Merge pull request #269358 from MaryMichael-MS/19Mar-FinalPR-PLR

ttorble · web-flow · commit 9abe088540cb · 2024-04-08T11:46:47.000+01:00
Final PR for PLR
diff --git a/articles/migrate/concepts-azure-sap-systems-assessment.md b/articles/migrate/concepts-azure-sap-systems-assessment.md
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 ---
 title: SAP systems discovery support in Azure Migrate
-description: Learn about Azure Migrate and Modernize discovery and assessment support for SAP systems.
+description: Learn about discovery and assessment support for SAP inventory and workloads.
 author: MaryMichael-MS
 ms.author: v-michaelar
 ms.manager: jsuri
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.service: azure-migrate
-ms.date: 03/11/2024
+ms.date: 03/19/2024
 ms.custom: 
 ---
 
diff --git a/articles/migrate/index.yml b/articles/migrate/index.yml
@@ -94,11 +94,11 @@ landingContent:
     linkLists:
       - linkListType: concept
         links:
-          - text: Assess SAP Systems
+          - text: About assessment of SAP systems
             url: ./concepts-azure-sap-systems-assessment.md
       - linkListType: tutorial
         links:
-          - text: Discover SAP Systems
+          - text: Discover SAP systems
             url: ./tutorial-discover-sap-systems.md
   - title: Learn more
     linkLists:
diff --git a/articles/migrate/media/tutorial-assess-sap-systems/availability-settings-edit.png b/articles/migrate/media/tutorial-assess-sap-systems/availability-settings-edit.png
diff --git a/articles/migrate/media/tutorial-discover-sap-systems/create-project-sap.png b/articles/migrate/media/tutorial-discover-sap-systems/create-project-sap.png
diff --git a/articles/migrate/tutorial-assess-sap-systems.md b/articles/migrate/tutorial-assess-sap-systems.md
@@ -1,19 +1,19 @@
 ---
 title: Assess SAP systems for the migration 
-description: Learn how to assess SAP systems with the Azure Migrate Discovery and assessment.
+description: Learn how to assess SAP systems with Azure Migrate.
 author: Vikram1988
 ms.author: vibansa
 ms.manager: abhemraj
 ms.topic: tutorial
 ms.service: azure-migrate
-ms.date: 03/07/2024
+ms.date: 03/19/2024
 ms.custom: 
 
 ---
 
 # Tutorial: Assess SAP systems for migration to Azure (preview)
 
-As part of your migration journey to Azure, assess the appropriate environment on Azure that meets the needs of your on-premises SAP inventory and workloads.
+As part of your migration journey to Azure, assess the appropriate environment on Azure that meets the need of your on-premises SAP inventory and workloads.
 
 This tutorial explains how to perform assessments for your on-premises SAP systems using import option for Discovery. This assessment helps to generate an assessment report, featuring cost, and sizing recommendations based on cost and performance. 
 
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ To create an assessment for the discovered SAP systems, follow these steps:
 1. On **Edit settings** page, do the following:
     1. **Target settings**:
         1. **Primary location**: Select Azure region to which you want to migrate. Azure SAP systems configuration and cost recommendations are based on the location that you specify.
-        1. **is Disaster Recovery (DR) Environment required?**: Select **Yes** to enable Disaster Recovery (DR) for your SAP systems.
+        1. **is Disaster Recovery (DR) environment required?**: Select **Yes** to enable Disaster Recovery (DR) for your SAP systems.
         1. **Disaster Recovery (DR) location**: Select DR location if DR is enabled.
 
             :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-assess-sap-systems/target-settings-edit.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the fields in target settings." lightbox="./media/tutorial-assess-sap-systems/target-settings-edit.png":::
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ To create an assessment for the discovered SAP systems, follow these steps:
     1. **Availability settings**:
         1. **Production**:
             1. **Deployment type**: Select a desired deployment type.
-            1. **Compute availability**: For HA system type, select a desired compute availability option for the assessment.
+            1. **Compute availability**: For High Availability (HA) system type, select a desired compute availability option for the assessment.
         1. **Non-production**:
             1. **Deployment type**: Select a desired deployment type.                       
         
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ To run an assessment, follow these steps:
 1. Select **Create assessment**.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Assessments take approximately 5-10 minutes to complete. We recommend you to wait for 5 to 10 minutes after you select **Create assessment**. Refresh the page and check if the assessment computation is completed.
+> After you select **Create assessment**, wait for 5 to 10 minutes and refresh the page to check if the assessment computation is completed.
 
 ## Review an assessment
 
@@ -107,5 +107,5 @@ To review an assessment, follow these steps:
     :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-assess-sap-systems/sap-on-azure.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows to select SAP on Azure." lightbox="./media/tutorial-assess-sap-systems/sap-on-azure.png":::
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> When you update any of the assessment settings, a new assessment is triggered, which takes a few minutes to complete and update the results.
+> When you update any of the assessment settings, it triggers a new assessment, which takes a few minutes to reflect the updates.
 
diff --git a/articles/migrate/tutorial-discover-sap-systems.md b/articles/migrate/tutorial-discover-sap-systems.md
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 ---
 title: Discover SAP systems with Azure Migrate Discovery and assessment 
-description: Learn how to discover SAP systems with the Azure Migrate Discovery and assessment.
+description: Learn how to discover SAP systems with Azure Migrate.
 author: Vikram1988
 ms.author: vibansa
 ms.manager: abhemraj
 ms.topic: tutorial
 ms.service: azure-migrate
-ms.date: 03/07/2024
+ms.date: 03/19/2024
 ms.custom: 
 
 ---
@@ -42,9 +42,7 @@ To set up a migration project, follow these steps:
     2. **PROJECT DETAILS**:
         1. **Project**: Enter the project name.
         2. **Region**: Select the region in which you want to create the project.
-    
-     > [!Note]
-     > In the **Advanced** configuration, the default connectivity is set to public endpoint. You can also create an Azure Migrate project with private endpoint connectivity. [Learn more.](discover-and-assess-using-private-endpoints.md#create-a-project-with-private-endpoint-connectivity)
+        1. **Advanced**: Expand this option and select a desired **Connectivity method**. <br/>By default, the **Public endpoint** is selected. If you want to create an Azure Migrate project with the private endpoint connectivity, select **Private endpoint**. [Learn more.](discover-and-assess-using-private-endpoints.md#create-a-project-with-private-endpoint-connectivity)
 
 1. Select **Create**.
 
@@ -96,7 +94,7 @@ The following table summarizes the file fields to fill in:
 | SAP Product <sup>*</sup> | SAP application component. <br/>For example, SAP S/4HANA 2022, SAP ERP ENHANCE, and so on. |
 | SAP Product Version | The version of the SAP product. |
 | Operating System <sup>*</sup> | The operating system running on the host server. |
-| Database Type | Optional column and it is not applicable for all SAP Instance Types except **Database**.|
+| Database Type | Optional column and it isn't applicable for all SAP Instance Types except **Database**.|
 | SAPS* | The SAP Application Performance Standard (SAPS) for each server in the SAP system. |
 | CPU | The number of CPUs on the on-premises server. |
 | Max. CPUload[%] | The maximum CPU load in percentage of the on-premises server. Exclude the percentage symbol while you enter this value. |
@@ -108,7 +106,7 @@ The following table summarizes the file fields to fill in:
 | Total Disk Size(GB) <sup>*</sup> | Total disk volume capacity of the on-premises server. Include the disk volume for each individual disk and provide the total sum. |
 | Total Disk IOPS <sup>*</sup> | Total disk Input/Output Operations Per Second (IOPS) of all the disks on the on-premises server. |
 | Source DB Size(GB) <sup>*</sup> | The size of on-premises database. |
-| Target HANA RAM Size(GB) | Optional column and it is **Not Applicable** for all SAP Instance Types except **DB**. Fill this field only when migrating an AnyDb database to SAP S/4HANA and provide the desired target HANA database size. |
+| Target HANA RAM Size(GB) | Optional column and it's **Not Applicable** for all SAP Instance Types except **DB**. Fill this field only when migrating an AnyDb database to SAP S/4HANA and provide the desired target HANA database size. |
 
 <sup>*</sup> These fields are mandatory.
 
@@ -119,7 +117,7 @@ To import SAP systems inventory, follow these steps:
 
 1. On the **Azure Migrate** page, under **Migration goals**, select **Servers, databases and web apps**.
 1. On the **Servers, databases and web apps** page, under **Assessments tools**, from the **Discover** dropdown menu, select **Using import**.
-1. On the **Discover** page, under **Import the file**, upload the .xls file.
+1. On the **Discover** page, under **Import the file**, upload the XLS file.
 1. Select **Import**.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-discover-sap-systems/import-excel.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows how to import SAP inventory." lightbox="./media/tutorial-discover-sap-systems/import-excel.png":::
