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Author: ProfessorKendrick

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 # What is Neon Serverless Postgres - An Azure Native ISV Service?
 
-Easily provision, manage, and tightly integrate independent software vendor (ISV) software and services on Azure with Azure Native ISV Services. Microsoft and Neon developed this service and manage it together.
+Easily provision, manage, and tightly integrate independent software vendor (ISV) software and services on Azure with Azure Native ISV Services. 
+Microsoft and Neon developed this service and manage it together.
 
 You can find Neon Serverless Postgres - An Azure Native ISV Service  in the Azure portal.
 
-Neon is a cloud-native Postgres solution designed for modern applications. It offers a serverless, fully managed, and scalable Postgres database. Neon's advanced features include autoscaling, scale-to-zero, database branching, instant point-in-time restore, and time travel queries. Neon simplifies database management with seamless integration into your existing workflows, providing a powerful, cost-efficient solution for developers and businesses.  
+Neon is a cloud-native Postgres solution designed for modern applications. It offers a serverless, fully managed, and scalable Postgres database. 
+Neon's advanced features include autoscaling, scale-to-zero, database branching, instant point-in-time restore, and time travel queries. 
+Neon simplifies database management with seamless integration into your existing workflows, providing a powerful, cost-efficient solution for developers and businesses.  
 
-Neon manages the Postgres infrastructure, including database configuration, maintenance, and scaling operations, allowing you to focus on building and optimizing your applications. With its intuitive onboarding process, you can quickly start using Neon's capabilities for your Azure workloads, ensuring your databases are always optimized for performance and reliability.  
+Neon manages the Postgres infrastructure, including database configuration, maintenance, and scaling operations, allowing you to focus on building and optimizing your applications. 
+With its intuitive onboarding process, you can quickly start using Neon's capabilities for your Azure workloads, ensuring your databases are always optimized for performance and reliability.  
 
 Here are the key capabilities provided by the Neon integration:
 
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 ## Find Neon Serverless Postgres - An Azure Native ISV Service
 
-1. Use the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com) to go to Azure Marketplace. Search for _Neon Serverless Postgres - An Azure Native ISV Service_.
+Use the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com) to go to Azure Marketplace. Search for _Neon Serverless Postgres - An Azure Native ISV Service_.
 
-1. Alternatively, you can also find Neon Serverless Postgres - An Azure Native ISV Service in the Azure portal.
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-1. Subscribe to the corresponding service. You see a **Create a Neon organization** page open up.
+Alternatively, you can also find Neon Serverless Postgres - An Azure Native ISV Service in the Azure portal.
 
 ## Next steps