Merge pull request #218751 from roygara/fixGrammer

Fixing grammar

Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

articles/storage/elastic-san/elastic-san-introduction.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: An overview of Azure Elastic SAN (preview), a service that enables
 author: roygara
 ms.service: storage
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 10/12/2022
+ms.date: 11/17/2022
 ms.author: rogarana
 ms.subservice: elastic-san
 ms.custom: ignite-2022
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Elastic SAN simplifies deploying and managing storage at scale through grouping
 
 ### Performance
 
-With an Elastic SAN, it's possible to scale your performance up to millions of IOPS, with double-digit GB/s throughput, and have single-digit millisecond latency. The performance of a SAN is shared across all of its volumes, as long as the SAN's caps aren't exceeded and the volumes are large enough, each volume can scale up to 64,000 IOPs. Elastic SAN volumes connect to your clients using the [iSCSI](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ISCSI) protocol, which allows them to bypass the IOPS limit of an Azure VM and offers high throughput limits.
+With an Elastic SAN, it's possible to scale your performance up to millions of IOPS, with double-digit GB/s throughput, and have single-digit millisecond latency. The performance of a SAN is shared across all of its volumes. As long as the SAN's caps aren't exceeded and the volumes are large enough, each volume can scale up to 64,000 IOPs. Elastic SAN volumes connect to your clients using the [iSCSI](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ISCSI) protocol, which allows them to bypass the IOPS limit of an Azure VM and offers high throughput limits.
 
 ### Cost optimization and consolidation
 

articles/storage/elastic-san/elastic-san-planning.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Understand planning for an Azure Elastic SAN deployment. Learn abou
 author: roygara
 ms.service: storage
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 10/12/2022
+ms.date: 11/17/2022
 ms.author: rogarana
 ms.subservice: elastic-san
 ms.custom: ignite-2022
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Using the same example of a 100 TiB SAN that has 250,000 IOPS and 4,000 MB/s. Sa
 
 ## Networking
 
-In Preview, Elastic SAN supports public endpoint from selected virtual network, restricting access to specified virtual networks. You configure volume groups to allow network access only from specific vnet subnets. Once a volume group is configured to allow access from a subnet, this configuration is inherited by all volumes belonging to the volume group. You can then mount volumes from any clients in the subnet, with the [internet Small Computer Systems Interface](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ISCSI) (iSCSI) protocol. Note that you need to first enable [service point for Azure Storage] (../../virtual-network/virtual-network-service-endpoints-overview.md) in your virtual network before setting up the network rule on volume group. 
+In Preview, Elastic SAN supports public endpoint from selected virtual network, restricting access to specified virtual networks. You configure volume groups to allow network access only from specific vnet subnets. Once a volume group is configured to allow access from a subnet, this configuration is inherited by all volumes belonging to the volume group. You can then mount volumes from any clients in the subnet, with the [internet Small Computer Systems Interface](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ISCSI) (iSCSI) protocol. You must enable [service endpoint for Azure Storage](../../virtual-network/virtual-network-service-endpoints-overview.md) in your virtual network before setting up the network rule on volume group.
 
 ## Redundancy