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articles/dev-box/quickstart-create-dev-box.md

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 # Quickstart: Create and connect to a dev box by using the Microsoft Dev Box developer portal
 
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 In this quickstart, you get started with Microsoft Dev Box by creating a dev box through the developer portal. After you create the dev box, you can connect to it with a Remote Desktop session through a browser or through a Remote Desktop app.
 
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 1. Use the dev box tile in the developer portal to track the progress of creation.
 
+   The developer portal displays a notification that the dev box creation process can take 25 minutes. After the process completes, the dev box status changes to *Running*.
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    :::image type="content" source="./media/quickstart-create-dev-box/dev-box-tile-creating.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the developer portal that shows the dev box card with a status of Creating.":::
 
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