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articles/dev-box/quickstart-configure-dev-box-service.md

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 This quickstart describes how to configure the Microsoft Dev Box Preview service by using the Azure portal to enable development teams to self-serve dev boxes.
 
-This quickstart will take you through the process of setting up your Dev Box environment. You'll create a dev center to organize your dev box resources, configure network components to enable dev boxes to connect to your organizational resources, and create a dev box definition that will form the basis of your dev boxes. You'll then create a project and a dev box pool, which work together to help you give access to users who will manage or use the dev boxes.
+This quickstart takes you through the process of setting up your Dev Box environment. You create a dev center to organize your dev box resources, configure network components to enable dev boxes to connect to your organizational resources, and create a dev box definition that will form the basis of your dev boxes. You then create a project and a dev box pool, which work together to help you give access to users who will manage or use the dev boxes.
 
 After you complete this quickstart, you'll have a Dev Box configuration ready for users to create and connect to dev boxes.
 

articles/dev-box/quickstart-connect-to-dev-box-with-remote-desktop-app.md

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 Remote Desktop apps let you use and control a dev box from almost any device. For your desktop or laptop, you can choose to download the Remote Desktop client for Windows Desktop or Microsoft Remote Desktop for Mac. You can also download a Remote Desktop app for your mobile device: Microsoft Remote Desktop for iOS or Microsoft Remote Desktop for Android.
 
-In this quickstart, you'll download a Remote Desktop client (Windows and non-Windows). You'll then use that client to connect to a dev box.
+In this quickstart, you download a Remote Desktop client (Windows and non-Windows). You then use that client to connect to a dev box.
 
 ## Prerequisites