Fixing broken link and some phrasing.

Author: RoseHJM

articles/deployment-environments/how-to-create-access-environments.md

@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ Code: EnvironmentNotFound
 Message: The environment resource was not found.
 ```
 
-To resolve the issue, assign the correct permissions: [Give project access to the development team](quickstart-create-and-configure-projects.md#give-project-access-to-the-development-team).
+To resolve the issue, assign the correct permissions: [Give access to the development team](quickstart-create-and-configure-projects.md#give-access-to-the-development-team).
 
 ## Access an environment
 

articles/deployment-environments/quickstart-create-and-configure-devcenter.md

@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ To attach a system-assigned managed identity to your dev center:
 
 ### Assign roles for the dev center managed identity
 
-Before you can create environment types, you must give the managed identity that represents your dev center access to the subscriptions where you configure the [project environment types](concept-environments-key-concepts.md#project-environment-types). You must also give the managed identity access to the key vault secret that stores your GitHub PAT. 
+The managed identity that represents your dev center requires access to the subscriptions where you configure the [project environment types](concept-environments-key-concepts.md#project-environment-types), and to the key vault secret that stores your GitHub PAT. 
 
 1.	Navigate to your dev center.
 1.  On the left menu under Settings, select **Identity**.