[Azure Doc-a-thon]edits to premiumportal

Author: ZarrVenkat

articles/firewall/premium-portal.md

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 # Azure Firewall Premium in the Azure portal
 
 
- Azure Firewall Premium is a next generation firewall with capabilities that are required for highly sensitive and regulated environments. It includes the following features:
+Azure Firewall Premium is an advanced firewall designed for highly sensitive and regulated environments. It offers enhanced security features, including:
 
-- **TLS inspection** - decrypts outbound traffic, processes the data, then encrypts the data and sends it to the destination.
-- **IDPS** - A network intrusion detection and prevention system (IDPS) allows you to monitor network activities for malicious activity, log information about this activity, report it, and optionally attempt to block it.
-- **URL filtering** - extends Azure Firewall’s FQDN filtering capability to consider an entire URL. For example, `www.contoso.com/a/c` instead of `www.contoso.com`.
-- **Web categories** - administrators can allow or deny user access to website categories such as gambling websites, social media websites, and others.
+- **TLS inspection**: Decrypts outbound traffic, inspects it for threats, then re-encrypts the data before sending it to its destination.
+- **IDPS (Intrusion Detection and Prevention System)**: Monitors network activity for malicious behavior, logs and reports incidents, and can block threats in real time.
+- **URL filtering**: Filters traffic based on the full URL path (for example, `www.contoso.com/a/c`), not just the domain name.
+- **Web categories**: Lets administrators control access to websites by category, such as social media, gambling, and more.
 
 For more information, see [Azure Firewall Premium features](premium-features.md).
 
 ## Deploy the firewall
 
-Deploying an Azure Firewall Premium is similar to deploying a standard Azure Firewall:
+Deploying Azure Firewall Premium follows the same steps as deploying a standard Azure Firewall:
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/premium-portal/premium-portal.png" alt-text="portal deployment":::
 
-For **Firewall tier**, you select **Premium** and for **Firewall policy**, you select an existing Premium policy or create a new one.
+For **Firewall tier**, choose **Premium**. For **Firewall policy**, either select an existing Premium policy or create a new one.
 
 ## Configure the Premium policy
 
-Configuring a Premium firewall policy is similar to configuring a Standard firewall policy. With a Premium policy, you can configure the Premium features:
+Configuring a Premium firewall policy is similar to configuring a Standard firewall policy. However, with a Premium policy, you can enable advanced features such as TLS inspection, IDPS, URL filtering, and web categories to enhance your network security.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/premium-portal/premium-policy.png" alt-text="Premium policy deployment":::
 
 ### Rule configuration
-
-When you configure application rules in a Premium policy, you can configure addition Premium features:
+When configuring application rules in a Premium policy, you can enable additional Premium features, such as TLS inspection, IDPS, URL filtering, and web categories.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/premium-portal/premium-application-rule.png" alt-text="Premium rule":::