Merge pull request #214273 from wilbug1git1/patch-2

updated some text (esp. Permissions)

Author: BCS2022

articles/defender-for-cloud/quickstart-onboard-github.md

@@ -10,27 +10,27 @@ ms.custom: ignite-2022
 
 With cloud workloads commonly spanning multiple cloud platforms, cloud security services must do the same. Microsoft Defender for Cloud protects workloads in Azure, Amazon Web Services (AWS), Google Cloud Platform (GCP), GitHub, and Azure DevOps (ADO).
 
-To protect your GitHub-based resources, you can connect your GitHub organizations on the environment settings page. This page provides a simple onboarding experience (including auto discovery). 
+To protect your GitHub-based resources, you can connect your GitHub organizations on the environment settings page in Microsoft Defender for Cloud. This page provides a simple onboarding experience (including auto discovery). 
 
 By connecting your GitHub repositories to Defender for Cloud, you'll extend Defender for Cloud's enhanced security features to your GitHub resources. These features include:
 
-- **Defender for Cloud's CSPM features** - Assesses your GitHub resources according to GitHub-specific security recommendations. These recommendations are also included in your secure score. Resources will be assessed for compliance with built-in standards that are specific to DevOps. Defender for Cloud's [asset inventory page](asset-inventory.md) is a multicloud enabled feature that helps you manage your GitHub resources alongside your Azure resources.
+- **Defender for Cloud's Cloud Security Posture Management (CSPM) features** - Assesses your GitHub resources according to GitHub-specific security recommendations. You can also learn about all of the [recommendations for DevOps](recommendations-reference.md) resources. Resources are assessed for compliance with built-in standards that are specific to DevOps. Defender for Cloud's [asset inventory page](asset-inventory.md) is a multicloud enabled feature that helps you manage your GitHub resources alongside your Azure resources.
 
-- **Microsoft Defender for DevOps** - Extends Defender for Cloud's threat detection capabilities and advanced defenses to your GitHub resources.
-
-You can view all of the [recommendations for DevOps](recommendations-reference.md) resources.
+- **Defender for Cloud's Cloud Workload Protection features** - Extends Defender for Cloud's threat detection capabilities and advanced defenses to your GitHub resources.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-
 - An Azure account with Defender for Cloud onboarded. If you don't already have an Azure account [Create an account for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F).
 
+
 ## Availability
 
 | Aspect | Details |
 |--|--|
 | Release state: | Preview <br> The [Azure Preview Supplemental Terms](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/) include other legal terms that apply to Azure features that are in beta, preview, or otherwise not yet released into general availability. |
-| Required roles and permissions: | **Contributor** on the relevant Azure subscription <br> **Security Admin Role** in Defender for Cloud <br> **GitHub Organization Administrator** |
+| Pricing: | For pricing please see the Defender for Cloud [pricing page](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/details/defender-for-cloud/?v=17.23h#pricing).
+| Required permissions: | **- Azure account:** with permissions to sign into Azure portal <br> **- Contributor:** on the Azure subscription where the connector will be created <br> **- Security Admin Role:** in Defender for Cloud <br> **- Organization Administrator:** in GitHub |
+| Regions: | Central US |
 | Clouds: | :::image type="icon" source="media/quickstart-onboard-github/check-yes.png" border="false"::: Commercial clouds <br> :::image type="icon" source="media/quickstart-onboard-github/x-no.png" border="false"::: National (Azure Government, Azure China 21Vianet) |
 
 ## Connect your GitHub account
@@ -49,8 +49,6 @@ You can view all of the [recommendations for DevOps](recommendations-reference.m
 
 1. Enter a name, select your subscription, resource group, and region.
 
-1. Select a **region**, **subscription**, and **resource group** from the drop-down menus.
-
     > [!NOTE] 
     > The subscription will be the location where Defender for DevOps will create and store the GitHub connection.
 
@@ -60,7 +58,8 @@ You can view all of the [recommendations for DevOps](recommendations-reference.m
 
 1. Select **Authorize** to grant your Azure subscription access to your GitHub repositories. Sign in, if necessary, with an account that has permissions to the repositories you want to protect
 
-    :::image type="content" source="media/quickstart-onboard-github/authorize.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows where the authorize button is located on the screen.":::
+    > [!NOTE] 
+    > The authorization will auto-login using the session from your browser tab. After you select Authorize, if you do not see the GitHub organizations you expect to see, check whether you are logged in to MDC in one browser tab and logged in to GitHub in another browser tab. 
 
 1. Select **Install**.
 
@@ -77,7 +76,7 @@ When the process completes, the GitHub connector appears on your Environment set
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/quickstart-onboard-github/github-connector.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Environmental page with the GitHub connector now connected." lightbox="media/quickstart-onboard-github/github-connector.png":::
 
-The Defender for DevOps service automatically discovers the repositories you select and analyzes them for any security issues. The Inventory page populates with your selected repositories, and the Recommendations page shows any security issues related to a selected repository.
+The Defender for DevOps service automatically discovers the repositories you selected and analyzes them for any security issues. The Inventory page populates with your selected repositories, and the Recommendations page shows any security issues related to a selected repository. This can take up to an average of 3 hours.
 
 ## Learn more