article cleanup

Author: khdownie

articles/storage/files/storage-files-migration-nas-hybrid.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn how to migrate files from an on-premises Network Attached Sto
 author: khdownie
 ms.service: storage
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 03/19/2020
+ms.date: 03/28/2023
 ms.author: kendownie
 ms.subservice: files
 ---
@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ This migration article is one of several involving the keywords NAS and Azure Fi
 
 If your scenario is different, look through the [table of migration guides](storage-files-migration-overview.md#migration-guides).
 
-Azure File Sync works on Direct Attached Storage (DAS) locations and does not support sync to Network Attached Storage (NAS) locations.
-This fact makes a migration of your files necessary and this article guides you through the planning and execution of such a migration.
+Azure File Sync works on Direct Attached Storage (DAS) locations and doesn't support sync to Network Attached Storage (NAS) locations.
+This fact makes a migration of your files necessary, and this article guides you through the planning and execution of such a migration.
 
 ## Applies to
 | File share type | SMB | NFS |
@@ -32,11 +32,11 @@ This fact makes a migration of your files necessary and this article guides you
 
 ## Migration goals
 
-The goal is to move the shares that you have on your NAS appliance to a Windows Server. Then utilize Azure File Sync for a hybrid cloud deployment. Generally, migrations need to be done in a way that guaranty the integrity of the production data and it's availability during the migration. The latter requires keeping downtime to a minimum, so that it can fit into or only slightly exceed regular maintenance windows.
+The goal is to move the shares on your NAS appliance to a Windows Server, then utilize Azure File Sync for a hybrid cloud deployment. Generally, migrations need to be done in a way that guarantee the integrity of the production data and its availability during the migration. The latter requires keeping downtime to a minimum, so that it can fit into or only slightly exceed regular maintenance windows.
 
 ## Migration overview
 
-As mentioned in the Azure Files [migration overview article](storage-files-migration-overview.md), using the correct copy tool and approach is important. Your NAS appliance is exposing SMB shares directly on your local network. RoboCopy, built-into Windows Server, is the best way to move your files in this migration scenario.
+As mentioned in the Azure Files [migration overview article](storage-files-migration-overview.md), using the correct copy tool and approach is important. Your NAS appliance is exposing SMB shares directly on your local network. RoboCopy, built into Windows Server, is the best way to move your files in this migration scenario.
 
 - Phase 1: [Identify how many Azure file shares you need](#phase-1-identify-how-many-azure-file-shares-you-need)
 - Phase 2: [Provision a suitable Windows Server on-premises](#phase-2-provision-a-suitable-windows-server-on-premises)
@@ -54,14 +54,14 @@ As mentioned in the Azure Files [migration overview article](storage-files-migra
 ## Phase 2: Provision a suitable Windows Server on-premises
 
 * Create a Windows Server 2022 or Windows Server 2019 virtual machine, or deploy a physical server. A Windows Server failover cluster is also supported.
-* Provision or add Direct Attached Storage (DAS as compared to NAS, which is not supported).
+* Provision or add Direct Attached Storage (DAS as compared to NAS, which isn't supported).
 
-    The amount of storage you provision can be smaller than what you are currently using on your NAS appliance. This configuration choice requires that you also make use of Azure File Syncs [cloud tiering](../file-sync/file-sync-cloud-tiering-overview.md) feature.
-    However, when you copy your files from the larger NAS space to the smaller Windows Server volume in a later phase, you will need to work in batches:
+    The amount of storage you provision can be smaller than what you're currently using on your NAS appliance. This configuration choice requires that you also make use of Azure File Sync's [cloud tiering](../file-sync/file-sync-cloud-tiering-overview.md) feature.
+    However, when you copy your files from the larger NAS space to the smaller Windows Server volume in a later phase, you'll need to work in batches:
 
     1. Move a set of files that fits onto the disk
-    2. let file sync and cloud tiering engage
-    3. when more free space is created on the volume, proceed with the next batch of files. Alternatively, review the RoboCopy command in the [RoboCopy section](#phase-7-robocopy) of this article for use of the new `/LFSM` switch. Using `/LFSM` can significantly simplify your RoboCopy jobs, but it is not compatible with some other RoboCopy switches you might depend on. Only use the `/LFSM` switch when the migration destination is local storage. It's not supported when the destination is a remote SMB share.
+    2. Let file sync and cloud tiering engage
+    3. When more free space is created on the volume, proceed with the next batch of files. Alternatively, review the RoboCopy command in the [RoboCopy section](#phase-7-robocopy) of this article for use of the new `/LFSM` switch. Using `/LFSM` can significantly simplify your RoboCopy jobs, but it isn't compatible with some other RoboCopy switches you might depend on. Only use the `/LFSM` switch when the migration destination is local storage. It's not supported when the destination is a remote SMB share.
 
     You can avoid this batching approach by provisioning the equivalent space on the Windows Server that your files occupy on the NAS appliance. Consider deduplication on NAS / Windows. If you don't want to permanently commit this high amount of storage to your Windows Server, you can reduce the volume size after the migration and before you adjust the cloud tiering policies. That creates a smaller on-premises cache of your Azure file shares.
 
@@ -93,16 +93,16 @@ Your registered on-premises Windows Server must be ready and connected to the in
 [!INCLUDE [storage-files-migration-configure-sync](../../../includes/storage-files-migration-configure-sync.md)]
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> Cloud tiering is the AFS feature that allows the local server to have less storage capacity than is stored in the cloud, yet have the full namespace available. Locally interesting data is also cached locally for fast access performance. Cloud tiering is an optional feature per Azure File Sync "server endpoint".
+> Cloud tiering is the Azure File Sync feature that allows the local server to have less storage capacity than is stored in the cloud, yet have the full namespace available. Locally interesting (hot) data is also cached locally for fast access performance. Cloud tiering is an optional feature per Azure File Sync "server endpoint".
 
 > [!WARNING]
-> If you provisioned less storage on your Windows server volume(s) than your data used on the NAS appliance, then cloud tiering is mandatory. If you do not turn on cloud tiering, your server will not free up space to store all files. Set your tiering policy, temporarily for the migration, to 99% volume free space. Be sure to return to your cloud tiering settings after the migration is complete, and set it to a more long-term useful level.
+> If you provisioned less storage on your Windows server volume(s) than your data used on the NAS appliance, then cloud tiering is mandatory. If you don't turn on cloud tiering, your server won't free up space to store all files. Set your tiering policy, temporarily for the migration, to 99% volume free space. Be sure to return to your cloud tiering settings after the migration is complete, and set it to a more long-term useful level.
 
-Repeat the steps of sync group creation and addition of the matching server folder as a server endpoint for all Azure file shares / server locations, that need to be configured for sync.
+Repeat the steps of sync group creation and addition of the matching server folder as a server endpoint for all Azure file shares / server locations that need to be configured for sync.
 
 After the creation of all server endpoints, sync is working. You can create a test file and see it sync up from your server location to the connected Azure file share (as described by the cloud endpoint in the sync group).
 
-Both locations, the server folders and the Azure file shares are otherwise empty and awaiting data in either location. In the next step, you will begin to copy files into the Windows Server for Azure File Sync to move them up to the cloud. In case you've enabled cloud tiering, the server will then begin to tier files, should you run out of capacity on the local volume(s).
+Both locations, the server folders and the Azure file shares, are otherwise empty and awaiting data in either location. In the next step, you'll begin to copy files into the Windows Server for Azure File Sync to move them up to the cloud. In case you've enabled cloud tiering, the server will then begin to tier files, should you run out of capacity on the local volume(s).
 
 ## Phase 7: RoboCopy
 
@@ -111,62 +111,62 @@ The basic migration approach is a RoboCopy from your NAS appliance to your Windo
 Run the first local copy to your Windows Server target folder:
 
 * Identify the first location on your NAS appliance.
-* Identify the matching folder on the Windows Server, that already has Azure File Sync configured on it.
-* Start the copy using RoboCopy
+* Identify the matching folder on the Windows Server that already has Azure File Sync configured on it.
+* Start the copy using RoboCopy.
 
 The following RoboCopy command will copy files from your NAS storage to your Windows Server target folder. The Windows Server will sync it to the Azure file share(s). 
 
 If you provisioned less storage on your Windows Server than your files take up on the NAS appliance, then you have configured cloud tiering. As the local Windows Server volume gets full, [cloud tiering](../file-sync/file-sync-cloud-tiering-overview.md) will kick in and tier files that have successfully synced already. Cloud tiering will generate enough space to continue the copy from the NAS appliance. Cloud tiering checks once an hour to see what has synced and to free up disk space to reach the 99% volume free space.
-It is possible, that RoboCopy moves files faster than you can sync to the cloud and tier locally, thus running out of local disk space. RoboCopy will fail. It is recommended that you work through the shares in a sequence that prevents that. For example, not starting RoboCopy jobs for all shares at the same time, or only moving shares that fit on the current amount of free space on the Windows Server, to mention a few.
+It's possible that RoboCopy moves files faster than you can sync to the cloud and tier locally, thus running out of local disk space. In this case, RoboCopy will fail. We recommend that you work through the shares in a sequence that prevents this - for example, not starting RoboCopy jobs for all shares at the same time, or only moving shares that fit on the current amount of free space on the Windows Server.
 
 [!INCLUDE [storage-files-migration-robocopy](../../../includes/storage-files-migration-robocopy.md)]
 
 ## Phase 8: User cut-over
 
-When you run the RoboCopy command for the first time, your users and applications are still accessing files on the NAS and potentially change them. It is possible, that RoboCopy has processed a directory, moves on to the next and then a user on the source location (NAS) adds, changes, or deletes a file that will now not be processed in this current RoboCopy run. This behavior is expected.
+When you run the RoboCopy command for the first time, your users and applications are still accessing files on the NAS and can potentially change them. It's possible that RoboCopy has processed a directory, moves on to the next, and then a user on the source location (NAS) adds, changes, or deletes a file that will now not be processed in this current RoboCopy run. This behavior is expected.
 
 The first run is about moving the bulk of the data to your Windows Server and into the cloud via Azure File Sync. This first copy can take a long time, depending on:
 
 * your download bandwidth
 * the upload bandwidth
 * the local network speed and number of how optimally the number of RoboCopy threads matches it
-* the number of items (files and folders), that need to be processed by RoboCopy and Azure File Sync
+* the number of items (files and folders) that need to be processed by RoboCopy and Azure File Sync
 
 Once the initial run is complete, run the command again.
 
-The second time it will finish faster, because it only needs to transport changes that happened since the last run. During this second run, still, new changes can accumulate.
+The second time it will finish faster, because it only needs to transport changes that happened since the last run. During this second run, new changes can still accumulate.
 
-Repeat this process until you are satisfied that the amount of time it takes to complete a RoboCopy for a specific location is within an acceptable window for downtime.
+Repeat this process until you're satisfied that the amount of time it takes to complete a RoboCopy for a specific location is within an acceptable window for downtime.
 
 When you consider the downtime acceptable, then you need to remove user access to your NAS-based shares. You can do that by any steps that prevent users from changing the file and folder structure and content. An example is to point your DFS-Namespace to a non-existing location or change the root ACLs on the share.
 
-Run one last RoboCopy round. It will pick up any changes, that might have been missed.
-How long this final step takes, is dependent on the speed of the RoboCopy scan. You can estimate the time (which is equal to your downtime) by measuring how long the previous run took.
+Run one last RoboCopy round. It will pick up any changes that might have been missed.
+How long this final step takes depends on the speed of the RoboCopy scan. You can estimate the time (which is equal to your downtime) by measuring how long the previous run took.
 
-Create a share on the Windows Server folder and possibly adjust your DFS-N deployment to point to it. Be sure to set the same share-level permissions as on your NAS SMB share. If you had an enterprise-class domain-joined NAS, then the user SIDs will automatically match as the users exist in Active Directory and RoboCopy copies files and metadata at full fidelity. If you have used local users on your NAS, you need to re-create these users as Windows Server local users and map the existing SIDs RoboCopy moved over to your Windows Server to the SIDs of your new, Windows Server local users.
+Create a share on the Windows Server folder and possibly adjust your DFS-N deployment to point to it. Be sure to set the same share-level permissions as on your NAS SMB share. If you had an enterprise-class domain-joined NAS, then the user SIDs will automatically match, as the users exist in Active Directory and RoboCopy copies files and metadata at full fidelity. If you have used local users on your NAS, you need to re-create these users as Windows Server local users and map the existing SIDs RoboCopy moved over to your Windows Server to the SIDs of your new, Windows Server local users.
 
 You have finished migrating a share / group of shares into a common root or volume. (Depending on your mapping from Phase 1)
 
 You can try to run a few of these copies in parallel. We recommend processing the scope of one Azure file share at a time.
 
 > [!WARNING]
-> Once you have moved all the data from you NAS to the Windows Server, and your migration is complete: Return to ***all***  sync groups in the Azure portal and adjust the cloud tiering volume free space percent value to something better suited for cache utilization, say 20%. 
+> Once you've moved all the data from your NAS to the Windows Server and your migration is complete: Return to ***all***  sync groups in the Azure portal, and adjust the cloud tiering volume free space percent value to something better suited for cache utilization, for example 20%.
 
-The cloud tiering volume free space policy acts on a volume level with potentially multiple server endpoints syncing from it. If you forget to adjust the free space on even one server endpoint, sync will continue to apply the most restrictive rule and attempt to keep 99% free disk space, making the local cache not performing as you might expect. Unless it is your goal to only have the namespace for a volume that only contains rarely accessed, archival data and you are reserving the rest of the storage space for another scenario.
+The cloud tiering volume free space policy acts on a volume level with potentially multiple server endpoints syncing from it. If you forget to adjust the free space on even one server endpoint, sync will continue to apply the most restrictive rule and attempt to keep 99% free disk space, making the local cache not perform as you might expect. Unless your goal is to only have the namespace for a volume that only contains rarely accessed, archival data and you're reserving the rest of the storage space for another scenario.
 
 ## Troubleshoot
 
-The most likely issue you can run into, is that the RoboCopy command fails with *"Volume full"* on the Windows Server side. Cloud tiering acts once every hour to evacuate content from the local Windows Server disk, that has synced. Its goal is to reach your 99% free space on the volume.
+The most likely issue you can run into is that the RoboCopy command fails with *"Volume full"* on the Windows Server side. Cloud tiering acts once every hour to evacuate content from the local Windows Server disk that has synced. Its goal is to reach your 99% free space on the volume.
 
 Let sync progress and cloud tiering free up disk space. You can observe that in File Explorer on your Windows Server.
 
-When your Windows Server has sufficient available capacity, rerunning the command will resolve the problem. Nothing breaks when you get into this situation and you can move forward with confidence. Inconvenience of running the command again is the only consequence.
+When your Windows Server has sufficient available capacity, rerunning the command will resolve the problem. Nothing breaks when you get into this situation, and you can move forward with confidence. Inconvenience of running the command again is the only consequence.
 
 Check the link in the following section for troubleshooting Azure File Sync issues.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-There is more to discover about Azure file shares and Azure File Sync. The following articles help understand advanced options, best practices, and also contain troubleshooting help. These articles link to [Azure file share documentation](storage-files-introduction.md) as appropriate.
+The following articles will help you understand deployment options, best practices, and troubleshooting steps.
 
 * [Azure File Sync overview](../file-sync/file-sync-planning.md)
 * [Deploy Azure File Sync](../file-sync/file-sync-deployment-guide.md)