Merge pull request #266772 from rboucher/docs-editor/overview-1708469988

update for github issue https://github.com/MicrosoftDocs/azure-docs/issues/118303

Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

articles/azure-monitor/overview.md

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Click on the diagram to see a more detailed expanded version showing a larger br
 
 The diagram depicts the Azure Monitor system components:
 
-- The **[data sources](data-sources.md)** are the types of data collected from each monitored resource. 
+- **[Data sources](data-sources.md)** are the types of resources being monitored. 
 - The data is **collected and routed** to the data platform. Clicking on the diagram shows these options, which are also called out in detail later in this article. 
 - The **[data platform](data-platform.md)** stores the collected monitoring data. Azure Monitor's core data platform has stores for metrics, logs, traces, and changes. System Center Operations Manager MI uses its own database hosted in SQL Managed Instance.
 - The **consumption** section shows the components that use data from the data platform. 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ The diagram depicts the Azure Monitor system components:
 
 Azure Monitor can collect [data from multiple sources](data-sources.md). 
 
-The diagram below shows an expanded version of the data source types gathered by Azure Monitor. 
+The diagram below shows an expanded version of the data source types that Azure Monitor can gather monitoring data from. 
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/overview/data-sources-opt.svg" alt-text="Diagram that shows an overview of Azure Monitor data sources." border="false" lightbox="media/overview/data-sources-blowup-type-2-opt.svg":::
 
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ SCOM MI (like on premises SCOM) collects only IaaS Workload and Operating System
 
 ## Data collection and routing
 
-Azure Monitor collects and routes monitoring data using a few different mechanisms depending on the data being routed and the destination.  Much like a road system built over time, not all roads lead to all locations. Some are legacy, some new, and some are better to take than others given how Azure Monitor has evolved over time. For more information, see **[data sources](data-sources.md)**.
+Azure Monitor collects and routes monitoring data using a few different mechanisms depending on the data being routed and the destination.  Much like a road system improved over the years, not all roads lead to all locations. Some are legacy, some new, and some are better to take than others given how Azure Monitor has evolved over time. For more information, see **[data sources](data-sources.md)**.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/overview/data-collection-box-opt.svg" alt-text="Diagram that shows an overview of Azure Monitor data collection and routing." border="false" lightbox="media/overview/data-collection-blowup-type-2-opt.svg":::
 
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ For detailed information about data collection, see [data collection](./best-pra
 ## Data platform
 
 Azure Monitor stores data in data stores for each of the three pillars of observability, plus an additional one:
- - metrics 
+- metrics 
  - logs 
  - distributed traces  
  - changes