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Author: ktoliver

articles/active-directory/devices/overview.md

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ To get a device in Azure AD, you have multiple options:
 ![Devices displayed in Azure AD Devices blade](./media/overview/azure-active-directory-devices-all-devices.png)
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> The Hybrid State is not just the state of the device, but it also requires a valid Azure AD user before the Hybrid state is valid.
+> A hybrid state refers to more than just the state of a device. For a hybrid state to be valid, a valid Azure AD user also is required.
 
 ## Device management
 
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ Registering and joining devices to Azure AD gives your users Seamless Sign-on (S
 > [!NOTE]
 > Device-based Conditional Access policies require either hybrid Azure AD joined devices or compliant Azure AD joined or Azure AD registered devices.
 
-The primary refresh token (PRT) is needed for SSO. The PRT contains information about the device. If you have any device-based Conditional Access policy set on an application, without the PRT, access will be denied as Hybrid Conditional Access policies checks require a Hybrid state device and a valid user currently signed-in.
+The primary refresh token (PRT) contains information about the device and is required for SSO. If you have a device-based Conditional Access policy set on an application, without the PRT, access is denied. Hybrid Conditional Access policies require a hybrid state device and a valid user who is signed in.
 
 Devices that are Azure AD joined or hybrid Azure AD joined benefit from SSO to your organization's on-premises resources as well as cloud resources. More information can be found in the article, [How SSO to on-premises resources works on Azure AD joined devices](azuread-join-sso.md).