Doc updates to enhance the customer experience

Author: Farha-Bano

articles/azure-arc/vmware-vsphere/switch-to-new-version.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Switch to the new version
-description: Learn to switch to the new version of VMware vSphere and use its capabilities
+description: Learn how to switch to the new version of Azure Arc-enabled VMware vSphere and use its capabilities.
 ms.topic: how-to 
 ms.date: 02/28/2024
 ms.service: azure-arc
@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ On August 21, 2023, we rolled out major changes to **Azure Arc-enabled VMware vS
 
 If you onboarded to Azure Arc-enabled VMware vSpphere before August 21, 2023, and your VMs were Azure-enabled, you'll encounter the following breaking changes:
 
-- For the VMs with Arc agents, starting from February 27, 2024, you will no longer be able to perform any Azure management service-related operations.  
-- From March 15, 2024, you will no longer be able to perform any operations on the VMs, except the **Remove from Azure** operation. 
+- For the VMs with Arc agents, starting from February 27, 2024, you'll no longer be able to perform any Azure management service-related operations.  
+- From March 15, 2024, you'll no longer be able to perform any operations on the VMs, except the **Remove from Azure** operation. 
 
 To continue using these machines, follow these instructions to switch to the new version.
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ To continue using these machines, follow these instructions to switch to the new
 
 ## Switch to the new version (Existing customer)
 
-If you've onboarded to **Azure Arc-enabled VMware** before August 21, 2023, for VMs that are Azure-enabled, follow these steps to switch to the new version: 
+If you onboarded to **Azure Arc-enabled VMware** before August 21, 2023, for VMs that are Azure-enabled, follow these steps to switch to the new version: 
 
 >[!Note]
 >If you had enabled guest management on any of the VMs, remove [VM extensions](/azure/azure-arc/vmware-vsphere/remove-vcenter-from-arc-vmware#step-1-remove-vm-extensions) and [disconnect agents](/azure/azure-arc/vmware-vsphere/remove-vcenter-from-arc-vmware#step-2-disconnect-the-agent-from-azure-arc).