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Author: habibaum

articles/migrate/concepts-business-case-calculation.md

@@ -213,10 +213,10 @@ Cost components for running on-premises servers. For TCO calculations, an annual
 
 The **Sustainability Benefits** capability is now embedded in Azure Migrate’s Business Case. It empowers IT, finance, and sustainability teams to:
 
-- **Estimate on-premises emissions (in MtCO₂e)**: It uses a standard method that includes compute, storage, power usage, and location-based carbon intensity.
-- **Compare against Azure emissions**: It uses Microsoft’s verified carbon rate cards for each SKU and region.
-- **Visualize year-on-year reduction**: It visualizes annual reductions as workloads move from on-premises to Azure.
-- **Align cross-functional stakeholders**: It bring the stakeholders together by presenting both economic and environmental benefits in one unified view.
+- **Estimate on-premises emissions (in MtCO₂e)**, using a standardized methodology considering compute, storage, power usage, and geographic carbon intensity.
+- **Compare against Azure emissions**, calculated using Microsoft’s internally validated carbon rate cards for each SKU and region.
+- **Visualize year-on-year reduction**, as workloads migrate from on-premises to Azure. 
+- **Align cross-functional stakeholders**, by presenting both **econimic** and **environmental** benefits in one unified view.
 
 The method to calculate these emissions is explained below:
 

articles/migrate/how-to-view-a-business-case.md

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ There are four major reports that you need to review:
     - Potential savings (TCO).
     - Estimated year on year cashflow savings based on the estimated migration completed that year.
     - Savings from unique Azure benefits like Azure Hybrid Benefit.
-    - Migrating to Azure reduces carbon emissions.
+    - Carbon emissions reductions by moving to Azure.
     - Savings from Security and Management capabilities.
     - Discovery insights covering the scope of the business case.
     - Support status of the operating system and database licenses.