Updating data encryption docs

Author: kummanish

articles/mysql/concepts-data-encryption-mysql.md

@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Data encryption for Azure Database for MySQL provides the following benefits:
 
 The DEKs, encrypted with the KEKs, are stored separately. Only an entity with access to the KEK can decrypt these DEKs. For more information, see [Security in encryption at rest](../security/fundamentals/encryption-atrest.md).
 
-## How data encryption with a customer-managed key works
+## How data encryption with a customer-managed key work
 
 ![Diagram that shows an overview of Bring Your Own Key](media/concepts-data-access-and-security-data-encryption/mysqloverview.png)
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ When the server is configured to use the customer-managed key stored in the key
 The following are requirements for configuring Key Vault:
 
 * Key Vault and Azure Database for MySQL must belong to the same Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) tenant. Cross-tenant Key Vault and server interactions aren't supported. Moving resources afterwards requires you to reconfigure the data encryption.
-* You must enable the soft-delete feature on the key vault, to protect from data loss if an accidental key (or Key Vault) deletion happens. Soft-deleted resources are retained for 90 days, unless the user recovers or purges them in the meantime. The recover and purge actions have their own permissions associated in a Key Vault access policy. The soft-delete feature is off by default, but you can enable it through PowerShell or the Azure CLI (note that you can't enable it through the Azure portal).
+* Enable the soft-delete feature on the key vault, to protect from data loss if an accidental key (or Key Vault) deletion happens. Soft-deleted resources are retained for 90 days, unless the user recovers or purges them in the meantime. The recover and purge actions have their own permissions associated in a Key Vault access policy. The soft-delete feature is off by default, but you can enable it through PowerShell or the Azure CLI (note that you can't enable it through the Azure portal).
 * Grant the Azure Database for MySQL access to the key vault with the get, wrapKey, and unwrapKey permissions by using its unique managed identity. In the Azure portal, the unique identity is automatically created when data encryption is enabled on the MySQL. See [Configure data encryption for MySQL](howto-data-encryption-portal.md) for detailed, step-by-step instructions when you're using the Azure portal.
 
 * When you're using a firewall with Key Vault, you must enable the option **Allow trusted Microsoft services to bypass the firewall**.
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ When you're using data encryption by using a customer-managed key, here are reco
 * Set a resource lock on Key Vault to control who can delete this critical resource and prevent accidental or unauthorized deletion.
 * Enable auditing and reporting on all encryption keys. Key Vault provides logs that are easy to inject into other security information and event management tools. Azure Monitor Log Analytics is one example of a service that's already integrated.
 
-* Ensure that Key Vault and Azure Database for MySQL reside in the same region, to ensure a faster access for DEK wrap and unwrap operations.
+* Ensure that Key Vault and Azure Database for MySQL reside in the same region, to ensure a faster access for DEK wrap, and unwrap operations.
 
 Here are recommendations for configuring a customer-managed key:
 
@@ -90,11 +90,11 @@ Here are recommendations for configuring a customer-managed key:
 
 When you configure data encryption with a customer-managed key in Key Vault, continuous access to this key is required for the server to stay online. If the server loses access to the customer-managed key in Key Vault, the server begins denying all connections within 10 minutes. The server issues a corresponding error message, and changes the server state to *Inaccessible*. Some of the reason why the server can reach this state are:
 
-* If we create a Point In Time Restore server for your Azure Database for MySQL which has data encryption enabled, the newly created server will be in *Inaccessible* state. You can fix this through [Azure portal](howto-data-encryption-portal.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers) or [CLI](howto-data-encryption-cli.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers).
-* If we create a read replica for your Azure Database for MySQL which has data encryption enabled, the newly replica server will be in *Inaccessible* state. You can fix this through [Azure portal](howto-data-encryption-portal.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers) or [CLI](howto-data-encryption-cli.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers).
-* If you delete the KeyVault, the Azure Database for MySQL will be unable to access the key and will move to *Inaccessible* state. Recover the [Key Vault](../key-vault/general/soft-delete-cli.md#deleting-and-purging-key-vault-objects) and re-validate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
-* If we delete the key from the KeyVault, the Azure Database for MySQL will be unable to access the key and will move to *Inaccessible* state. Recover the [Key](../key-vault/general/soft-delete-cli.md#deleting-and-purging-key-vault-objects) and re-validate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
-* If the key stored in the Azure KeyVault expires, the key will become invalid and the Azure Database for MySQL will transition into *Inaccessible* state. Extend the key expiry date using [CLI](https://docs.microsoft.com/cli/azure/keyvault/key?view=azure-cli-latest#az-keyvault-key-set-attributes) and then re-validate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
+* If we create a Point In Time Restore server for your Azure Database for MySQL, which has data encryption enabled, the newly created server will be in *Inaccessible* state. You can fix this through [Azure portal](howto-data-encryption-portal.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers) or [CLI](howto-data-encryption-cli.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers).
+* If we create a read replica for your Azure Database for MySQL, which has data encryption enabled, the replica server will be in *Inaccessible* state. You can fix this through [Azure portal](howto-data-encryption-portal.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers) or [CLI](howto-data-encryption-cli.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers).
+* If you delete the KeyVault, the Azure Database for MySQL will be unable to access the key and will move to *Inaccessible* state. Recover the [Key Vault](../key-vault/general/soft-delete-cli.md#deleting-and-purging-key-vault-objects) and revalidate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
+* If we delete the key from the KeyVault, the Azure Database for MySQL will be unable to access the key and will move to *Inaccessible* state. Recover the [Key](../key-vault/general/soft-delete-cli.md#deleting-and-purging-key-vault-objects) and revalidate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
+* If the key stored in the Azure KeyVault expires, the key will become invalid and the Azure Database for MySQL will transition into *Inaccessible* state. Extend the key expiry date using [CLI](https://docs.microsoft.com/cli/azure/keyvault/key?view=azure-cli-latest#az-keyvault-key-set-attributes) and then revalidate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
 
 ### Accidental key access revocation from Key Vault
 
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ To monitor the database state, and to enable alerting for the loss of transparen
 * [Azure Resource Health](../service-health/resource-health-overview.md): An inaccessible database that has lost access to the customer key shows as "Inaccessible" after the first connection to the database has been denied.
 * [Activity log](../service-health/alerts-activity-log-service-notifications.md): When access to the customer key in the customer-managed Key Vault fails, entries are added to the activity log. You can reinstate access as soon as possible, if you create alerts for these events.
 
-* [Action groups](../azure-monitor/platform/action-groups.md): Define these to send you notifications and alerts based on your preferences.
+* [Action groups](../azure-monitor/platform/action-groups.md): Define these groups to send you notifications and alerts based on your preferences.
 
 ## Restore and replicate with a customer's managed key in Key Vault
 
@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ To avoid issues while setting up customer-managed data encryption during restore
 
 * Initiate the restore or read replica creation process from the master Azure Database for MySQL.
 * Keep the newly created server (restored/replica) in an inaccessible state, because its unique identity hasn't yet been given permissions to Key Vault.
-* On the restored/replica server, revalidate the customer-managed key in the data encryption settings. This ensures that the newly created server is given wrap and unwrap permissions to the key stored in Key Vault.
+* On the restored/replica server, revalidate the customer-managed key in the data encryption settings to ensures that the newly created server is given wrap and unwrap permissions to the key stored in Key Vault.
 
 ## Next steps
 

articles/postgresql/concepts-data-encryption-postgresql.md

@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Data encryption for Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server provides the fol
 
 The DEKs, encrypted with the KEKs, are stored separately. Only an entity with access to the KEK can decrypt these DEKs. For more information, see [Security in encryption at rest](../security/fundamentals/encryption-atrest.md).
 
-## How data encryption with a customer-managed key works
+## How data encryption with a customer-managed key work
 
 ![Diagram that shows an overview of Bring Your Own Key](media/concepts-data-access-and-security-data-encryption/postgresql-data-encryption-overview.png)
 
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ When the server is configured to use the customer-managed key stored in the key
 The following are requirements for configuring Key Vault:
 
 * Key Vault and Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server must belong to the same Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) tenant. Cross-tenant Key Vault and server interactions aren't supported. Moving resources afterwards requires you to reconfigure the data encryption.
-* You must enable the soft-delete feature on the key vault, to protect from data loss if an accidental key (or Key Vault) deletion happens. Soft-deleted resources are retained for 90 days, unless the user recovers or purges them in the meantime. The recover and purge actions have their own permissions associated in a Key Vault access policy. The soft-delete feature is off by default, but you can enable it through PowerShell or the Azure CLI (note that you can't enable it through the Azure portal).
+* Enable the soft-delete feature on the key vault, to protect from data loss if an accidental key (or Key Vault) deletion happens. Soft-deleted resources are retained for 90 days, unless the user recovers or purges them in the meantime. The recover and purge actions have their own permissions associated in a Key Vault access policy. The soft-delete feature is off by default, but you can enable it through PowerShell or the Azure CLI (note that you can't enable it through the Azure portal).
 * Grant the Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server access to the key vault with the get, wrapKey, and unwrapKey permissions by using its unique managed identity. In the Azure portal, the unique identity is automatically created when data encryption is enabled on the PostgreSQL Single server. See [Data encryption for Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server by using the Azure portal](howto-data-encryption-portal.md) for detailed, step-by-step instructions when you're using the Azure portal.
 
 * When you're using a firewall with Key Vault, you must enable the option **Allow trusted Microsoft services to bypass the firewall**.
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ When you're using data encryption by using a customer-managed key, here are reco
 * Set a resource lock on Key Vault to control who can delete this critical resource and prevent accidental or unauthorized deletion.
 * Enable auditing and reporting on all encryption keys. Key Vault provides logs that are easy to inject into other security information and event management tools. Azure Monitor Log Analytics is one example of a service that's already integrated.
 
-* Ensure that Key Vault and Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server reside in the same region, to ensure a faster access for DEK wrap and unwrap operations.
+* Ensure that Key Vault and Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server reside in the same region, to ensure a faster access for DEK wrap, and unwrap operations.
 
 Here are recommendations for configuring a customer-managed key:
 
@@ -89,11 +89,11 @@ Here are recommendations for configuring a customer-managed key:
 
 When you configure data encryption with a customer-managed key in Key Vault, continuous access to this key is required for the server to stay online. If the server loses access to the customer-managed key in Key Vault, the server begins denying all connections within 10 minutes. The server issues a corresponding error message, and changes the server state to *Inaccessible*. Some of the reason why the server can reach this state are:
 
-* If we create a Point In Time Restore server for your Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server which has data encryption enabled, the newly created server will be in *Inaccessible* state. You can fix this through [Azure portal](howto-data-encryption-portal.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers) or [CLI](howto-data-encryption-cli.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers).
-* If we create a read replica for your Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server which has data encryption enabled, the newly replica server will be in *Inaccessible* state. You can fix this through [Azure portal](howto-data-encryption-portal.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers) or [CLI](howto-data-encryption-cli.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers).
-* If you delete the KeyVault, the Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server will be unable to access the key and will move to *Inaccessible* state. Recover the [Key Vault](../key-vault/general/soft-delete-cli.md#deleting-and-purging-key-vault-objects) and re-validate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
-* If we delete the key from the KeyVault, the Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server will be unable to access the key and will move to *Inaccessible* state. Recover the [Key](../key-vault/general/soft-delete-cli.md#deleting-and-purging-key-vault-objects) and re-validate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
-* If the key stored in the Azure KeyVault expires, the key will become invalid and the Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server will transition into *Inaccessible* state. Extend the key expiry date using [CLI](https://docs.microsoft.com/cli/azure/keyvault/key?view=azure-cli-latest#az-keyvault-key-set-attributes) and then re-validate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
+* If we create a Point In Time Restore server for your Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server, which has data encryption enabled, the newly created server will be in *Inaccessible* state. You can fix the server state through [Azure portal](howto-data-encryption-portal.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers) or [CLI](howto-data-encryption-cli.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers).
+* If we create a read replica for your Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server, which has data encryption enabled, the replica server will be in *Inaccessible* state. You can fix the server state through [Azure portal](howto-data-encryption-portal.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers) or [CLI](howto-data-encryption-cli.md#using-data-encryption-for-restore-or-replica-servers).
+* If you delete the KeyVault, the Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server will be unable to access the key and will move to *Inaccessible* state. Recover the [Key Vault](../key-vault/general/soft-delete-cli.md#deleting-and-purging-key-vault-objects) and revalidate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
+* If we delete the key from the KeyVault, the Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server will be unable to access the key and will move to *Inaccessible* state. Recover the [Key](../key-vault/general/soft-delete-cli.md#deleting-and-purging-key-vault-objects) and revalidate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
+* If the key stored in the Azure KeyVault expires, the key will become invalid and the Azure Database for PostgreSQL Single server will transition into *Inaccessible* state. Extend the key expiry date using [CLI](https://docs.microsoft.com/cli/azure/keyvault/key?view=azure-cli-latest#az-keyvault-key-set-attributes) and then revalidate the data encryption to make the server *Available*.
 
 ### Accidental key access revocation from Key Vault
 
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ To monitor the database state, and to enable alerting for the loss of transparen
 * [Azure Resource Health](../service-health/resource-health-overview.md): An inaccessible database that has lost access to the customer key shows as "Inaccessible" after the first connection to the database has been denied.
 * [Activity log](../service-health/alerts-activity-log-service-notifications.md): When access to the customer key in the customer-managed Key Vault fails, entries are added to the activity log. You can reinstate access as soon as possible, if you create alerts for these events.
 
-* [Action groups](../azure-monitor/platform/action-groups.md): Define these to send you notifications and alerts based on your preferences.
+* [Action groups](../azure-monitor/platform/action-groups.md): Define these groups to send you notifications and alerts based on your preferences.
 
 ## Restore and replicate with a customer's managed key in Key Vault