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-title: Azure Cosmos DB – Unified AI Database
-description: Azure Cosmos DB is a global multi-model database and ideal database for AI applications requiring speed, elasticity and availability with native support for NoSQL, relational, and vector data.
+title: Unified AI Database
+titleSuffix: Azure Cosmos DB
+description: Azure Cosmos DB is your ideal database for the era of AI
 author: seesharprun
 ms.author: sidandrews
 ms.reviewer: mjbrown
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-# Azure Cosmos DB – Unified AI Database
+# Database for the era of AI
 
 [!INCLUDE[NoSQL, MongoDB, Cassandra, Gremlin, Table, PostgreSQL](includes/appliesto-nosql-mongodb-cassandra-gremlin-table-postgresql.md)]
 
-> OpenAI relies on Cosmos DB to dynamically scale their ChatGPT service – one of the fastest-growing consumer apps ever – enabling high reliability and low maintenance.” – Satya Nadella, Microsoft chairman and chief executive officer
+> "OpenAI relies on Cosmos DB to dynamically scale their ChatGPT service – one of the fastest-growing consumer apps ever – enabling high reliability and low maintenance." – Satya Nadella, Microsoft chairman and chief executive officer
 
 Today's applications are required to be highly responsive and always online. They must respond in real time to large changes in usage at peak hours, store ever increasing volumes of data, and make this data available to users in milliseconds. To achieve low latency and high availability, instances of these applications need to be deployed in datacenters that are close to their users.
 
 Recently, the surge of AI-powered applications created another layer of complexity, because many of these applications currently integrate a multitude of data stores. For example, some teams built applications that simultaneously connect to MongoDB, Postgres, Redis, and Gremlin. These databases differ in implementation workflow and operational performances, posing extra complexity for scaling applications.
 
-Azure Cosmos DB simplifies and expedites your application development by being the single AI database for your operational data needs, from caching to vector search. It accommodates all your operational data models, including relational, document, vector, key-value, graph, and table.
+Azure Cosmos DB simplifies and expedites your application development by being the single database for your operational data needs, from caching to vector search. It provides the data infrastructure for AI, digital commerce, Internet of Things, booking management, and other types of modern applications. It accommodates all your operational data models, including relational, document, vector, key-value, graph, and table.
 
-Azure Cosmos DB is a fully managed NoSQL, relational, and vector database for AI, digital commerce, Internet of Things, booking management, and other types of modern applications. It offers single-digit millisecond response times, automatic and instant scalability, along with guaranteed speed at any scale. Business continuity is assured with [SLA-backed](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/sla/cosmos-db) availability and enterprise-grade security.
+## An AI database providing industry-leading capabilities... for free
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+Azure Cosmos DB is a fully managed NoSQL, relational, and vector database. It offers single-digit millisecond response times, automatic and instant scalability, along with guaranteed speed at any scale. Business continuity is assured with [SLA-backed](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/sla/cosmos-db) availability and enterprise-grade security.
 
 App development is faster and more productive thanks to:
 
 - Turnkey multi-region data distribution anywhere in the world
 - Open source APIs
 - SDKs for popular languages.
-- AI database functionalities like native vector search or seamless integration with Azure AI Services to support Retrieval Augmented Generation
+- AI database functionalities like integrated vector database or seamless integration with Azure AI Services to support Retrieval Augmented Generation
 
 As a fully managed service, Azure Cosmos DB takes database administration off your hands with automatic management, updates and patching. It also handles capacity management with cost-effective serverless and automatic scaling options that respond to application needs to match capacity with demand.
 
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 > [!TIP]
 > To learn more about Azure Cosmos DB, join us every Thursday at 1PM Pacific on Azure Cosmos DB Live TV. See the [Upcoming session schedule and past episodes](https://gotcosmos.com/tv).
 
-## Azure Cosmos DB is more than an AI database
+## An AI database for more than just AI applications
 
 Besides AI database, Azure Cosmos DB should also be your goto database for web, mobile, gaming, and IoT applications. Azure Cosmos DB is well positioned for solutions that handle massive amounts of data, reads, and writes at a global scale with near-real response times. Azure Cosmos DB's guaranteed high availability, high throughput, low latency, and tunable consistency are huge advantages when building these types of applications. Learn about how Azure Cosmos DB can be used to build IoT and telematics, retail and marketing, gaming and web and mobile applications.