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Author: habibaum

articles/migrate/concepts-business-case-calculation.md

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ The Business case capability helps you build a business proposal to understand h
 - Resource utilization based insights to identify servers and workloads that are ideal for cloud.
 - Quick wins for migration and modernization including end of support Windows OS and SQL versions.
 - Long term cost savings by moving from a capital expenditure model to an Operating expenditure model, by paying for only what you use.
-- Sustainability insights show carbon emissions reduce when moving from on-premises to Azure.
+- Sustainability insights indicate a reduction in carbon emissions when moving from on-premises to Azure.
 
 Other key features:
 
@@ -213,9 +213,9 @@ Cost components for running on-premises servers. For TCO calculations, an annual
 
 The **Sustainability Benefits** capability is now embedded in Azure Migrate’s Business Case. It empowers IT, finance, and sustainability teams to:
 
-- **Estimate on-premises emissions (in MtCO₂e)**: It uses a standard method that includes compute, storage, power use, and location-based carbon intensity.
+- **Estimate on-premises emissions (in MtCO₂e)**: It uses a standard method that includes compute, storage, power usage, and location-based carbon intensity.
 - **Compare with Azure emissions**: It uses Microsoft’s verified carbon rate cards for each SKU and region.
-- **Visualize year-on-year reduction**: It visualizes yearly reduction as workloads move from on-premises to Azure.
+- **Visualize year-on-year reduction**: It visualizes annual reductions as workloads move from on-premises to Azure.
 - **Align cross-functional stakeholders**: It bring the stakeholders together by presenting both economic and environmental benefits in one unified view.
 
 The method to calculate these emissions is explained below:

articles/migrate/how-to-build-a-business-case.md

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ The Business case capability helps you build a business proposal to understand h
 - Resource utilization based insights to identify servers and workloads that are ideal for cloud.
 - Quick wins for migration and modernization including end of support Windows OS and SQL versions.
 - Long term cost savings by moving from a capital expenditure model to an Operating expenditure model, by paying for only what you use.
-- Sustainability insights show carbon emissions reduce when moving from on-premises to Azure.
+- Sustainability insights indicate a reduction in carbon emissions when moving from on-premises to Azure.
 - (Optional) Current on-premises vs On-premises with Arc total cost of ownership. 
 - (Optional) the cost savings and other benefits of using Azure security (Microsoft Defender for Cloud) and management (Azure Monitor and Update Management) via Arc, and ESUs enabled by Arc for your on-premises servers.
 

articles/migrate/how-to-view-a-business-case.md

@@ -43,12 +43,15 @@ There are four major reports that you need to review:
 ## Overview report
 
 ### Potential savings
+
 This card covers your potential total cost of ownership savings based on the chosen migration strategy. It includes one year savings from compute, storage, network, labor, and facilities cost (based on assumptions) to help you envision how Azure benefits can turn into cost savings. You can see the insights of different cost categories in the **On-premises vs Azure** report.
 
 ### Estimated on-premises cost
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 It covers the cost of running all the servers scoped in the business case using some of the industry benchmarks. It includes one time cost for some of the capital expenditures like hardware acquisition etc., and annual cost for other components that you might pay as operating expenses like maintenance etc.
 
 ### Estimated Azure cost
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 It covers the cost of all servers and workloads that have been identified as ready for migration/modernization as per the recommendation. Refer to the respective [Azure IaaS](how-to-view-a-business-case.md#azure-iaas-report) and [Azure PaaS](how-to-view-a-business-case.md#azure-paas-report) report for details. The Azure cost is calculated based on the right sized Azure configuration, ideal migration target, and most suitable pricing offers for your workloads. You can override the migration strategy, target location, or other settings in the 'Azure cost' assumptions to see how your savings could change by migrating to Azure.
 
 ### YoY estimated current vs future state cost