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@@ -29,23 +29,23 @@ When compared to the traditional ETL-based solutions, Azure Synapse Link for Azu
 
 ### Reduced complexity with No ETL jobs to manage
 
-Azure Synapse Link allows you to directly access Azure Cosmos DB analytical store using  Azure Synapse Analytics without complex data movement. Any updates made to the operational data are visible in the analytical store in near real time with no ETL or change feed jobs. You can run large scale analytics against analytical store, from Azure Synapse Analytics, without additional data transformation.
+Azure Synapse Link allows you to directly access Azure Cosmos DB analytical store using  Azure Synapse Analytics without complex data movement. Any updates made to the operational data are visible in the analytical store in near real-time with no ETL or change feed jobs. You can run large-scale analytics against analytical store, from Azure Synapse Analytics, without additional data transformation.
 
-### Near real time insights into your operational data
+### Near real-time insights into your operational data
 
-You can now get rich insights on your operational data in near real time, using Azure Synapse Link. ETL-based systems tend to have higher latency for analyzing your operational data, due to many layers needed to extract, transform, and load the operational data. With native integration of Azure Cosmos DB analytical store with Azure Synapse Analytics, you can analyze operational data in near real time enabling new business scenarios. 
+You can now get rich insights on your operational data in near real-time, using Azure Synapse Link. ETL-based systems tend to have higher latency for analyzing your operational data, due to many layers needed to extract, transform, and load the operational data. With native integration of Azure Cosmos DB analytical store with Azure Synapse Analytics, you can analyze operational data in near real-time enabling new business scenarios. 
 
 ### No impact on operational workloads
 
-With Azure Synapse Link, you can run analytical queries against an Azure Cosmos DB analytical store, a column store representation of you data, while the transactional operations are processed using provisioned throughput for the transactional workload, over the Cosmos DB row-based transactional store. The analytical workload is independent of the transactional workload traffic without consuming any of the throughput provisioned for your operational data.
+With Azure Synapse Link, you can run analytical queries against an Azure Cosmos DB analytical store, a column store representation of you data, while the transactional operations are processed using provisioned throughput for the transactional workload, over the Cosmos DB row-based transactional store. The analytical workload is independent of the transactional workload traffic, not consuming any of the provisioned throughput of your operational data.
 
-### Optimized for large scale analytics workloads
+### Optimized for large-scale analytics workloads
 
 Azure Cosmos DB analytical store is optimized to provide scalability, elasticity, and performance for analytical workloads without any dependency on the compute run-times. The storage technology is self-managed to optimize your analytics workloads. With built-in support into Azure Synapse Analytics, accessing this storage layer provides simplicity and high performance.
 
 ### Cost-effective
 
-With Azure Synapse Link, you can get a cost-optimized, fully managed solution for operational analytics. It eliminates the extra layers of storage and compute required in traditional ETL pipelines for analyzing operational data. 
+With Azure Synapse Link, you can get a cost-optimized, fully managed solution for operational analytics. It eliminates extra storage and compute layers required in traditional ETL pipelines for analyzing operational data. 
 
 Azure Cosmos DB analytical store follows a consumption-based pricing model, which is based on data storage and analytical read/write operations and queries executed. It doesn’t require you to provision any throughput, as you do today for the transactional workloads. Accessing your data with highly elastic compute engines from Azure Synapse Analytics makes the overall cost of running storage and compute very efficient.
 
@@ -56,13 +56,13 @@ You can run analytical queries effectively against the nearest regional copy of
 
 ## Enable HTAP scenarios for your operational data
 
-Synapse Link brings together Azure Cosmos DB analytical store with Azure Synapse Analytics runtime support. This integration enables you to build cloud native HTAP (Hybrid transactional/analytical processing) solutions that generate insights based on real time updates to your operational data over large datasets. It unlocks new business scenarios to raise alerts based on live trends, build near real time dashboards, and business experiences based on user behavior.
+Synapse Link brings together Azure Cosmos DB analytical store with Azure Synapse Analytics runtime support. This integration enables you to build cloud native HTAP (Hybrid transactional/analytical processing) solutions that generate insights based on real-time updates to your operational data over large datasets. It unlocks new business scenarios to raise alerts based on live trends, build near real-time dashboards, and business experiences based on user behavior.
 
 ### Azure Cosmos DB analytical store
 
-Azure Cosmos DB analytical store is a column-oriented representation of your operational data in Azure Cosmos DB. This analytical store is suitable for fast, cost effective queries on large operational data sets, without copying data and impacting the performance of your transactional workloads.
+Azure Cosmos DB analytical store is a column-oriented representation of your operational data in Azure Cosmos DB. This analytical store is suitable for fast, cost-effective queries on large operational data sets, without copying data and impacting the performance of your transactional workloads.
 
-Analytical store automatically picks up high frequency inserts, updates, deletes in your transactional workloads in near real time, as a fully managed capability (“auto-sync”) of Azure Cosmos DB. No change feed or ETL is required. 
+Analytical store automatically picks up high frequency inserts, updates, deletes in your transactional workloads in near real-time, as a fully managed capability (“auto-sync”) of Azure Cosmos DB. No change feed or ETL is required. 
 
 If you have a globally distributed Azure Cosmos DB account, after you enable analytical store for a container, it will be available in all regions for that account. For more information on the analytical store, see [Azure Cosmos DB Analytical store overview](analytical-store-introduction.md) article.
 
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ You can query the data from Azure Cosmos DB analytical store simultaneously, wit
 * Serverless SQL pool with T-SQL language and support for familiar BI tools (for example, Power BI Premium, etc.)
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> From Azure Synapse Analytics, you can access both analytical and transactional stores in your Azure Cosmos DB container. However, if you want to run large scale analytics or scans on your operational data, we recommend that you use analytical store to avoid performance impact on transactional workloads.
+> From Azure Synapse Analytics, you can access both analytical and transactional stores in your Azure Cosmos DB container. However, if you want to run large-scale analytics or scans on your operational data, we recommend that you use analytical store to avoid performance impact on transactional workloads.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > You can run analytics with low latency in an Azure region by connecting your Azure Cosmos DB container to Synapse runtime in that region.
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ This integration enables the following HTAP scenarios for different users:
 
 * A Data Analyst, who wants to derive insights from the operational data in an Azure Cosmos DB container by querying it with Synapse SQL, read the data at scale and combine those findings with other data sources.
 
-* A Data Scientist, who wants to use Synapse Spark to find a feature to improve their model and train that model without doing complex data engineering. They can also write the results of the model post inference into Azure Cosmos DB for real time scoring on the data through Spark Synapse.
+* A Data Scientist, who wants to use Synapse Spark to find a feature to improve their model and train that model without doing complex data engineering. They can also write the results of the model post inference into Azure Cosmos DB for real-time scoring on the data through Spark Synapse.
 
 * A Data Engineer, who wants to make data accessible for consumers, by creating SQL or Spark tables over Azure Cosmos DB containers, without manual ETL processes.
 
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ Synapse Link isn't recommended if you're looking for traditional data warehouse
 
 ## Security
 
-Synapse Link enables you to run near real time analytics over your mission-critical data in Azure Cosmos DB. It is vital to make sure that critical business data is stored securely across both transactional and analytical stores. Azure Synapse Link for Azure Cosmos DB is designed to help meet these security requirements through the following features:
+Synapse Link enables you to run near real-time analytics over your mission-critical data in Azure Cosmos DB. It is vital to make sure that critical business data is stored securely across both transactional and analytical stores. Azure Synapse Link for Azure Cosmos DB is designed to help meet these security requirements through the following features:
 
 * **Network isolation using private endpoints** - You can control network access to the data in the transactional and analytical stores independently. Network isolation is done using separate managed private endpoints for each store, within managed virtual networks in Azure Synapse workspaces. To learn more, see how to [Configure private endpoints for analytical store](analytical-store-private-endpoints.md) article.