Address review comments for issue 110652

Author: mikeparker104

includes/notification-hubs-enable-apple-push-notifications.md

@@ -68,13 +68,13 @@ To send push notifications to an iOS app, register your application with Apple,
 
 4. In the **Certificates, Identifiers & Profiles** page, under **Identifiers**, locate the App ID line item that you just created, and select its row to display the **Edit your App ID Configuration** screen.
 
-## Creating a Certificate for Notification Hub
-A certificate is required to enable the **Notification Hub** to work with **APNS**. This can be done in one of two ways:
+## Creating a Certificate for Notification Hubs
+A certificate is required to enable the notification hub to work with **APNS**. This can be done in one of two ways:
 
-1. Creating a **.p12** that can be uploaded directly to Notification Hub 
-2. Creating a **.p8** that can be used for [token-based authentication](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/notification-hubs/notification-hubs-push-notification-http2-token-authentification) (*the newer approach*)
+1. Create a **.p12** that can be uploaded directly to Notification Hub.  
+2. Create a **.p8** that can be used for [token-based authentication](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/notification-hubs/notification-hubs-push-notification-http2-token-authentification) (*the newer approach*).
 
-The newer approach has a number of benefits (compared to using certificates) as documented in [Token-based (HTTP/2) authentication for APNS](https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/notification-hubs/notification-hubs-push-notification-http2-token-authentification). However, steps have been provided for both approaches. 
+The newer approach has a number of benefits (compared to using certificates) as documented in [Token-based (HTTP/2) authentication for APNS](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/notification-hubs/notification-hubs-push-notification-http2-token-authentification). However, steps have been provided for both approaches. 
 
 ### OPTION 1: Creating a .p12 push certificate that can be uploaded directly to Notification Hub
 
@@ -122,9 +122,9 @@ The newer approach has a number of benefits (compared to using certificates) as
 
 ### OPTION 2: Creating a .p8 certificate that can be used for token-based authentication
 
-1. Take a note of the following details:
+1. Make note of the following details:
 
-    - **App ID Prefix** (a.k.a. **Team ID**)
+    - **App ID Prefix** (this is a **Team ID**)
     - **Bundle ID**
 
 2. Back in **Certificates, Identifiers & Profiles**, click **Keys**.
@@ -133,15 +133,15 @@ The newer approach has a number of benefits (compared to using certificates) as
    > If you already have a key configured for **APNS**, you can re-use the .p8 certificate that you downloaded right after it was created. If so, you can ignore steps **3** through **5**.
 
 3. Click the **+** button (or the **Create a key** button) to create a new key.
-4. Provide a suitable **Key Name** value, then tick to enable **Apple Push Notifications service (APNs)**, and then click **Continue**, followed by **Register** on the next screen.
+4. Provide a suitable **Key Name** value, then check the **Apple Push Notifications service (APNs)** option, and then click **Continue**, followed by **Register** on the next screen.
 5. Click **Download** and then move the **.p8** file (prefixed with *AuthKey_*) to a secure local directory, then click **Done**.
 
    > [!NOTE] 
-   > Be sure to keep this in a secure place (and save a backup). After downloading your key, it cannot be re-downloaded as the server copy is removed.
+   > Be sure to keep your .p8 file in a secure place (and save a backup). After downloading your key, it cannot be re-downloaded as the server copy is removed.
   
 6. On **Keys**, click on the key that you just created (or an existing key if you have chosen to use that instead).
-7. Take a note of the **Key ID** value.
-8. Open your .p8 certificate in a suitable application of your choice such as [**Visual Studio Code**](https://code.visualstudio.com) then take a note of the key value. This is the value between **-----BEGIN PRIVATE KEY-----** and **-----END PRIVATE KEY-----** .
+7. Make note of the **Key ID** value.
+8. Open your .p8 certificate in a suitable application of your choice such as [**Visual Studio Code**](https://code.visualstudio.com) then make note of the key value. This is the value between **-----BEGIN PRIVATE KEY-----** and **-----END PRIVATE KEY-----** .
 
     ```
     -----BEGIN PRIVATE KEY-----
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ In this section, you create a notification hub and configure authentication with
 
 ## Configure your notification hub with APNs information
 
-Under **Notification Services**, select **Apple (APNS)** then follow the appopriate steps based on the approach you chose previously in the [Creating a Certificate for Notification Hub](#creating-a-certificate-for-notification-hub) section.  
+Under **Notification Services**, select **Apple (APNS)** then follow the appopriate steps based on the approach you chose previously in the [Creating a Certificate for Notification Hubs](#creating-a-certificate-for-notification-hubs) section.  
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > Use the **Production** for **Application Mode** only if you want to send push notifications to users who purchased your app from the store.
@@ -236,4 +236,4 @@ Under **Notification Services**, select **Apple (APNS)** then follow the appopri
 1. Choose **Sandbox**
 1. Select **Save**. 
 
-You've now configured your notification hub with APNs. You also have the connection strings to register your app and send push notifications.
+You've now configured your notification hub with APNs. You also have the connection strings to register your app and send push notifications.