Addressing feedback

Author: msjasteppe

articles/healthcare-apis/iot/index.yml

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 ### YamlMime:Landing
 
 title: MedTech service documentation
-summary: The MedTech service documentation for Azure Health Data Services. The MedTech service is an optional service of the Azure Health Data Services designed to ingest device message data from multiple and disparate Internet of Medical Things (IoMT) devices and persist the device message data in a FHIR service. 
+summary: The MedTech service documentation for the Azure Health Data Services. The MedTech service is an optional service of the Azure Health Data Services designed to ingest device message data from multiple and disparate IoT devices, transform the device messages data into FHIR Observations, and persist the FHIR Observations in a FHIR service. 
 
 metadata:
   title: Azure Health Data Services MedTech service
-  description: The MedTech service documentation for Azure Health Data Services. The MedTech service is an optional service of the Azure Health Data Services designed to ingest device message data from multiple and disparate Internet of Medical Things (IoMT) devices and persist the device message data in a FHIR service. 
+  description: The MedTech service documentation for the Azure Health Data Services. The MedTech service is an optional service of the Azure Health Data Services designed to ingest device message data from multiple and disparate IoT devices, transform the device messages data into FHIR Observations, and persist the FHIR Observations in a FHIR service. 
   services: healthcare-apis
   ms.service: healthcare-apis
   ms.subservice: data-transformation