updated the intro section

Author: MGoedtel

articles/azure-arc/servers/quickstart-onboard-powershell.md

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 # Connect hybrid machines to Azure at scale
 
-You can enable Azure Arc for servers (preview) for multiple Windows or Linux machines in your environment with several flexible options depending on your requirements. Using the template script we provide, you can automate the installation and establish the connection to Azure Arc. However, you are required to interactively execute this script with an account that has elevated permissions on the target machine and in Azure. To connect the machines to Azure Arc for servers, you can use an Azure Active Directory [service principal](../../active-directory/develop/app-objects-and-service-principals.md) instead of using your privileged identity to [interactively connect the machine](quickstart-onboard-portal.md). A service principal is a special limited management identity that is granted only the minimum permission necessary to connect machines to Azure using the `azcmagent` command. This is safer than using a higher privileged account like a Tenant Administrator, and follows our access control security best practices. The service principal is used only during onboarding, it is not used for any other purpose.  
+You can enable Azure Arc for servers (preview) for multiple Windows or Linux machines in your environment with several flexible options depending on your requirements. Using the template script we provide, you can automate every step of the installation, including establishing the connection to Azure Arc. However, you are required to interactively execute this script with an account that has elevated permissions on the target machine and in Azure. To connect the machines to Azure Arc for servers, you can use an Azure Active Directory [service principal](../../active-directory/develop/app-objects-and-service-principals.md) instead of using your privileged identity to [interactively connect the machine](quickstart-onboard-portal.md). A service principal is a special limited management identity that is granted only the minimum permission necessary to connect machines to Azure using the `azcmagent` command. This is safer than using a higher privileged account like a Tenant Administrator, and follows our access control security best practices. The service principal is used only during onboarding, it is not used for any other purpose.  
 
-The installation methods to install and configure the Connected Machine agent requires that you have administrator permissions on the machines. On Linux, by using the root account and on Windows, you are a member of the Local Administrators group.
+The installation methods to install and configure the Connected Machine agent requires that the automated method you use has  administrator permissions on the machines. On Linux, by using the root account and on Windows, as a member of the Local Administrators group.
 
 Before you get started, be sure to review the [prerequisites](overview.md#prerequisites) and verify that your subscription and resources meet the requirements.