Merge pull request #89525 from memildin/asc-melvyn-test

Minor fixes to improve Acrolinx score

Author: PRMerger18

articles/security-center/security-center-wdatp.md

@@ -20,25 +20,25 @@ This change brings comprehensive Endpoint Detection and Response (EDR) capabilit
 
 ## Microsoft Defender ATP features in Security Center
 
-When you use Microsoft Defender ATP you get:
+When you use Microsoft Defender ATP, you get:
 
-- **Next-generation post breach detection sensors**: Microsoft Defender ATP sensors for Windows servers collect a vast array of behavioral signals.
+- **Advanced post-breach detection sensors**: Microsoft Defender ATP sensors for Windows servers collect a vast array of behavioral signals.
 
 - **Analytics-based, cloud-powered post breach detection**: Microsoft Defender ATP quickly adapts to changing threats. It uses advanced analytics and big data. Microsoft Defender ATP is amplified by the power of the Intelligent Security Graph with signals across Windows, Azure, and Office to detect unknown threats. It provides actionable alerts and enables you to respond quickly.
 
-- **Threat intelligence**: Microsoft Defender ATP identifies attacker tools, techniques, and procedures. When it detects these, it generates alerts. It uses data generated by Microsoft threat hunters and security teams, augmented by intelligence provided by partners.
+- **Threat intelligence**: Microsoft Defender ATP generates alerts when it identifies attacker tools, techniques, and procedures. It uses data generated by Microsoft threat hunters and security teams, augmented by intelligence provided by partners.
 
-These capabilities are now available in Azure Security Center:
+The following capabilities are now available in Azure Security Center:
 
 - **Automated onboarding**: The Microsoft Defender ATP sensor is automatically enabled for Windows servers that are onboarded to Azure Security Center.
 
 - **Single pane of glass**: The Azure Security Center console displays Microsoft Defender ATP alerts.
 
-- **Detailed machine investigation**: Azure Security Center customers can access Microsoft Defender ATP console to perform a detailed investigation to uncover the scope of a breach.
+- **Detailed machine investigation**: Azure Security Center customers can use Microsoft Defender ATP console to conduct a detailed investigation to uncover the scope of a breach.
 
 ![Azure Security Center, displaying a list of alerts and general information about each alert](media/security-center-wdatp/image1.png)
 
-You can further investigate the alert by pivoting to Microsoft Defender ATP. There you can see additional information such as the alert process tree and the incident graph. You can also see a detailed machine timeline that shows every behavior for a historical period of up to six months.
+To investigate further, use Microsoft Defender ATP. Microsoft Defender ATP provides additional information such as the alert process tree and the incident graph. You can also see a detailed machine timeline that shows every behavior for a historical period of up to six months.
 
 ![Microsoft Defender ATP page with detailed information about an alert](media/security-center-wdatp/image3.png)
 
@@ -53,8 +53,8 @@ Microsoft Defender ATP in Security Center supports detection on Windows Server 2
 
 To onboard servers to Security Center, click **Go to Azure Security Center to onboard servers** from the Microsoft Defender ATP server onboarding.
 
-1. In the **Onboarding** blade select or create a workspace in which to store the data. <br>
-2. If you can’t see all your workspaces, it may be due to a lack of permissions, make sure your workspace is set to Azure Security Standard tier. For more information see [Upgrade to Security Center's Standard tier for enhanced security](security-center-pricing.md).
+1. In the **Onboarding** area, select or create a workspace in which to store the data. <br>
+2. If you can’t see all your workspaces, it may be due to a lack of permissions, make sure your workspace is set to Azure Security Standard tier. For more information, see [Upgrade to Security Center's Standard tier for enhanced security](security-center-pricing.md).
 
 3. Select **Add servers** to view instructions on how to install the Microsoft Monitoring Agent. 
 
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ Here you can see the integrations currently enabled.
 
   ![Azure Security Center Threat detection settings page with Microsoft Defender ATP integration enabled](media/security-center-wdatp/enable-integrations.png)
 
-- If you've already onboarded the servers to Azure Security Center standard tier, you need take no further action. Azure Security Center will automatically onboard the servers to Microsoft Defender ATP. This might take up to 24 hours.
+- If you've already onboarded the servers to Azure Security Center standard tier, you need take no further action. Azure Security Center will automatically onboard the servers to Microsoft Defender ATP. Onboarding might take up to 24 hours.
 
 - If you've never onboarded the servers to Azure Security Center standard tier, onboard them to Azure Security Center as usual.