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articles/backup/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server-about.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ ms.author: v-abhmallick
 
 [!INCLUDE [Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server backup advisory](../../includes/backup-mysql-flexible-server-advisory.md)]
 
-If you have an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server, you can extend the retention of backups beyond the current limit of 35 days with the built-in operational-tier backup capability of Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server. Azure Backup and Azure database services together allow you to build an enterprise-class backup solution for Azure Database for MySQL flexible servers that retains backups for *up to 10 years*.
+When you use an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server, you can extend the retention of backups beyond the current limit of 35 days with the built-in operational-tier backup capability of Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server. Azure Backup and Azure database services together allow you to build an enterprise-class backup solution for Azure Database for MySQL flexible servers that retains backups for *up to 10 years*.
 
 Extending backup retention from 35 days to 10 years can help your organization meet compliance and regulatory requirements. The backups are copied to an isolated storage environment outside your tenant and subscription to help protect against ransomware attacks. In addition to long-term retention, this feature enhances backup resiliency by protecting the source data from different levels of data loss, such as accidental deletions and ransomware.
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ You can recover this backup in your specified storage containers, which you can
 
 To back up an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server:
 
-1. Grant permissions to the Azure Backup vault MSI on the target Azure Resource Manager resource (Azure Database for MySQL flexible server), to establish access and control.
+1. Grant permissions to the Backup vault MSI on the target Azure Resource Manager resource (Azure Database for MySQL flexible server), to establish access and control.
 2. Configure backup policies to specify the scheduling, retention, and other parameters.
 
 After the configuration is complete:
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ You incur charges for:
 
 - **Protected instance fee**: When you configure a backup for an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server, a protected instance is created. Azure Backup for MySQL - Flexible Server charges a protected instance fee according to the size of the database (in gigabytes) on a per-unit (250-GB) basis.
 
-- **Backup storage fee**: Azure Backup for MySQL flexible servers store backups in the Standard vault tier. Restore points stored in the Standard vault tier are charged a separate backup storage fee according to the total data stored (in gigabytes) and the redundancy type enabled on the Azure Backup vault.
+- **Backup storage fee**: Azure Backup for MySQL flexible servers store backups in the Standard vault tier. Restore points stored in the Standard vault tier are charged a separate backup storage fee according to the total data stored (in gigabytes) and the redundancy type enabled on the Backup vault.
 
 ## Related content
 

articles/backup/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server-restore.md

@@ -17,15 +17,15 @@ Learn more about the [supported scenarios, considerations, and limitations](back
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-Backup data is stored in the Azure Backup vault as a blob within the Microsoft tenant. During a restore operation, the backup data is copied from one storage account to another across tenants. Ensure that the target storage account for the restore has the `AllowCrossTenantReplication` property set to `true`.
+Backup data is stored in the Backup vault as a blob within the Microsoft tenant. During a restore operation, the backup data is copied from one storage account to another across tenants. Ensure that the target storage account for the restore has the `AllowCrossTenantReplication` property set to `true`.
 
 ## Restore an Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server database
 
 To restore the database, follow these steps:
 
-1. Go to the Azure Backup vault, and then select **Backup instances**.
+1. Go to the Backup vault, and then select **Backup instances**.
 
-2. Select the Azure Database for MySQL flexible server, and then select **Restore**.
+2. Select **Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server (preview)** > **Restore**.
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server-restore/restore-parameters.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows how to go to a backup instance." lightbox="./media/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server-restore/restore-parameters.png":::
 

articles/backup/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server-support-matrix.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-title: Support Matrix for Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server Retention for Long Term by Using Azure Backup
+title: Support Matrix for Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server Retention for the Long Term by Using Azure Backup
 description: This article provides a summary of support settings and limitations when you're backing up Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server.
 ms.topic: reference
 ms.date: 11/21/2024
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Long-term retention for Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server (preview) is
 
 ## Supported scenarios
 
-- This feature backs up the entire Azure Database for MySQL flexible server to an Azure Backup vault.
+- This feature backs up the entire Azure Database for MySQL flexible server to a Backup vault.
 - You can recover the Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server long-term retention (LTR) data in the specified storage containers that you use to rebuild the Azure Database for MySQL flexible server. You can also restore this data as a new Azure Database for MySQL flexible server with database native tools.
 
 ## Limitations

articles/backup/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server-troubleshoot.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
-title: Troubleshoot Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server Backup Using Azure Backup
+title: Troubleshoot Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server Backup by Using Azure Backup
 description: Get troubleshooting information for backing up Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Server.
 ms.topic: troubleshooting
 ms.date: 11/21/2024

articles/backup/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 ---
-title: Back Up an Azure Database for MySQL Flexible Server by using Azure Backup
+title: Back Up an Azure Database for MySQL Flexible Server by Using Azure Backup
 description: Learn how to back up an Azure Database for MySQL flexible server.
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 11/21/2024
@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ Learn more about the [supported scenarios, considerations, and limitations](back
 
 To create a backup policy, follow these steps:
 
-1. [Create an Azure Backup vault](create-manage-backup-vault.md#create-a-backup-vault).
+1. [Create a Backup vault](create-manage-backup-vault.md#create-a-backup-vault).
 
-2. Go to the Azure Backup vault, and then select **+Backup** to open the **Configure backup** pane.
+2. Go to the Backup vault, and then select **+Backup** to open the **Configure backup** pane.
 
 3. Under **Backup policy**, select **Create new**.
 
@@ -63,13 +63,13 @@ You can configure a backup for the entire Azure Database for MySQL - Flexible Se
 
 To configure a backup, follow these steps:
 
-1. In the Azure portal, go to the Azure Backup vault, and then select **+Backup**.
+1. In the Azure portal, go to the Backup vault, and then select **+Backup**.
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server/configure-backup.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows how to start a backup configuration." lightbox="./media/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server/configure-backup.png":::
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server/configure-backup-basic.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Basics tab on the pane for configuring a backup." lightbox="./media/backup-azure-mysql-flexible-server/configure-backup-basic.png":::
 
-   Alternatively, go to **Backup center** >  **+Backup**.
+   Alternatively, go to **Business Continuity Center** >  **+Backup**.
 
 2. Select the backup policy that you created, which defines the backup schedule and the retention duration.
 
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ To configure a backup, follow these steps:
 
 To trigger an on-demand backup (a backup that's not in the schedule specified in the policy), follow these steps:
 
-1. Go to the Azure Backup vault, select **Backup instances**, and then select the backup instance for which you want to take a backup.
+1. Go to the Backup vault, select **Backup instances**, and then select the backup instance for which you want to take a backup.
 
 2. Select **Backup Now**.