Merge pull request #223554 from msjasteppe/choose-edits

Updates based on usage feedback

Author: BCS2022

articles/healthcare-apis/iot/deploy-new-choose.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: msjasteppe
 ms.service: healthcare-apis
 ms.subservice: fhir
 ms.topic: quickstart
-ms.date: 1/5/2023
+ms.date: 1/10/2023
 ms.author: jasteppe
 ---
 
@@ -16,27 +16,38 @@ The MedTech service provides multiple methods for deployment into Azure. Each de
 In this quickstart, you'll learn about these deployment methods:
 
 > [!div class="checklist"]
-> - Azure Resource Manager template (ARM template) using the **Deploy to Azure** button.
+> - Azure Resource Manager template (ARM template) including an Azure Iot Hub using the **Deploy to Azure** button. 
+> - ARM template using the **Deploy to Azure** button.
 > - ARM template using Azure PowerShell or the Azure CLI.
-> - Azure portal manually. 
+> - Manually in the Azure portal. 
+
+## ARM template including an Azure Iot Hub using the Deploy to Azure button
+
+ Using an ARM template with the **Deploy to Azure** button is an easy and fast deployment method because it automates the deployment, most configuration steps, and uses the Azure portal. The deployed MedTech service and Azure IoT Hub are fully functional including conforming and valid device and Fast Healthcare Interoperability Resources (FHIR®) destination mappings. Use the Azure IoT Hub to create devices and send device messages to the MedTech service.
+
+[![Deploy to Azure](https://aka.ms/deploytoazurebutton)](https://portal.azure.com/#create/Microsoft.Template/uri/https%3A%2F%2Fraw.githubusercontent.com%2FAzure%2Fazure-quickstart-templates%2Fmaster%2Fquickstarts%2Fmicrosoft.healthcareapis%2Fworkspaces%2Fiotconnectors-with-iothub%2Fazuredeploy.json)
+
+To learn more about deploying the MedTech service including an Azure IoT Hub using an ARM template and the **Deploy to Azure** button, see [Receive device messages through Azure IoT Hub](device-data-through-iot-hub.md).
 
 ## ARM template using the Deploy to Azure button
 
-Using an ARM template with the **Deploy to Azure** button is an easy and fast deployment method because it automates the deployment, most configuration steps, and uses the Azure portal.
+Using an ARM template with the **Deploy to Azure** button is an easy and fast deployment method because it automates the deployment, most configuration steps, and uses the Azure portal. The deployed MedTech service will still require conforming and valid device and FHIR destination mappings to be fully functional.
+
+ [![Deploy to Azure](https://aka.ms/deploytoazurebutton)](https://portal.azure.com/#create/Microsoft.Template/uri/https%3A%2F%2Fraw.githubusercontent.com%2FAzure%2Fazure-quickstart-templates%2Fmaster%2Fquickstarts%2Fmicrosoft.healthcareapis%2Fworkspaces%2Fiotconnectors%2Fazuredeploy.json).
 
-To learn more about using an ARM template with the **Deploy to Azure button**, see [Deploy the MedTech service using an Azure Resource Manager template](deploy-new-arm.md).
+To learn more about deploying the MedTech service using an ARM template and the **Deploy to Azure** button, see [Deploy the MedTech service using an Azure Resource Manager template](deploy-new-arm.md).
 
 ## ARM template using Azure PowerShell or the Azure CLI
 
-Using an ARM template with Azure PowerShell or the Azure CLI is a more advanced deployment method. This deployment method can be useful for adding automation and repeatability so that you can scale and customize your deployments.
+Using an ARM template with Azure PowerShell or the Azure CLI is a more advanced deployment method. This deployment method can be useful for adding automation and repeatability so that you can scale and customize your deployments. The deployed MedTech service will still require conforming and valid device and FHIR destination mappings to be fully functional.
 
-To learn more about using an ARM template with Azure PowerShell or the Azure CLI, see [Deploy the MedTech service using an Azure Resource Manager template and Azure PowerShell or the Azure CLI](deploy-new-powershell-cli.md).
+To learn more about deploying the MedTech service using an ARM template and Azure PowerShell or the Azure CLI, see [Deploy the MedTech service using an Azure Resource Manager template and Azure PowerShell or the Azure CLI](deploy-new-powershell-cli.md).
 
-## Azure portal manually
+## Manually in the Azure portal
 
 Using the Azure portal manual deployment will allow you to see the details of each deployment step. The manual deployment has many steps, but it provides valuable technical information that may be useful for customizing and troubleshooting your MedTech service.
 
-To learn more about using a manual deployment with the Azure portal, see [Deploy the MedTech service manually using the Azure portal](deploy-new-manual.md).
+To learn more about deploying the MedTech service manually using the Azure portal, see [Deploy the MedTech service manually using the Azure portal](deploy-new-manual.md).
 
 ## Deployment architecture overview