Merge pull request #205288 from khdownie/kendownie071922

Tweaking Files intro

Author: GitHubber17

articles/storage/files/storage-files-introduction.md

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 # What is Azure Files?
-Azure Files offers fully managed file shares in the cloud that are accessible via the industry standard [Server Message Block (SMB) protocol](/windows/win32/fileio/microsoft-smb-protocol-and-cifs-protocol-overview) or [Network File System (NFS) protocol](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Network_File_System). Azure Files file shares can be mounted concurrently by cloud or on-premises deployments. SMB Azure file shares are accessible from Windows, Linux, and macOS clients. NFS Azure Files shares are accessible from Linux or macOS clients. Additionally, SMB Azure file shares can be cached on Windows Servers with [Azure File Sync](../file-sync/file-sync-introduction.md) for fast access near where the data is being used.
+Azure Files offers fully managed file shares in the cloud that are accessible via the industry standard [Server Message Block (SMB) protocol](/windows/win32/fileio/microsoft-smb-protocol-and-cifs-protocol-overview), [Network File System (NFS) protocol](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Network_File_System), and [Azure Files REST API](/rest/api/storageservices/file-service-rest-api). Azure file shares can be mounted concurrently by cloud or on-premises deployments. SMB Azure file shares are accessible from Windows, Linux, and macOS clients. NFS Azure file shares are accessible from Linux or macOS clients. Additionally, SMB Azure file shares can be cached on Windows servers with [Azure File Sync](../file-sync/file-sync-introduction.md) for fast access near where the data is being used.
 
 Here are some videos on the common use cases of Azure Files:
 * [Replace your file server with a serverless Azure file share](https://sec.ch9.ms/ch9/3358/0addac01-3606-4e30-ad7b-f195f3ab3358/ITOpsTalkAzureFiles_high.mp4)
@@ -20,15 +20,15 @@ Here are some videos on the common use cases of Azure Files:
 Azure file shares can be used to:
 
 * **Replace or supplement on-premises file servers**:  
-    Azure Files can be used to completely replace or supplement traditional on-premises file servers or NAS devices. Popular operating systems such as Windows, macOS, and Linux can directly mount Azure file shares wherever they are in the world. SMB Azure file shares can also be replicated with Azure File Sync to Windows Servers, either on-premises or in the cloud, for performance and distributed caching of the data where it's being used. With the recent release of [Azure Files AD Authentication](storage-files-active-directory-overview.md), SMB Azure file shares can continue to work with AD hosted on-premises for access control. 
+    Azure Files can be used to replace or supplement traditional on-premises file servers or network-attached storage (NAS) devices. Popular operating systems such as Windows, macOS, and Linux can directly mount Azure file shares wherever they are in the world. SMB Azure file shares can also be replicated with Azure File Sync to Windows servers, either on-premises or in the cloud, for performance and distributed caching of the data. With [Azure Files AD Authentication](storage-files-active-directory-overview.md), SMB Azure file shares can work with Active Directory Domain Services (AD DS) hosted on-premises for access control. 
 
 * **"Lift and shift" applications**:  
     Azure Files makes it easy to "lift and shift" applications to the cloud that expect a file share to store file application or user data. Azure Files enables both the "classic" lift and shift scenario, where both the application and its data are moved to Azure, and the "hybrid" lift and shift scenario, where the application data is moved to Azure Files, and the application continues to run on-premises. 
 
 * **Simplify cloud development**:  
-    Azure Files can also be used in numerous ways to simplify new cloud development projects. For example:
+    Azure Files can also be used to simplify new cloud development projects. For example:
     * **Shared application settings**:  
-        A common pattern for distributed applications is to have configuration files in a centralized location where they can be accessed from many application instances. Application instances can load their configuration through the File REST API, and humans can access them as needed by mounting the SMB share locally.
+        A common pattern for distributed applications is to have configuration files in a centralized location where they can be accessed from many application instances. Application instances can load their configuration through the [Azure Files REST API](/rest/api/storageservices/file-service-rest-api), and humans can access them by mounting the share locally.
 
     * **Diagnostic share**:  
         An Azure file share is a convenient place for cloud applications to write their logs, metrics, and crash dumps. Logs can be written by the application instances via the File REST API, and developers can access them by mounting the file share on their local machine. This enables great flexibility, as developers can embrace cloud development without having to abandon any existing tooling they know and love.
@@ -39,14 +39,15 @@ Azure file shares can be used to:
     Azure file shares can be used as persistent volumes for stateful containers. Containers deliver "build once, run anywhere" capabilities that enable developers to accelerate innovation. For the containers that access raw data at every start, a shared file system is required to allow these containers to access the file system no matter which instance they run on.
 
 ## Key benefits
-* **Shared access**. Azure file shares support the industry standard SMB and NFS protocols, meaning you can seamlessly replace your on-premises file shares with Azure file shares without worrying about application compatibility. Being able to share a file system across multiple machines, applications/instances is a significant advantage with Azure Files for applications that need shareability. 
+* **Easy to use**. When an Azure file share is mounted on your computer, you don't need to do anything special to access the data: just navigate to the path where the file share is mounted and open/modify a file. 
+* **Shared access**. Azure file shares support the industry standard SMB and NFS protocols, meaning you can seamlessly replace your on-premises file shares with Azure file shares without worrying about application compatibility. Being able to share a file system across multiple machines, applications, and application instances is a significant advantage for applications that need shareability. 
 * **Fully managed**. Azure file shares can be created without the need to manage hardware or an OS. This means you don't have to deal with patching the server OS with critical security upgrades or replacing faulty hard disks.
-* **Scripting and tooling**. PowerShell cmdlets and Azure CLI  can be used to create, mount, and manage Azure file shares as part of the administration of Azure applications. You can create and manage Azure file shares using Azure portal and Azure Storage Explorer. 
+* **Scripting and tooling**. PowerShell cmdlets and Azure CLI can be used to create, mount, and manage Azure file shares as part of the administration of Azure applications. You can create and manage Azure file shares using Azure portal and Azure Storage Explorer. 
 * **Resiliency**. Azure Files has been built from the ground up to be always available. Replacing on-premises file shares with Azure Files means you no longer have to wake up to deal with local power outages or network issues. 
-* **Familiar programmability**. Applications running in Azure can access data in the share via file [system I/O APIs](/dotnet/api/system.io.file). Developers can therefore leverage their existing code and skills to migrate existing applications. In addition to System IO APIs, you can use [Azure Storage Client Libraries](/previous-versions/azure/dn261237(v=azure.100)) or the [Azure Storage REST API](/rest/api/storageservices/file-service-rest-api).
+* **Familiar programmability**. Applications running in Azure can access data in the share via file [system I/O APIs](/dotnet/api/system.io.file). Developers can therefore leverage their existing code and skills to migrate existing applications. In addition to System IO APIs, you can use [Azure Storage Client Libraries](/previous-versions/azure/dn261237(v=azure.100)) or the [Azure Files REST API](/rest/api/storageservices/file-service-rest-api).
 
 ## Case studies
-* Organizations across the world are leveraging Azure Files and Azure File Sync to optimize file access and storage. [Checkout their case studies here](azure-files-case-study.md).
+* Organizations across the world are leveraging Azure Files and Azure File Sync to optimize file access and storage. [Check out their case studies here](azure-files-case-study.md).
 
 ## Next Steps
 * [Plan for an Azure Files deployment](storage-files-planning.md)