Merge pull request #228234 from Yvonne-dQ/patch-18

American-Dipper · web-flow · commit 9c7c2e9d4725 · 2023-02-22T14:47:44.000-08:00
Update retirement note
diff --git a/articles/azure-percept/includes/retire.md b/articles/azure-percept/includes/retire.md
@@ -2,15 +2,15 @@
 author: yvonne-dq
 ms.service: azure-percept
 ms.topic: include
-ms.date: 02/08/2023
+ms.date: 02/22/2023
 ms.author: amiyouss
 ROBOTS: NOINDEX
 ---
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > **Retirement of Azure Percept DK:**
 > 
->**Update February 22, 2023**: A firmware update that enables the Vision SoM and Audio SOM to retain their functionality with the DK beyond the retirement date, is now available [here](https://aka.ms/audio_vision_som_update).
+>**Update February 22, 2023**: A firmware update for the Percept DK Vision and Audio accessory components (also known as Vision and Audio SOM) is now available [here](https://aka.ms/audio_vision_som_update), and will enable the accessory components to continue functioning beyond the retirement date.
 >
 >The Azure Percept preview including the Percept DK, Audio Accessory, and associated supporting Azure services will be retired March 30th, 2023.
 >
diff --git a/articles/azure-percept/index.yml b/articles/azure-percept/index.yml
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ### YamlMime:Landing
 title: Azure Percept documentation
-summary: Update February 22, 2023 A firmware update that enables the Vision SoM and Audio SOM to retain their functionality with the DK beyond the retirement date, is now available. The Azure Percept preview including the Percept DK, Audio Accessory, and associated supporting Azure services will be retired March 30th, 2023. Please see the Retirement of Azure Percept DK article for information on the firmware update and about how these changes will affect you.  # < 600 chars
+summary: Update 22 February 2023 - A firmware update for the Percept DK Vision and Audio accessory components (also known as Vision and Audio SOM) is now available [here](https://aka.ms/audio_vision_som_update), and will enable the accessory components to continue functioning beyond the retirement date.  # < 300 chars
 
 
 metadata:
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ metadata:
   ms.topic: landing-page 
   author: yvonne-deq
   ms.author: v-mdequadros
-  ms.date: 02/08/2023
+  ms.date: 02/22/2023
   ROBOTS: NOINDEX 
 
 landingContent:
diff --git a/articles/azure-percept/retirement-of-azure-percept-dk.md b/articles/azure-percept/retirement-of-azure-percept-dk.md
@@ -5,13 +5,13 @@ author: yvonne-dq
 ms.author: amiyouss
 ms.service: azure-percept
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 02/08/2023
+ms.date: 02/22/2023
 ROBOTS: NOINDEX
 ---
 
 # Retirement of Azure Percept DK
 
-**Update February 22, 2023**: A firmware update that enables the Vision SoM and Audio SOM to retain their functionality with the DK beyond the retirement date, is now available [here](https://aka.ms/audio_vision_som_update).
+**Update February 22, 2023**: A firmware update for the Percept DK Vision and Audio accessory components (also known as Vision and Audio SOM) is now available [here](https://aka.ms/audio_vision_som_update), and will enable the accessory components to continue functioning beyond the retirement date.
 
 The Azure Percept preview including the Percept DK, Audio Accessory, and associated supporting Azure services will be retired March 30th, 2023.
  

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`2`	`2`	`author: yvonne-dq`
`3`	`3`	`ms.service: azure-percept`
`4`	`4`	`ms.topic: include`
`5`		`-ms.date: 02/08/2023`
	`5`	`+ms.date: 02/22/2023`
`6`	`6`	`ms.author: amiyouss`
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`8`	`8`	`---`
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`10`	`10`	`> [!IMPORTANT]`
`11`	`11`	`> Retirement of Azure Percept DK:`
`12`	`12`	`>`
`13`		`->Update February 22, 2023: A firmware update that enables the Vision SoM and Audio SOM to retain their functionality with the DK beyond the retirement date, is now available [here](https://aka.ms/audio_vision_som_update).`
	`13`	`+>Update February 22, 2023: A firmware update for the Percept DK Vision and Audio accessory components (also known as Vision and Audio SOM) is now available [here](https://aka.ms/audio_vision_som_update), and will enable the accessory components to continue functioning beyond the retirement date.`
`14`	`14`	`>`
`15`	`15`	`>The Azure Percept preview including the Percept DK, Audio Accessory, and associated supporting Azure services will be retired March 30th, 2023.`
`16`	`16`	`>`