edit pass: confidential-computing-solutions

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/confidential-computing/TOC.yml

@@ -3,25 +3,25 @@
 - name: What is confidential computing? # WHAT?
   expanded: true
   items:
-    - name: Real-time protection of data whilst in-use # what keys are where+protect what #p1
+    - name: Real-time protection of data in use # what keys are where+protect what #p1
       href: overview.md # DONE #p1
-    - name: Use-cases and scenarios
+    - name: Use cases and scenarios
       href: use-cases-scenarios.md #DONE, link to the learn page  
     - name: Confidential computing on Azure #DONE, #existing page  - shows the ACC products
       href: overview-azure-products.md 
-    - name: Trusted Execution Environment (TEE) #p1
+    - name: Trusted execution environment (TEE) #p1
       href: trusted-execution-environment.md # new, an easy to understandding of what a TEE is - explain like the black box example
-    - name: Trusted Compute Base (TCB) #p1 #done
+    - name: Trusted compute base (TCB) #p1 #done
       href: trusted-compute-base.md #an easy to understandding of what a TCB is - what it means to be in/out of the TCB 
-    - name: Secret & Key Management #p1
+    - name: Secret & key management #p1
       href: secret-key-management.md # details on AKV and mHSM, and how they're used in the context of Confidential Computing #stubbed
     - name: Attestation #p1 #done # EXISTING, use updated page - explain what attestation is, and why it's important, and give some practical examples of where its used #done
       href: attestation-solutions.md 
  #    - name: Hardware attestation vs. software attestation #p1  new, why HW based attestation is better than the rest
  #      href: hardware-attestation-approach.md 
     - name: Confidential computing solutions
       items:
-      - name: Azure Confidential Clean Rooms
+      - name: Azure Confidential Clean Room
         href: confidential-clean-rooms.md
       - name: Building confidential computing solutions
         href: confidential-computing-solutions.md
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
         href: skr-flow-confidential-containers-azure-container-instance.md
       - name: SKR Policy Examples
         href: skr-policy-examples.md
-  - name: Virtual Machines with App Enclaves
+  - name: Virtual machines with app enclaves
     items:
     - name: App enclaves overview
       href: application-development.md
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@
         href: confidential-containers-on-aks-preview.md
       - name: Confidential containers AKS security policy
         href: confidential-containers-aks-security-policy.md
-      - name: Confidential containers with Azure Container Instances (ACI)
+      - name: Confidential containers with Azure Container Instances
         href: confidential-containers.md#vm-isolated-confidential-containers-on-azure-container-instances-aci
       - name: Confidential containers with Intel SGX enclaves
         href: confidential-containers-enclaves.md
@@ -152,17 +152,17 @@
   - name: Confidential services
     expanded: true
     items:
-    - name: SQL Always Encrypted with Secure Enclaves # x-link to SQL docs #done
+    - name: SQL Always Encrypted with secure enclaves # x-link to SQL docs #done
       href: /sql/relational-databases/security/encryption/configure-always-encrypted-enclaves
-    - name: SQL on Confidential Virtual Machines #done
+    - name: SQL on confidential virtual machines #done
       href: /azure/azure-sql/virtual-machines/windows/sql-vm-create-confidential-vm-how-to
-    - name: Confidential Databricks
+    - name: Confidential VMs for Azure Databricks
       href: https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/azure-confidential-computing/confidential-vm-option-for-azure-databricks-preview/ba-p/3827982#:~:text=Azure%20Databricks%20now%20supports%20using%20Confidential%20computing%20VM,Azure%20Databricks%20workload%20securely%20%26%20confidentially%20on%20Azure
-    - name: Confidential Azure Data Explorer (PREVIEW) #done
+    - name: Confidential VMs for Azure Data Explorer (preview) #done
       href: https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/azure-data-explorer-blog/confidential-vm-option-for-azure-data-explorer-public-preview/ba-p/3827343
-    - name: Azure Virtual Desktop (AVD) Confidential Desktop #done #GA
+    - name: Confidential VMs for Azure Virtual Desktop #done #GA
       href: /azure/virtual-desktop/whats-new#confidential-virtual-machines-and-trusted-launch-virtual-machines-are-now-generally-available-in-azure-virtual-desktop
-    - name: Azure Confidential Ledger #done
+    - name: Azure confidential ledger #done
       href: /azure/confidential-ledger/overview
   - name: Partner Solutions
     items:
@@ -202,9 +202,9 @@
     href: https://confidentialcomputing.io/
   - name: Confidential computing feedback
     href: https://feedback.azure.com/d365community/
-  - name: StackOverflow
+  - name: Stack Overflow
     href: https://stackoverflow.com/questions/tagged/azure-confidential-computing
-  - name: Virtual Machines on Azure
+  - name: Virtual machines in Azure
     href: /azure/virtual-machines/
   - name: Security patch status
     href: https://microsoft-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/p/irakaul/EbZErJv7pXpJv-DJn6oZtwgBPLeTa12q3sbTZFAGU8BfvQ?e=Rs2RxX

articles/confidential-computing/confidential-computing-deployment-models.md

@@ -20,15 +20,15 @@ Under the infrastructure as a service (IaaS) deployment model in cloud computing
 - *Confidential virtual machines (VMs)* based on [AMD SEV-SNP](confidential-vm-overview.md) or [Intel TDX](tdx-confidential-vm-overview.md) for VM isolation
 - *Application enclaves* with [Intel SGX](confidential-computing-enclaves.md) for app isolation
 
-These options provide organizations with differing deployment models depending their trust boundary or desired ease of deployment.
+These options provide organizations with differing deployment models, depending on their trust boundary or desired ease of deployment.
 
 ![Diagram that shows the customer trust boundary of confidential computing technologies.](./media/confidential-computing-deployment-models/cloud-trust-boundary.png)
 
 The IaaS deployment model grants access to scalable computing resources (such as servers, storage, networking, and virtualization) on demand. By adopting an IaaS deployment model, organizations can forgo the process of procuring, configuring, and managing their own infrastructure. Instead, they pay for only the resources that they use. This ability makes IaaS a cost-effective solution.
 
 In the domain of cloud computing, the IaaS deployment model enables businesses to rent individual services from cloud service providers like Azure. Azure assumes responsibility for managing and maintaining the infrastructure so that organizations can concentrate on installing, configuring, and managing their software. Azure also offers supplementary services such as comprehensive billing management, logging, monitoring, storage resiliency, and security.
 
-Scalability is another advantage of the IaaS deployment model in cloud computing. Enterprises can swiftly scale their resources up and down according to their requirements. This flexibility facilitates faster development life cycles, accelerating time to market for new products and ideas. The IaaS deployment model also helps ensure reliability by eliminating single points of failure. Even in the event of a hardware component failure, the service remains available.
+Scalability is another advantage of the IaaS deployment model in cloud computing. Enterprises can swiftly scale their resources up and down according to their requirements. This flexibility facilitates faster development life cycles, accelerating time to market for new products and ideas. The IaaS deployment model also helps ensure reliability by eliminating single points of failure. Even if a hardware component fails, the service remains available.
 
 In summary, the IaaS deployment model in combination with Azure confidential computing offers benefits like cost savings, increased efficiency, innovation opportunities, reliability, and high scalability. It takes advantage of a robust and comprehensive security solution that's designed to protect highly sensitive data.