Update self-hosted-integration-runtime-proxy-ssis.md

Author: swinarko

articles/data-factory/self-hosted-integration-runtime-proxy-ssis.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: conceptual
 author: swinarko
 ms.author: sawinark
 ms.custom: seo-lt-2019, devx-track-azurepowershell
-ms.date: 07/19/2021
+ms.date: 09/17/2021
 ---
 
 # Configure a self-hosted IR as a proxy for an Azure-SSIS IR in Azure Data Factory
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ Here are examples from our partners, [Theobald Software](https://kb.theobald-sof
 
 ## Enforce TLS 1.2
 
-If you need to use strong cryptography/more secure network protocol (TLS 1.2) and disable older SSL/TLS versions at the same time on your self-hosted IR, you can download and run the *main.cmd* script that can be found in the *CustomSetupScript/UserScenarios/TLS 1.2* folder of our public preview blob container. Using [Azure Storage Explorer](https://storageexplorer.com/), you can connect to our public preview blob container by entering the following SAS URI:
+If you need to access data stores that have been configured to use only the strongest cryptography/most secure network protocol (TLS 1.2), including your Azure Blob Storage for staging, you must enable only TLS 1.2 and disable older SSL/TLS versions at the same time on your self-hosted IR. To do so, you can download and run the *main.cmd* script that we provide in the *CustomSetupScript/UserScenarios/TLS 1.2* folder of our public preview blob container. Using [Azure Storage Explorer](https://storageexplorer.com/), you can connect to our public preview blob container by entering the following SAS URI:
 
 `https://ssisazurefileshare.blob.core.windows.net/publicpreview?sp=rl&st=2020-03-25T04:00:00Z&se=2025-03-25T04:00:00Z&sv=2019-02-02&sr=c&sig=WAD3DATezJjhBCO3ezrQ7TUZ8syEUxZZtGIhhP6Pt4I%3D`