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articles/azure-functions/functions-versions.md

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ zone_pivot_groups: programming-languages-set-functions
 | 1.x | GA | Recommended only for C# apps that must use .NET Framework and only supports development in the Azure portal, Azure Stack Hub portal, or locally on Windows computers. This version is in maintenance mode, with enhancements provided only in later versions. |
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> Beginning on December 3, 2022, function apps running on versions 2.x and 3.x of the Azure Functions runtime can no longer be supported. Before that time, please test, verify, and migrate your function apps to version 4.x of the Functions runtime. For more information, see [Migrating from 3.x to 4.x](#migrating-from-3x-to-4x). After the deadline, function apps can be created and existing apps continue to run, but they won't be eligible for new features, security patches, performance optimizations, and support until you upgrade them to version 4.x.
+> Beginning on December 3, 2022, function apps running on versions 2.x and 3.x of the Azure Functions runtime can no longer be supported. Before that time, please test, verify, and migrate your function apps to version 4.x of the Functions runtime. For more information, see [Migrating from 3.x to 4.x](#migrating-from-3x-to-4x). After the deadline, function apps can be created and deployed, and existing apps continue to run. However, your apps won't be eligible for new features, security patches, performance optimizations, and support until you upgrade them to version 4.x.
 > 
 >End of support for these runtime versions is due to the ending of support for .NET Core 3.1, which is required by these older runtime versions. This requirement affects all Azure Functions runtime languages.  
 >Functions version 1.x is still supported for C# function apps that require the .NET Framework. Preview support is now available in Functions 4.x to [run C# functions on .NET Framework 4.8](dotnet-isolated-process-guide.md#supported-versions). 

articles/azure-functions/language-support-policy.md

@@ -11,15 +11,15 @@ This article explains Azure functions language runtime support policy.
 
 ## Retirement process
 
-Azure Functions runtime is built around various components, including operating systems, the Azure Functions host, and language-specific workers. To maintain full support coverages for function apps, Azure Functions support aligns with end-of-life support for a given language. To acheive this, Functions implements a phased reduction in support as programming language versions reach their end-of-life dates. For most language versions, the retirement date coincides with the community end-of-life date.
+Azure Functions runtime is built around various components, including operating systems, the Azure Functions host, and language-specific workers. To maintain full-support coverages for function apps, Functions support aligns with end-of-life support for a given language. To achieve this, Functions implements a phased reduction in support as programming language versions reach their end-of-life dates. For most language versions, the retirement date coincides with the community end-of-life date.
 
 ### Notification phase
 
 We'll send notification emails to function app users about upcoming language version retirements. The notifications will be at least one year before the date of retirement. Upon the notification, you should prepare to upgrade the language version that your functions apps use to a supported version.
 
 ### Retirement phase
 
-After the language end-of-life date, function apps that use retired language versions can still be created and continue to run on the platform, however they won't be eligible for new features, security patches, and performance optimizations.
+After the language end-of-life date, function apps that use retired language versions can still be created and deployed, and they continue to run on the platform. However your apps won't be eligible for new features, security patches, and performance optimizations until you upgrade them to a supported language version.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 >You're highly encouraged to upgrade the language version of your affected function apps to a supported version.