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 # Reliability in Sustainability data solutions in Fabric
 
 This article describes reliability support in [Sustainability data solutions in Fabric](/industry/sustainability/sustainability-data-solutions-fabric/get-started-overview), covering intra-regional resiliency via [availability zones](#availability-zone-support) and [multi-region deployments](#multi-region-support).
 
-Sustainability data solutions in Fabric has multiple capabilities to help you to manage your sustainability data scenarios. Most of the capabilities are covered by the [Microsoft Fabric reliability guide](./reliability-fabric.md), except for Microsoft Azure emissions insights. This guide focuses on emissions insights.
 
-[Microsoft Azure emissions insights](/industry/sustainability/sustainability-data-solutions-fabric/azure-emissions-insights-overview) enables you to retrieve and access your Azure emissions data from Microsoft's Cloud for Sustainability services. Emission insights are loaded into your Microsoft Fabric instance at regular intervals. This guide describes how the platform supports resiliency in the ingestion of data. After data is loaded into your Microsoft Fabric instance, it's covered by the [Microsoft Fabric reliability guide](./reliability-fabric.md).
+Sustainability disclosures, analytics and reduction require rich environmental, social, and governance data that originate from disparate sources and need to be unified to improve its efficiency and value. [Sustainability data solutions](/industry/sustainability/sustainability-data-solutions-fabric/get-started-overview) in Microsoft Fabric provide unique capabilities to ingest, harmonize, and process disparate data for specific sustainability scenarios.
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+The reliability guidance for most of these capabilities are covered by the [Microsoft Fabric reliability guide](./reliability-fabric.md). However, that document does not include reliability guidance for the ingestion of data in Microsoft Azure emissions insights. This guide focuses specifically on the resiliency of data ingestion process for the [Microsoft Azure emissions insights platform](/industry/sustainability/sustainability-data-solutions-fabric/azure-emissions-insights-overview). After your emissions data is loaded into your Microsoft Fabric instance, you can consult [the Microsoft Fabric reliability guide](./reliability-fabric.md) for the rest of the reliability guidance.
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 ## Transient faults
 
 [!INCLUDE[introduction to transient faults](includes/reliability-transient-faults-description-include.md)]
 
-If a transient fault occurs during ingestion of emissions data, you need to manually trigger the job again. You can monitor the ingestion job from the Microsoft Fabric monitoring hub.
+If a transient fault occurs during ingestion of emissions data, you must manually trigger the job again. You can monitor the ingestion job from the Microsoft Fabric monitoring hub.
 
 ## Availability zone support
 
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 Ingestion of new Azure emissions data, as well as any missing data, resumes after Microsoft restores services into the region. Although the process of ingesting new and missing data might take several days, previously ingested data is still available.
 
 ## Related content
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+- [Microsoft Fabric reliability guide](./reliability-fabric.md)
 - [Overview of Sustainability data solutions in Fabric](/industry/sustainability/sustainability-data-solutions-fabric/get-started-overview)
 - [Ingest emissions data](/industry/sustainability/sustainability-data-solutions-fabric/azure-emissions-insights-ingest)