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articles/confidential-computing/overview-azure-products.md

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ And we are actively working on expanding this portfolio based on customer demand
 
 - [Trusted Launch](/azure/virtual-machines/trusted-launch) is available across all Generation 2 VMs bringing hardened security features – secure boot, virtual trusted platform module, and boot integrity monitoring – that protect against boot kits, rootkits, and kernel-level malware.
 
-- [Azure Integrated HSM](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/blog/azureinfrastructureblog/securing-azure-infrastructure-with-silicon-innovation/4293834)]is currently in-development. Azure Integrated HSM is a dedicated hardware security module designed to meet FIPS 140-3 Level 3 security standards, providing robust key protection by enabling encryption and signing keys to remain within the HSM without incurring network access latency. It offers enhanced security with locally deployed HSM services, allowing cryptographic keys to remain isolated from software, including both guest and host software, and supports high volumes of cryptographic requests with minimum latency. Azure Integrated HSM will be installed in every new server in Microsoft's datacenters starting next year to increase protection across Azure's hardware fleet.
+- [Azure Integrated HSM](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/blog/azureinfrastructureblog/securing-azure-infrastructure-with-silicon-innovation/4293834) is currently in-development. Azure Integrated HSM is a dedicated hardware security module designed to meet FIPS 140-3 Level 3 security standards, providing robust key protection by enabling encryption and signing keys to remain within the HSM without incurring network access latency. It offers enhanced security with locally deployed HSM services, allowing cryptographic keys to remain isolated from software, including both guest and host software, and supports high volumes of cryptographic requests with minimum latency. Azure Integrated HSM will be installed in every new server in Microsoft's datacenters starting next year to increase protection across Azure's hardware fleet.
 
  - [Trusted Hardware Identity Management](../security/fundamentals/trusted-hardware-identity-management.md), a service that handles cache management of certificates for all TEEs residing in Azure and provides trusted computing base (TCB) information to enforce a minimum baseline for attestation solutions.
 

articles/confidential-computing/trusted-execution-environment.md

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Azure confidential computing has two offerings: one for lift and shift workloads
 
 The lift and shift offering uses [AMD SEV-SNP (GA)](virtual-machine-options.md) or [Intel TDX (preview)](tdx-confidential-vm-overview.md) to encrypt the entire memory of a VM. This allows customers to migrate their existing workloads to Azure confidential computing without any code changes or performance degradation and supports both virtual machine and container workloads.
 
-The enclave-based offering provides CPU features that allows customer code to use [Intel Software Guard Extensions (SGX)](virtual-machine-solutions-sgx.md) to create a protected memory region called Encrypted Protected Cache (EPC) within a VM. This allows customers to run sensitive workloads with strong data protection and privacy guarantees. Azure Confidential computing launched the first enclave-based offering in 2020. Customer applications need to be specifically developed to take advantage of this data protection model.
+The enclave-based offering provides CPU features that allow customer code to use [Intel Software Guard Extensions (SGX)](virtual-machine-solutions-sgx.md) to create a protected memory region called Encrypted Protected Cache (EPC) within a VM. This allows customers to run sensitive workloads with strong data protection and privacy guarantees. Azure Confidential computing launched the first enclave-based offering in 2020. Customer applications need to be specifically developed to take advantage of this data protection model.
 
 Both of these underlying technologies are used to deliver [confidential IaaS and PaaS services](overview-azure-products.md) in the Azure platform making it simple for customers to adopt confidential computing in their solutions.