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Author: ktoliver

articles/data-factory/tumbling-window-trigger-dependency.md

@@ -85,10 +85,10 @@ The following table provides the list of attributes needed to define a Tumbling
 
 ## Tumbling window self-dependency properties
 
-In scenarios where the trigger should not proceed to next window until the previous window is successfully completed, build a self-dependency. A self-dependency trigger that is dependent on the success of earlier runs of itself within the previous hr will have the below properties:
+In scenarios where the trigger shouldn't proceed to the next window until the preceding window is successfully completed, build a self-dependency. A self-dependency trigger that's dependent on the success of earlier runs of itself within the preceding hour will have the properties indicated in the following code.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> It is recommended to only use tumbling window trigger self-dependency if your triggered pipeline relies on the output of pipelines in previous triggered windows. If you wish to limit parallel trigger runs, set the maximimum trigger concurrency
+> If your triggered pipeline relies on the output of pipelines in previously triggered windows, we recommend using only tumbling window trigger self-dependency. To limit parallel trigger runs, set the maximimum trigger concurrency.
 
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