Update validate-device-esc.md

Updated based on Acrolinx feedback

Author: sufenfong

articles/certification/validate-device-esc.md

@@ -9,17 +9,15 @@ ms.custom: Edge Secured-core certified devices
 ms.service: certification
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 # Validate your Edge Secured-core certified devices
-The instructions below show how you can check if your device is Edge Secured-core enabled. 
-1.	Go to Windows Icon > Security Settings > Device Security
-[![Image showing Device Security Status.](./media/images/Edge secured core enabled.png)](./media/images/Edge secured core enabled.png#lightbox) 
+To check if your device is Edge Secured-core enabled: 
+1.	Go to Windows Icon > Security Settings > Device Security. The ‘Secured-core PC’ status is available on the top of the screen. If the status is missing, reach out to the device builder for assistance.
+[![Image showing Device Security Status.](./media/images/Edge secured core enabled.png)]
 
-2.	The ‘Secured-core PC’ status will be available on the top of the screen. If this is missing, please reach out to the device builder for assistance.
+2.	Go to "Core isolation details" to ensure that "Memory integrity" is on.
+[![Image showing Core isolation Status.](./media/images/core isolation.png)]
 
-3.	Click on ‘Core isolation details’ to ensure that ‘Memory integrity’ is on.
-[![Image showing Core isolation Status.](./media/images/core isolation.png)](./media/images/core isolation.png#lightbox) 
+3.	Go to "Security processor details" to ensure that the Trusted Platform Module "Specification version" is 2.0
+[![Image showing security processor Status.](./media/images/security processor.png)]
 
-4.	Click on ‘Security processor details’ to ensure that the TPM ‘Specification version’ is 2.0
-[![Image showing security processor Status.](./media/images/security processor.png)](./media/images/security processor.png#lightbox) 
-
-5.	Click on ‘Manage device encryption’ to ensure that ‘Device Encryption’ is on.
-[![Image showing device encryption Status.](./media/images/device encryption.png)](./media/images/device encryption.png#lightbox) 
+4.	Go to "Manage device encryption" to ensure that "Device Encryption" is on.
+[![Image showing device encryption Status.](./media/images/device encryption.png)]