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Author: prtyag

articles/virtual-machines/workloads/sap/hana-large-instance-enable-kdump.md

@@ -20,33 +20,34 @@ ms.custom: H1Hack27Feb2017
 
 # Enable Kdump service
 This document describes the details on how to enable Kdump service on Azure HANA Large
-Instance(**Type 1 and Type 2**)
+Instance(**Type I and Type II**)
 
 ## Supported SKUs
 |  Hana Large Instance Type   |  OS Vendor   |  OS Package Version   |  SKU	       |
 |-----------------------------|--------------|-----------------------|-------------|
-|   Type 1                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP3         |  S224m      |
-|   Type 1                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP4         |  S224m      |
-|   Type 1                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP2         |  S72m       |
-|   Type 1                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP3         |  S72m       |
-|   Type 1                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP3         |  S96        |
-|   Type 1                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP4         |  S96        |
-|   Type 2                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP3         |  S384       |
-|   Type 2                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP3         |  S576m      |
+|   Type I                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP3         |  S224m      |
+|   Type I                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP4         |  S224m      |
+|   Type I                    |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP2         |  S72m       |
+|   Type II                   |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP3         |  S72m       |
+|   Type II                   |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP3         |  S96        |
+|   Type II                   |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP4         |  S96        |
+|   Type II                   |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP3         |  S384       |
+|   Type II                   |  SuSE        |   SLES 12 SP3         |  S576m      |
 
 ## Pre-requisites
-- Kdump service uses `/var/crash` directory to write logs, make sure the partition corresponds to this directory has sufficient
+- Kdump service uses `/var/crash` directory to write dumps, make sure the partition corresponds to this directory has sufficient
 space to accommodate logs.
 
 ## Setup details
 - Script to enable Kdump can be found [here](https://github.com/Azure/sap-hana/blob/master/tools/enable-kdump.sh)
 - Run this script on HANA Large Instance using the below command
 ```
-bash enable-kdump.sh
+sudo bash enable-kdump.sh
 ```
 - Reboot the system to apply changes.
 
 ## Test Kdump
+**Note**: Below operation will trigger a kernel crash and system reboot.
 - Trigger a kernel crash
 ```
 echo 1 > /proc/sys/kernel/sysrq
@@ -56,11 +57,10 @@ echo c > /proc/sysrq-trigger
 - If the `/var/crash` has directory with current date, then the Kdump is successfully enabled.
 
 ## Support issue
-If the script fails with an error or Kdump isn't enabled, raise a ticket with Microsoft Operations team by opening a support ticket.
-
-Include in ticket:
+If the script fails with an error or Kdump isn't enabled, raise service request with Microsoft support team with following details.
 
 * HLI subscription ID.
-* server name.
-* OS name
-* OS version
+* Server name
+* OS vendor
+* OS version
+* Kernel version

articles/virtual-machines/workloads/sap/toc.yml

@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
       href: ha-setup-with-stonith.md
     - name: OS Backup for Type II SKUs
       href: os-backup-type-ii-skus.md
-    - name: Kdump enable for HANA Large Instances
+    - name: Enable Kdump for HANA Large Instances
       href: hana-large-instance-enable-kdump.md
     - name: OS Upgrade for HANA Large Instances
       href: os-upgrade-hana-large-instance.md