Merge pull request #237827 from rwestMSFT/rw-0511-fix-109126

Refresh SQL Edge tutorial page and fix issue 109126

Author: v-shils

articles/azure-sql-edge/tutorial-renewable-energy-demo.md

@@ -1,28 +1,31 @@
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 title: Deploying Azure SQL Edge on turbines in a Contoso wind farm
-description: In this tutorial, you'll use Azure SQL Edge for wake-detection on the turbines in a Contoso wind farm.
+description: This tutorial shows you how to use Azure SQL Edge for wake-detection on the turbines in a Contoso wind farm.
 author: kendalvandyke
 ms.author: kendalv
 ms.reviewer: randolphwest
-ms.date: 12/18/2020
+ms.date: 05/11/2023
 ms.service: sql-edge
 ms.topic: tutorial
-services: sql-edge
 ---
-# Using Azure SQL Edge to build smarter renewable resources
+# Use Azure SQL Edge to build smarter renewable resources
 
-This Azure SQL Edge demo is based on a Contoso Renewable Energy, a wind turbine farm that uses SQL DB edge for data processing onboard the generator. 
+The [Wind Turbine Demo](https://github.com/microsoft/sql-server-samples/tree/master/samples/demos/azure-sql-edge-demos/Wind%20Turbine%20Demo) for Azure SQL Edge is based on Contoso Renewable Energy, a wind turbine farm that uses SQL Edge for data processing onboard the generator.
 
-This demo will walk you through resolving an alert being raised because of wind turbulence being detected at the device. You will train a model and deploy it to SQL DB Edge that will correct the detected wind wake and ultimately optimize power output.
+This demo walks you through resolving an alert being raised because of wind turbulence being detected at the device. You'll train a model and deploy it to SQL Edge, which corrects the detected wind wake and ultimately optimizes power output.
 
 Azure SQL Edge - renewable Energy demo video on Channel 9:
+
+<br />
+
 > [!VIDEO https://learn.microsoft.com/shows/Data-Exposed/Azure-SQL-Edge-Demo-Renewable-Energy/player]
 
-## Setting up the demo on your local computer
-Git will be used to copy all files from the demo to your local computer. 
+## Set up the demo on your local computer
+
+Git is used to copy all files from the demo to your local computer.
 
-1. Install git from [here](https://git-scm.com/download).
-2. Open a command prompt and navigate to a folder where the repo should be downloaded. 
-3. Issue the command https://github.com/microsoft/sql-server-samples.git.
-4. Navigate to **'sql-server-samples\samples\demos\azure-sql-edge-demos\Wind Turbine Demo'** in the location where the repository is cloned.
-5. Follow the instructions in README.md to set up the demo environment and execute the demo.
+1. Install [Git](https://git-scm.com/download).
+1. Open a command prompt and navigate to a folder where the repo should be downloaded.
+1. Issue the command `git clone https://github.com/microsoft/sql-server-samples.git`.
+1. Navigate to `sql-server-samples\samples\demos\azure-sql-edge-demos\Wind Turbine Demo` in the location where the repository is cloned.
+1. Follow the instructions in `README.md` to set up the demo environment and execute the demo.