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articles/backup/azure-elastic-storage-area-network-backup-configure.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: Configure backup for Azure Elastic storage area network using Azure portal (preview)
 description: Learn how to configure backup for Azure Elastic storage area network (SAN) (preview) using Azure portal.
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 04/16/2025
+ms.date: 05/15/2025
 author: jyothisuri
 ms.author: jsuri
 ---
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ To configure backup for Azure Elastic SAN, follow these steps:
    >A Backup vault uses a System Assigned Managed Identity to create and manage snapshots.
 
 1. On the **Backup policy** tab, under **Backup policy**, select the policy you want to use for data retention, and then select **Next**.
-   If you want to create a new backup policy, select **Create new**. learn how to [create a backup policy](#create-a-backup-policy-for-azure-elastic-san-preview).
+   If you want to create a new backup policy, select **Create new**. Learn how to [create a backup policy](#create-a-backup-policy-for-azure-elastic-san-preview).
 
    >[!Note]
    >- The default retention duration for the recovery points is **7 days**.
@@ -98,9 +98,9 @@ To configure backup for Azure Elastic SAN, follow these steps:
 
    After you add the backup instances, backup readiness validation starts on the **Configure Backup** pane, under **Datasources** tab. If the required roles are assigned, the  validation succeeds with the **Success** message.
 
-   Validation errors appear if the selected Backup vault's Managed-system Identity (MSI) don't have the **Elastic SAN Snapshot Exporter** and **Contributor** roles  assigned.
+   Validation errors appear if the selected Backup vault's Managed-system Identity (MSI) doesn't have the **Elastic SAN Snapshot Exporter** and **Contributor** roles  assigned.
 
-1. To assign the required roles, on the **Configure Backup** pane, on the**Datasource** tab, select **Assign missing roles**.
+1. To assign the required roles, on the **Configure Backup** pane, on the**Datasources** tab, select **Assign missing roles**.
 
    >[!Note]
    >If you don't have the **Role-Based Access Control Administrator** permissions, the **Assign Missing Roles** option is disabled.
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ To configure backup for Azure Elastic SAN, follow these steps:
 
    After the process starts, the missing access permissions on the Elastic SAN are granted to the backup vault. 
 
-1. When the role assignment is complete, on the **Configure Backup** pane, on the **Datasource** tab, select **Revalidate**.
+1. When the role assignment is complete, on the **Configure Backup** pane, on the **Datasources** tab, select **Revalidate**.
 
    When the validation succeeds, the **Success** message appears.
 

articles/backup/azure-elastic-storage-area-network-backup-manage.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: Manage Azure Elastic SAN backups using Azure portal (preview)
 description: Learn how to manage Azure Elastic Storage Area Network (SAN)  backups (preview) using Azure portal.
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 04/16/2025
+ms.date: 05/15/2025
 author: jyothisuri
 ms.author: jsuri
 ---
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ To stop backups and delete data for an Azure Elastic SAN volume (preview), follo
    >[!Warning]
    >This is a destructive operation. After completing the delete operation, the backed-up data is retained in the **Soft deleted** state for 14 days, and then deletes for ever. After the backups are deleted, the restore operation for the Elastic SAN instance is not possible.
    >
-   >If the immutability is enabled on the vault, the restore points are deleted only after all the recovery points are expired.
+   >If the immutability is enabled on the vault, the restore points are deleted only after all the recovery points have expired.
 
 1. Select **Stop backup**, and then select **Confirm**. 
 1. On the **Delete Backup Data** pane, under **Type the name of Backup Item**, enter the Elastic SAN instance name that you want to delete.

articles/backup/azure-elastic-storage-area-network-backup-overview.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: About Azure Elastic storage area network (preview)
 description: Learn how the Azure Elastic storage area network (Azure Elastic SAN) backup works.
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 04/16/2025
+ms.date: 05/15/2025
 author: jyothisuri
 ms.author: jsuri
 ms.custom: engagement-fy24
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.custom: engagement-fy24
 
 [Azure Backup](backup-overview.md) allows Azure Elastic storage area network (Azure Elastic SAN) volume protection (preview) through the [Backup vault](backup-vault-overview.md), ensuring seamless backup and restoration.
 
-[Azure Elastic SAN](../storage/elastic-san/elastic-san-introduction.md) optimizes workload performance and integrates large-scale databases with mission-critical applications. It simplifies SAN deployment, scaling, management, and configuration while ensuring high availability. It also interoperates with Azure Virtual Machines, Azure VMware Solutions, and Azure Kubernetes Service for versatile compute compatibility.
+[Azure Elastic SAN](../storage/elastic-san/elastic-san-introduction.md) optimizes workload performance and integrates large-scale databases with mission-critical applications. It simplifies SAN deployment, scaling, management, and configuration while ensuring high availability. It also interoperates with Azure Virtual Machines, Azure VMware Solutions, and Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) for versatile compute compatibility.
 
 Azure Backup enables Elastic SAN volume backups via Backup vault. It offers a fully managed solution for scheduling, expiring restore points, and restoring to a new volume. It helps protect against data loss from accidental deletions, ransomware, and application updates.
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Azure Backup enables Elastic SAN volume backups via Backup vault. It offers a fu
 
 Azure Elastic SAN volume protection (preview) includes the following key features:
 
-- **Snapshot Export**: Exports the selected Elastic SAN volume to an independent Managed Disk incremental snapshot (operational tier) at a given point in time.
+- **Snapshot export**: Exports the selected Elastic SAN volume to an independent Managed Disk incremental snapshot (operational tier) at a given point in time.
 - **Storage and resiliency**: Managed Disk incremental snapshot is stored in Locally redundant storage (LRS) resiliency (in LRS-supported regions), independent of the Elastic SAN volume lifecycle.
 - **Restore points**: Supports up to **450 restore points**, with backup frequency ranging from **24 hours** to **4 hours**.
 - **Backup tier**: Supports operational tier; long-term vaulted backups are currently not supported.
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Azure Elastic SAN volume protection (preview) includes the following key feature
 
 ## Backup flow for Azure Elastic SAN (preview)
 
-To perform the backup operation:
+The backup process for Azure Elastic SAN performs the following operations:
 
 1. After an Azure Elastic SAN volume backup is configured, Azure Backup captures a snapshot, extracts changed data to a Managed Disk incremental snapshot (recovery point), and then removes the volume snapshot.
 
@@ -48,15 +48,15 @@ To perform the backup operation:
 
 ## Restore flow for Azure Elastic SAN (preview)
 
-To perform the restore operation, Azure Backup reads the Manged Disk incremental snapshot, and then recovers it as a new volume in an existing Elastic SAN instance using the Elastic SAN import APIs.
+For restore process, Azure Backup reads the Manged Disk incremental snapshot, and then recovers it as a new volume in an existing Elastic SAN instance using the Elastic SAN import APIs.
 
 You can also create a Managed Disk from the Managed Disk incremental snapshot directly from the Azure portal.
 
 ## Pricing
 
 The solution consists of the following cost components:
 
-- **Azure Backup protected instance fee for the Elastic SAN Volume**: No charges during preview.
+- **Azure Backup protected instance fee for the Elastic SAN Volume**: No charges are applicable during preview.
 - **Managed Disk incremental snapshot fee**: Charges apply as per existing Azure rates for data stored in the operational tier of managed disk incremental snapshots during preview.
 
 ## Next steps

articles/backup/azure-elastic-storage-area-network-backup-restore.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: Restore Azure Elastic SAN using Azure portal (preview)
 description: Learn how to restore Azure Elastic Storage Area Network (SAN)  backups (preview) using Azure portal.
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 04/16/2025
+ms.date: 05/15/2025
 author: jyothisuri
 ms.author: jsuri
 ---
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ To  restore Azure Elastic SAN  backups, follow these steps:
 
 1. On the **Restore parameters** tab, select **Validate** to ensure that the required permissions to perform the restore are assigned to the backed-up Elastic SAN volume. 
 
-   Validation errors appear if the selected Backup vault's Managed-system Identity (MSI) don't have the **Elastic SAN Volume Importer** and **Reader (on the snapshot resource group)** roles assigned.
+   Validation errors appear if the selected Backup vault's Managed-system Identity (MSI) doesn't have the **Elastic SAN Volume Importer** and **Reader (on the snapshot resource group)** roles assigned.
 
 1. To assign the required roles, select **Assign missing roles**.
 

articles/backup/azure-elastic-storage-area-network-backup-support-matrix.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: Support matrix for Azure Elastic SAN Backup (preview)
 description: Learn about the  regional availability, supported scenarios, and limitations for backups of Azure Elastic SAN (preview).
 ms.topic: reference
-ms.date: 04/16/2025
+ms.date: 05/15/2025
 ms.custom: references_regions, engagement-fy24
 ms.service: azure-backup
 author: jyothisuri

articles/backup/index.yml

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ metadata:
   ms.topic: landing-page
   author: jyothisuri
   ms.author: jsuri
-  ms.date: 04/17/2025
+  ms.date: 05/15/2025
 # linkListType: architecture | concept | deploy | download | get-started | how-to-guide | learn | overview | quickstart | reference | tutorial | video | whats-new
 
 landingContent:

articles/backup/whats-new.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: What's new in the Azure Backup service
 description: Learn about the new features in the Azure Backup service.
 ms.topic: release-notes
-ms.date: 04/16/2025
+ms.date: 05/15/2025
 ms.service: azure-backup
 ms.custom:
   - ignite-2023