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Author: brhamilton529

articles/spring-apps/how-to-remote-debugging-app-instance.md

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ az spring app get-remote-debugging-config \
 
 ## Assign an Azure role
 
-To remote debugging an app instance, you must be granted the role *Azure Spring Apps Remote Debugging Role*,which includes the `Microsoft.AppPlatform/Spring/apps/deployments/remotedebugging/action` data action permission.
+To remotely debug an app instance, you must be granted the role `Azure Spring Apps Remote Debugging Role`, which includes the *Microsoft.AppPlatform/Spring/apps/deployments/remotedebugging/action* data action permission.
 
 You can assign an Azure role using the Azure portal or Azure CLI.
 
@@ -90,23 +90,23 @@ You can assign an Azure role using the Azure portal or Azure CLI.
 Use the following steps to assign an Azure role using the Azure portal.
 
 1. Open the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
-1. Open your existing Azure Spring Apps service instance.
-1. Select **Access Control (IAM)** from the left menu.
-1. Select **Add** in the command bar, and then select **Add role assignment**.
+1. Open your Azure Spring Apps service instance.
+1. In the navigation pane, select **Access Control (IAM)**.
+1. Select **Add**, and then select **Add role assignment**.
 
-   :::image type="content" source="media/how-to-remote-debugging-app-instance/add-role-assignment.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Access Control(IAM) page showing the Add role assignment command." lightbox="media/how-to-remote-debugging-app-instance/add-role-assignment.png":::
+   :::image type="content" source="media/how-to-remote-debugging-app-instance/add-role-assignment.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal showing the Access Control (IAM) page for an Azure Spring Apps instance with the Add role assignment option highlighted." lightbox="media/how-to-remote-debugging-app-instance/add-role-assignment.png":::
 
-1. Search for **Azure Spring Apps Remote Debugging Role** in the list, and then select **Next**.
+1. In the **Name** list, search for and select *Azure Spring Apps Remote Debugging Role*, and then select **Next**.
 
-   :::image type="content" source="media/how-to-remote-debugging-app-instance/remote-debugging-role.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Add role assignment page showing the Azure Spring Apps Remote Debugging Role." lightbox="media/how-to-remote-debugging-app-instance/remote-debugging-role.png":::
+   :::image type="content" source="media/how-to-remote-debugging-app-instance/remote-debugging-role.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal showing the Add role assignment page for an Azure Spring Apps instance with the Azure Spring Apps Remote Debugging Role name highlighted." lightbox="media/how-to-remote-debugging-app-instance/remote-debugging-role.png":::
 
-1. Select **Select members**, and then search for your username.
+1. Select **Members**, and then search for and select your username.
 
 1. Select **Review + assign**.
 
 ### [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
-Use the following Azure CLI command to obtain the **Azure Spring Apps Remote Debugging Role** role.
+Use the following command to obtain the Azure Spring Apps Remote Debugging Role.
 
    ```azurecli
    az role assignment create \
@@ -117,7 +117,6 @@ Use the following Azure CLI command to obtain the **Azure Spring Apps Remote Deb
 
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 ## Debug an app instance remotely
 
 You can debug an app instance remotely using the Azure Toolkit for IntelliJ or the Azure Spring Apps for VS Code extension.