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Co-authored-by: Yechiel Levin &lt;61194355+yelevin@users.noreply.github.com&gt;
diff --git a/articles/sentinel/ama-migrate.md b/articles/sentinel/ama-migrate.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 04/03/2024
 ms.author: yelevin
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to migrate from the Log Analytics Agent to the Azure Monitor Agent so that I can leverage improved performance and new features in Microsoft Sentinel.
+#Customer intent: As a security operations manager, I want to migrate from the Log Analytics Agent to the Azure Monitor Agent so that I can maintain support for my Microsoft Sentinel deployment, while benefiting (sp?) from improved performance and new features.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/api-dcr-reference.md b/articles/sentinel/api-dcr-reference.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ ms.date: 03/01/2024
 ms.service: microsoft-sentinel
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to create Data Collection Rules (DCRs) using API requests so that I can automate the ingestion of Syslog and CEF messages into Azure Monitor.
+#Customer intent: As a security engineer, I want to create Data Collection Rules (DCRs) using API requests so that I can automate the ingestion of supported log types into Microsoft Sentinel.
 
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 # API request examples for creating Data Collection Rules (DCRs)
diff --git a/articles/sentinel/cef-syslog-ama-overview.md b/articles/sentinel/cef-syslog-ama-overview.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ ms.custom: linux-related-content
 ms.date: 07/12/2024
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to collect Syslog and CEF messages from various devices using a centralized log forwarder, so that I can efficiently monitor and respond to security threats.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to collect Syslog and CEF messages from various devices, either directly or using a centralized log forwarder, so that I can efficiently monitor and respond to security threats.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/collaborate-in-microsoft-teams.md b/articles/sentinel/collaborate-in-microsoft-teams.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 03/30/2022
 ms.author: yelevin
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to integrate Microsoft Sentinel with Microsoft Teams so that I can collaborate efficiently on incident investigations with my team.
+#Customer intent: As a security analyst, I want to take advantage of Microsoft Teams' integration with Microsoft Sentinel to collaborate efficiently on incident investigations with my team.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/configure-connector-login-detection.md b/articles/sentinel/configure-connector-login-detection.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 02/24/2023
 ms.author: yelevin
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to configure anomalous RDP login detection so that I can identify and respond to potential security threats in my network.
+#Customer intent: As a security engineer, I want to enable the detection of anomalous RDP logins, so that analysts can identify and respond to the resulting potential security threats in my network.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/configure-data-transformation.md b/articles/sentinel/configure-data-transformation.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 02/27/2022
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to configure ingestion-time data transformation and custom log ingestion so that I can control, filter, and enrich data before it is ingested into Microsoft Sentinel.
+#Customer intent: As a security engineer, I want to configure ingestion-time data transformation and custom log ingestion so that I can control, filter, and enrich data before it is ingested into Microsoft Sentinel.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/configure-fusion-rules.md b/articles/sentinel/configure-fusion-rules.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 01/30/2022
 ms.author: yelevin
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to configure multistage attack detection rules so that I can automatically identify and respond to complex threats with high accuracy.
+#Customer intent: As a security engineer, I want to configure multistage attack detection rules so that analysts can more easily identify and respond to complex multistage threats with high accuracy.
 
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 # Configure multistage attack detection (Fusion) rules in Microsoft Sentinel
diff --git a/articles/sentinel/connect-aws.md b/articles/sentinel/connect-aws.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 01/31/2024
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to connect AWS service logs to Microsoft Sentinel so that I can centralize log management and enhance threat detection capabilities.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to connect AWS service logs to Microsoft Sentinel so that analysts can centralize log management and enhance threat detection capabilities.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/connect-log-forwarder.md b/articles/sentinel/connect-log-forwarder.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 06/18/2024
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to deploy a log forwarder to ingest Syslog and CEF logs so that I can centralize and analyze security data in Microsoft Sentinel.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to deploy a log forwarder to ingest Syslog, CEF, and custom logs so that analysts can centralize and analyze security data in Microsoft Sentinel.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/connect-services-diagnostic-setting-based.md b/articles/sentinel/connect-services-diagnostic-setting-based.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.date: 02/24/2023
 ms.author: yelevin
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to connect Microsoft Sentinel to various data sources using diagnostic settings-based connections so that I can ingest and monitor logs and metrics for enhanced threat detection and response.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to ingest diagnostic data from Azure services to Microsoft Sentinel so that I can monitor logs for enhanced threat detection and response.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/create-analytics-rule-from-template.md b/articles/sentinel/create-analytics-rule-from-template.md
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ appliesto:
 ms.collection: usx-security
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to create scheduled analytics rules from templates so that I can efficiently monitor and detect anomalies in my data.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to create scheduled analytics rules from templates so that I can efficiently monitor and detect anomalies in my data.
 
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 # Create scheduled analytics rules from templates
diff --git a/articles/sentinel/create-analytics-rules.md b/articles/sentinel/create-analytics-rules.md
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ appliesto:
 ms.collection: usx-security
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to create custom scheduled analytics rules using Kusto Query Language so that I can detect and respond to unusual or suspicious activities in my digital estate.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to create custom scheduled analytics rules using Kusto Query Language so that analysts can detect and respond to unusual or suspicious activities in my digital estate.
 
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 # Create a scheduled analytics rule from scratch
diff --git a/articles/sentinel/create-nrt-rules.md b/articles/sentinel/create-nrt-rules.md
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ appliesto:
 ms.collection: usx-security
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to configure near-real-time detection analytics rules so that I can achieve up-to-the-minute threat detection and automate responses in my security operations.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to configure near-real-time detection analytics rules so that analysts can achieve up-to-the-minute threat detection and automate responses in my security operations.
 
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 # Work with near-real-time (NRT) detection analytics rules in Microsoft Sentinel
diff --git a/articles/sentinel/data-transformation.md b/articles/sentinel/data-transformation.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.date: 02/27/2022
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to customize data ingestion and transformation in Microsoft Sentinel so that I can filter, enrich, and secure log data efficiently.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to customize data ingestion and transformation in Microsoft Sentinel so that analysts can filter, enrich, and secure log data efficiently.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/scheduled-rules-overview.md b/articles/sentinel/scheduled-rules-overview.md
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ appliesto:
 ms.collection: usx-security
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to create and customize scheduled analytics rules using Kusto queries so that I can detect and respond to security threats effectively.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to create and customize scheduled analytics rules using Kusto queries so that analysts can detect and respond to security threats effectively.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/sentinel-service-limits.md b/articles/sentinel/sentinel-service-limits.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ ms.author: yelevin
 ms.service: microsoft-sentinel
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to understand the service limits of Microsoft Sentinel so that I can effectively manage and optimize my security monitoring and incident response activities.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security architect, I want to understand the service limits of Microsoft Sentinel so that I can effectively manage and optimize my organization's security monitoring and incident response activities.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/threat-detection.md b/articles/sentinel/threat-detection.md
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ appliesto:
 ms.collection: usx-security
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to customize analytics rule templates in Microsoft Sentinel so that I can efficiently detect and respond to security threats across my organization.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to customize analytics rule templates in Microsoft Sentinel so that analysts can efficiently detect and respond to security threats across my organization.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/troubleshooting-cef-syslog.md b/articles/sentinel/troubleshooting-cef-syslog.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ ms.custom: linux-related-content
 ms.date: 06/18/2024
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to troubleshoot CEF or Syslog data connectors so that I can ensure my security logs are properly ingested and monitored for potential threats.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security engineer, I want to troubleshoot CEF or Syslog data connectors so that I can ensure my security logs are properly ingested and monitored for potential threats.
 
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diff --git a/articles/sentinel/whats-new.md b/articles/sentinel/whats-new.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.topic: concept-article
 ms.date: 09/09/2024
 
 
-#Customer intent: [AI]As a security analyst, I want to stay updated on the latest features and enhancements in Microsoft Sentinel so that I can effectively manage and optimize my organization's security posture.
+#Customer intent: [AI]As a security team member, I want to stay updated on the latest features and enhancements in Microsoft Sentinel so that I can effectively manage and optimize my organization's security posture.
 
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