Fixing the Acrolinx for Correctness score

Author: Padmalathas

articles/cyclecloud/release-notes/ccws/2024.12.18.md

@@ -29,21 +29,21 @@ Azure CycleCloud Workspace for Slurm is updated regularly. Stay up to date with
 
 This release contains the following new features:
 
-* Usage of CycleCloud Marketplace Image 8.7.0
-* Removal of AlmaLinux 8.7 and addition of AlmaLinux 8.10 for Scheduler, Login, and compute nodes
-* Automatic collection of CycleCloud and Slurm logs for compute nodes
+* Using ycleCloud Marketplace Image 8.7.0
+* Removing of AlmaLinux 8.7 and addition of AlmaLinux 8.10 for Scheduler, Login, and compute nodes
+* Automatically collecting CycleCloud and Slurm logs for compute nodes
 * Allowing the use of custom images not stored in a compute gallery
 * Changing of default networking option to autocreate
 * Updating Slurm version
-* VNet size driven by the Lustre cluster size
-* Role assignments GUID is now based on CycleCloud VM PrincipalID which allow redeploying in the same Resource Group multiple times
+* Driving VNet size by the Lustre cluster size
+* Basing Role Assignments GUID on CycleCloud VM PrincipalID, allowing redeploying in the same Resource Group multiple times
 * Creating a Resource Group is now the default setting
 * Removing the need of a SAS key when accessing the storage account used for storing CycleCloud project files from nodes
-* Sched disk persistence
+* Persisting Sched disk
 
 ## Known issues in this release
 
 - Before this release, role assignments must first be cleaned up when deploying on an existing environment.
-- When removing the CycleCloud VM, orphan role assignments remain at the subscription level. These can be listed with `unknown` as the role assignee and need to be explicitly removed.
-- **Azure US Gov Only**: Marketplace deployment validation failed due to an incorrect API version. To mitigate this, [How to deploy a CycleCloud Workspace for Slurm environment using the CLI](../../how-to/ccws/deploy-with-cli.md).
+- When removing the CycleCloud VM, orphan role assignments remain at the subscription level. These role assignees can be listed with `unknown` as the role assignee and need to be explicitly removed.
+- **Azure US Gov Only**: Marketplace deployment validation failed due to an incorrect API version. To mitigate this issue, refer [How to deploy a CycleCloud Workspace for Slurm environment using the CLI](../../how-to/ccws/deploy-with-cli.md).