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Author: BrianMouncer

articles/cognitive-services/Speech-Service/includes/release-notes/release-notes-sdk.md

@@ -9,17 +9,17 @@ ms.author: eur
 ### Speech SDK 1.24.1: October 2022 release
 
 #### New features
-- Published Embedded packages to allow preview of embedded engines.
+- Published packages for the Embedded Speech preview. See https://aka.ms/embedded-speech for more information.
 
 #### Bug fixes
 
 - **All programing languages**
     - Fix embedded TTS crash when voice font is not supported
-    - Fix stopSpeaking() cannot stop playback on Linux
+    - Fix stopSpeaking() cannot stop playback on Linux ([#1686](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/cognitive-services-speech-sdk/issues/1686))
 - **JavaScript SDK**
-    - Fixed regression in how conversation stranslator gated audio.
+    - Fixed regression in how conversation transcriber gated audio.
 - **Java**
-    - published updated POM and JavaDocs files to maven central to enable docs pipeline to udate online refference docs.
+    - Temporarily Published updated POM and Javadocs files to Maven Central to enable the docs pipeline to update online reference docs.
 - **Python**
     - Fix regression where python speak_text(ssml) returns void.