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articles/devtest-labs/devtest-lab-add-vm.md

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ This article describes how to create Azure virtual machines (VMs) in Azure DevTe
    - **Use a saved secret**: Select this checkbox to use a secret from Azure Key Vault instead of a password to access the VM. If you select this option, under **Secret**, select the secret to use from the dropdown list. For more information, see [Store secrets in a key vault](devtest-lab-store-secrets-in-key-vault.md). 
    - **Password**: If you don't use a secret, enter a VM password between 8 and 123 characters long.
    - **Save as default password**: Select this checkbox to save the password in the Key Vault associated with the lab.
-   - **Virtual machine size**: Keep the default value for the base, or select **Change Size** to select a different size. For more information about default VM sizes, see [Default VM sizes](#vm-sizes).
+   - **Virtual machine size**: Keep the default value for the base, or select **Change Size** to select a different size. For more information about default VM sizes, see [Default VM sizes](#default-vm-sizes).
    - **Allow hibernation**: Select this option to enable hibernation for the virtual machine.
      >[!NOTE]
      >If you enable hibernation, you must also select **Public IP** in **Advanced Settings**. **Private** and **Shared** IPs aren't supported if hibernation is enabled.
@@ -85,7 +85,9 @@ To add or configure artifacts during VM creation:
 <a name="configure-optional-advanced-settings"></a>
 ## Configure other settings
 
-1. Optionally, select the **Advanced Settings** tab on the **Create lab resource** screen, and change any of the following values:
+After you configure basic settings and artifacts, you can optionally configure advanced settings and tags for your VM.
+
+1. Optionally, select **Next: Advanced Settings** or the **Advanced Settings** tab on the **Create lab resource** screen, and change any of the following values:
 
    - **Virtual network**: Select a network from the dropdown list. For more information, see [Add a virtual network](devtest-lab-configure-vnet.md).
    - **Subnet Selector**: If necessary, select a different subnet from the dropdown list.
@@ -97,15 +99,15 @@ To add or configure artifacts during VM creation:
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/devtest-lab-add-vm/portal-lab-vm-advanced-settings.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the VM Advanced Settings page.":::
 
-1. Optionally, select the **Tags** tab to apply tags to the VM.
+1. Optionally, select **Next: Tags** or the **Tags** tab to apply tags to the VM.
 
 ## Complete VM deployment
 
-After you configure all settings, select **Create** at the bottom of the screen. During VM deployment, you can select the **Notifications** icon at the top of the screen to see progress. Creating a VM takes a while.
+After you configure all settings, select **Create** at the bottom of the **Create lab resource** screen. During VM deployment, you can select the **Notifications** icon at the top of the screen to see progress. Creating a VM takes a while.
 
 When the deployment is complete, if you kept yourself as VM owner, the VM appears under **My virtual machines** on the lab **Overview** page. To connect to the VM, select it from the list, and then select **Connect** on the VM's **Overview** page.
 
-Or, if you chose **Make this machine claimable** during VM creation, select **Claimable virtual machines** in the left navigation to see the VM listed on the **Claimable virtual machines** page. Select **Refresh** if your VM doesn't appear. To take ownership of a VM in the claimable list, see [Use a claimable VM](devtest-lab-add-claimable-vm.md#use-a-claimable-vm).
+Or, if you chose **Make this machine claimable** during VM creation, select **Claimable virtual machines** in the left navigation to see the VM listed on the **Claimable virtual machines** page. Select **Refresh** if the VM doesn't appear. To take ownership of a VM in the claimable list, see [Use a claimable VM](devtest-lab-add-claimable-vm.md#use-a-claimable-vm).
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/devtest-lab-add-vm/portal-lab-vm-creation-status.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the lab VM creation status page.":::
 

articles/devtest-labs/devtest-lab-attach-detach-data-disk.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ This article explains how to attach and detach a lab virtual machine (VM) data d
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-To attach or detach a data disk, you need to own the lab VM, and the VM must be running. The VM size determines how many data disks you can attach. For more information, see [Sizes for virtual machines](/azure/virtual-machines/sizes).
+To attach or detach a data disk, you must have ownership permissions on the lab VM, and the VM must be running. The VM size determines how many data disks you can attach. For more information, see [Sizes for virtual machines](/azure/virtual-machines/sizes).
 
 ## Create and attach a new data disk
 

articles/devtest-labs/media/devtest-lab-add-vm/portal-lab-vm-basic-settings.png

@@ -26,12 +26,12 @@ This article shows how you can use PowerShell or Azure CLI commands to script or
 
 # [Azure PowerShell](#tab/PowerShell)
 
-- Owner access to a [lab VM](devtest-lab-add-vm.md) in DevTest Labs.
+- Admin access to a [lab VM](devtest-lab-add-vm.md) in DevTest Labs.
 - Access to Azure PowerShell. You can [use the Azure Cloud Shell PowerShell environment](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart), or [install Azure PowerShell](/powershell/azure/install-azure-powershell) to use locally. If necessary, run `Update-Module -Name Az` to update your local installation.
 
 # [Azure CLI](#tab/CLI)
 
-- Owner access to a [lab VM](devtest-lab-add-vm.md) in DevTest Labs.
+- Admin access to a [lab VM](devtest-lab-add-vm.md) in DevTest Labs.
 - Access to Azure CLI. You can [use the Azure Cloud Shell Bash environment](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart), or [install Azure CLI](/cli/azure/install-azure-cli) to use locally in a Bash or Windows environment.
 
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