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 ## Oracle as a DBaaS on Azure 
 
-Oracle migration to Azure IaaS involves more effort of managing infrastructure (VM, Storage, network, backup, etc.) beyond traditional database administration. These other expectations require Azure cloud skills that aren't part of database administration team or managing infrastructure can interfere with defined database operations. In such scenarios, a better option is to use the Oracle Database as a service on Azure (DBaaS). This offering Azure cloud Oracle database that provides access to a database without a need to deploy and manage the underlying infrastructure. DBaaS is delivered as a managed database service, which means that the provider takes care of patching, upgrading, and backing up the database.  [Tessell](https://www.tessell.com/) primarily provides Oracle database as service – PaaS, which is also called as “DBaaS’ – Database as service on Azure. Tessell's DBaaS platform is available for [coselling with Microsoft](https://www.tessell.com/blogs/azure-tessell-ip-co-sell), delivering the full power of Tessell on Azure. Joint Tessell-Microsoft customers can apply Tessell's advanced cloud-based database-as-a-service (DBaaS) platform with the expertise and support of Microsoft's sales and technical teams. Tessell’s DBaaS is Azure-native service with the following benefits: 
+Oracle migration to Azure IaaS involves more than the  traditional database administration responsibility. It requires Azure cloud skills that aren't part of database administration team or managing infrastructure can interfere with defined database operations. In such scenarios, a better option is to use the Oracle Database as a service on Azure (DBaaS). The DBaaS provide access to a database without a requirement to deploy and manage the underlying infrastructure. DBaaS is delivered as a managed database service, which means that the provider takes care of patching, upgrading, and backing up the database.  [Tessell](https://www.tessell.com/) primarily provides Oracle database as service – PaaS, also called as 'DBaaS – Database as service on Azure. Tessell's DBaaS platform is available for [coselling with Microsoft](https://www.tessell.com/blogs/azure-tessell-ip-co-sell), delivering the full power of Tessell on Azure. Joint Tessell-Microsoft customers can apply Tessell's advanced cloud-based database-as-a-service (DBaaS) platform with the expertise and support of Microsoft's sales and technical teams. Tessell’s DBaaS is Azure-native service with the following benefits: 
 
 - Oracle self-service, DevOps integration, and production operations without having to deploy and manage the underlying infrastructure.  
 - Running on Azure high-performance-compute (HPC, LSV3 series), the most demanding production Oracle workloads can be brought to Azure.  
 - Support for all Oracle database management packs.  
 
 ## Lightbits performance for Oracle on Azure VMs  
 
-The Lightbits Cloud Data Platform provides scalable and cost-efficient high-performance storage that is easy to consume on Azure. It removes the bottlenecks associated with native storage on the public cloud, such as scalable performance and consistently low latency. Removing these bottlenecks offers rich data services and resiliency that enterprises have come to rely on. It can deliver up to 1 million IOPS/volume and up to 3 million IOPs per VM. Lightbits cluster can scale vertically and horizontally. Lightbits support different sizes of Lsv3 and Lasv3 VMs for their clusters. 
+The Lightbits Cloud Data Platform provides scalable and cost-efficient high-performance storage that is easy to consume on Azure. It removes the bottlenecks associated with native storage on the public cloud, such as scalable performance and consistently low latency. Removing these bottlenecks offers rich data services and resiliency that enterprises rely on. It can deliver up to 1 million IOPS/volume and up to 3 million IOPs per VM. Lightbits cluster can scale vertically and horizontally. Lightbits support different sizes of Lsv3 and Lasv3 VMs for their clusters. 
 
 For other options, see L32sv3/L32asv3: 7.68 TB, L48sv3/L48asv3: 11.52 TB, L64sv3/L64asv3: 15.36 TB, L80sv3/L80asv3: 19.20 TB.