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articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/best-practices/sample-connectivity-models.md

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 ## Sample: Linear bus and star topology
 
-In a star network, every host is connected to a central hub. In its simplest form, one central hub acts as a conduit to transmit messages. In the following example, lower switches aren't monitored, and traffic that remains local to these switches won't be seen. Devices might be identified based on ARP messages, but connection information will be missing.
+In a star network such as the one shown in the diagram below, every host is connected to a central hub. In its simplest form, one central hub acts as a conduit to transmit messages. In the following example, lower switches aren't monitored, and traffic that remains local to these switches won't be seen. Devices might be identified based on ARP messages, but connection information will be missing.
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/how-to-set-up-your-network/linear-bus-star-topology.png" alt-text="Diagram of the linear bus and star topology." border="false" lightbox="../media/how-to-set-up-your-network/linear-bus-star-topology.png":::
 
 ## Sample: Multi-layer, multi-tenant network
 
-The following diagram is a general abstraction of a multilayer, multitenant network, with an expansive cybersecurity ecosystem typically operated by an SOC and MSSP.
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-Typically, NTA sensors are deployed in layers 0 to 3 of the OSI model.
+The following diagram is a general abstraction of a multilayer, multi-tenant network, with an expansive cybersecurity ecosystem typically operated by an security operations center (SOC) and managed security service provider (MSSP). Defender for IoT sensors are typically deployed in layers 0 to 3 of the OSI model.
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/how-to-set-up-your-network/osi-model.png" alt-text="Diagram of the OSI model." lightbox="../media/how-to-set-up-your-network/osi-model.png" border="false":::
 
 ## Next steps
 
-After you've [understood your own network's OT architecture](understand-network-architecture.md) and [planned out your deployment](plan-network-monitoring.md), learn more about methods for traffic mirroring and passive or active monitoring.
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-For more information, see:
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-- [Traffic mirroring methods for OT monitoring](traffic-mirroring-methods.md)
+For more information, see [Traffic mirroring methods for OT monitoring](traffic-mirroring-methods.md).