fix links and wording

Author: yoninalmsft

articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/getting-started.md

@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ For more information, see:
 
 This procedure describes how to add a Defender for IoT plan for OT networks to an Azure subscription.
 
-**To onboard Defender for IoT plan for OT networks:**
+**To onboard a Defender for IoT plan for OT networks:**
 
 1. In the Azure portal, go to **Defender for IoT** > **Pricing**.
 
@@ -92,21 +92,19 @@ This procedure describes how to add a Defender for IoT plan for OT networks to a
 
     - **Committed devices**. If you selected a monthly or annual commitment, enter the number of assets you'll want to monitor. If you selected a trial, this section doesn't appear as you have a default of 1000 devices.
 
-        For example: 
-        
-        :::image type="content" source="media/how-to-manage-subscriptions/onboard-plan-2.png" alt-text="Screenshot of adding a plan for OT networks to your subscription.":::
+    For example: 
 
-1. Select the **I accept the terms** checkbox, and then select **Save**.
+    :::image type="content" source="media/how-to-manage-subscriptions/onboard-plan-2.png" alt-text="Screenshot of adding a plan for OT networks to your subscription.":::
 
+1. Select **I accept the terms** option, and then select **Save**.
 
-Your new plan is shown under the associated subscription in the **Plans** grid on the **Pricing** page. 
+Your OT networks plan will be shown under the associated subscription in the **Plans** grid. 
 
 ## Add a Defender for IoT plan for Enterprise IoT networks to an Azure subscription
 
-Onboard a Defender for IoT plan for Enterprise IoT networks from Microsoft Defender for Endpoint. For more information, see [Onboard Microsoft Defender for IoT](/microsoft-365/security/defender-endpoint/enable-microsoft-defender-for-iot-integration).
-
-Defender for IoT plans for Enterprise IoT networks are also displayed in the Azure portal, under the associated subscription on the **Defender for IoT** > **Pricing** page.
+Onboard your Defender for IoT plan for Enterprise IoT networks in the Defender for Endpoint portal. For more information, see [Onboard Microsoft Defender for IoT](/microsoft-365/security/defender-endpoint/enable-microsoft-defender-for-iot-integration) in the Defender for Endpoint documentation.
 
+Once you've onboarded a plan for Enterprise IoT networks from Defender for Endpoint, you'll see the plan in Defender for IoT in the Azure portal, under the associated subscription in the **Plans** grid, on the **Defender for IoT** > **Pricing** page.
 
 For more information, see [Manage your subscriptions](how-to-manage-subscriptions.md).
 

articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/how-to-activate-and-set-up-your-on-premises-management-console.md

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ After you sign in for the first time, you need to activate the on-premises manag
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/how-to-manage-sensors-from-the-on-premises-management-console/multiple-subscriptions.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows selecting multiple subscriptions." lightbox="media/how-to-manage-sensors-from-the-on-premises-management-console/multiple-subscriptions.png":::
 
-   If you haven't already onboarded Defender for IoT to a subscription, see [Onboard a Defender for IoT plan for OT networks to a subscription](how-to-manage-subscriptions.md#onboard-a-defender-for-iot-plan-for-ot-networks-to-a-subscription).
+   If you haven't already onboarded Defender for IoT to a subscription, see [Onboard a Defender for IoT plan for OT networks](how-to-manage-subscriptions.md#onboard-a-defender-for-iot-plan-for-ot-networks).
 
    > [!Note]
    > If you delete a subscription, you must upload a new activation file to the on-premises management console that was affiliated with the deleted subscription.
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ After activating an on-premises management console, you'll need to apply new act
 
 |Location  |Activation process  |
 |---------|---------|
-|**On-premises management console**     |  Apply a new activation file on your on-premises management console if you've [modified the number of committed devices](how-to-manage-subscriptions.md#edit-a-plan) in your subscription.      |
+|**On-premises management console**     |  Apply a new activation file on your on-premises management console if you've [modified the number of committed devices](how-to-manage-subscriptions.md#edit-a-plan-for-ot-networks) in your subscription.      |
 |**Cloud-connected sensors**     | Cloud-connected sensors remain activated for as long as your Azure subscription with your Defender for IoT plan is active. <br><br>However, you'll also need to apply a new activation file when [updating your sensor software](update-ot-software.md#download-and-apply-a-new-activation-file) from a legacy version to version 22.2.x.        |
 |  **Locally-managed**   |   Apply a new activation file to locally-managed sensors every year. After a sensor's activation file has expired, the sensor will continue to monitor your network, but you'll see a warning message when signing in to the sensor.     |
 

articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/how-to-manage-subscriptions.md

@@ -65,9 +65,7 @@ We recommend making an initial estimate of your committed devices when onboardin
 
     If you are also a Defender for Endpoint customer, you can identify devices managed by Defender for Endpoint in the Defender for Endpoint **Device inventory** page. In the **Endpoints** tab, filter for devices by **Onboarding status**. For more information, see [Defender for Endpoint Device discovery overview](/microsoft-365/security/defender-endpoint/device-discovery).
 
-After you've set up your network sensor and have full visibility into all devices, you can [edit your plan](#edit-a-plan) to update the number of committed devices as needed.
-
-<!--do we need the words 'to a subscription' in this heading?-->
+After you've set up your network sensor and have full visibility into all devices, you can [Edit a plan](#edit-a-plan-for-ot-networks) to update the number of committed devices as needed.
 
 ## Onboard a Defender for IoT plan for OT networks
 
@@ -91,16 +89,14 @@ This procedure describes how to add a Defender for IoT plan for OT networks to a
 
     - **Committed devices**. If you selected a monthly or annual commitment, enter the number of assets you'll want to monitor. If you selected a trial, this section doesn't appear as you have a default of 1000 devices.
 
+    For example: 
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/how-to-manage-subscriptions/onboard-plan-2.png" alt-text="Screenshot of adding a plan for OT networks to your subscription.":::
 
-1. Select **I accept the terms**, and then select **Save**.
-
+1. Select the **I accept the terms** option, and then select **Save**.
 
 Your OT networks plan will be shown under the associated subscription in the **Plans** grid. 
 
-<!--same here do we need the words 'to a subscription' in this heading?-->
-
 ## Onboard a Defender for IoT plan for Enterprise IoT networks
 
 Onboard your Defender for IoT plan for Enterprise IoT networks in the Defender for Endpoint portal. For more information, see [Onboard Microsoft Defender for IoT](/microsoft-365/security/defender-endpoint/enable-microsoft-defender-for-iot-integration) in the Defender for Endpoint documentation.
@@ -133,14 +129,12 @@ For example, you may have more devices that require monitoring if you're increas
 
 1. Select the **I accept the terms** option, and then select **Save**.
 
-
 Changes to your plan will take effect one hour after confirming the change. Billing for these changes will be reflected at the beginning of the month following confirmation of the change.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > **For an on-premises management console:**
  After any changes are made, you will need to upload a new activation file to your on-premises management console. The activation file reflects the new number of committed devices. For more information, see [Upload an activation file](how-to-manage-the-on-premises-management-console.md#upload-an-activation-file).
 
-
 ## Cancel a Defender for IoT plan from a subscription
 
 You may need to cancel a Defender for IoT plan from your Azure subscription, for example, if you need to work with a new payment entity. Your changes take effect one hour after confirmation. Your upcoming monthly bill will reflect this change.
@@ -169,9 +163,9 @@ Business considerations may require that you apply your existing IoT sensors to
 
 1. Onboard a new plan to the new subscription you want to use. For more information, see: 
 
-    [Onboard a plan for OT networks](#onboard-a-defender-for-iot-plan-for-ot-networks-to-a-subscription) in the Azure portal
+    [Onboard a plan for OT networks](#onboard-a-defender-for-iot-plan-for-ot-networks) in the Azure portal
 
-    [Onboard a plan for Enterprise IoT networks](#onboard-a-defender-for-iot-plan-for-enterprise-iot-networks-to-a-subscription) in Defender for Endpoint
+    [Onboard a plan for Enterprise IoT networks](#onboard-a-defender-for-iot-plan-for-enterprise-iot-networks) in Defender for Endpoint
 
 1. Register your sensors under the new subscription. For more information, see [Set up an Enterprise IoT sensor](tutorial-getting-started-eiot-sensor.md#set-up-an-enterprise-iot-sensor).