]. Most service providers, who are part of ExpressRoute partner ecosystem, also offer private connectivity to other public clouds like Amazon's AWS and Google's GCP. Leveraging these service providers, you can establish private connectivity between your deployments in Azure and AWS/GCP via ExpressRoute.
 
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