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Author: Heidilohr

articles/virtual-desktop/includes/include-whats-new-client-ios-ipados.md

@@ -19,14 +19,14 @@ The following table lists the current versions available for the public and beta
 *Published: December 18, 2023*
 
 >[!NOTE]
-> Due to certain things that came up during development, there is no version 10.5.3.
+> There is no version 10.5.3.
 
 In this release, we've made the following changes:
 
 - Fixed theming update issues on iOS 17.
 - Addressed pop-up sheet layout bugs on iOS 17.
 - Sorted out daylight savings time issues for time zone redirection scenarios.
-- Repositioned the search box so that it's no longer clipped by the Dynamic Island.
+- Repositioned the search box so that it's no longer clipped by the Dynamic Island on iPhone.
 - Added support for camera redirection on an iPhone or iPad in portrait orientation. 
 - Resolved an issue where when you go to **Settings** > **Display** to view the resolution list, the list didn't update when you changed the orientation.
 - Added support for USB-C on iPhone 15 to enable native resolutions when you connect the device to an external display.