Merge pull request #242018 from msjasteppe/opening-updates

prmerger-automator[bot] · web-flow · commit b9fbde6e75b9 · 2023-06-19T20:37:48.000Z
Minor updates for consistency
diff --git a/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/concepts-machine-learning.md b/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/concepts-machine-learning.md
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: msjasteppe
 ms.service: healthcare-apis
 ms.subservice: fhir
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 06/15/2023
+ms.date: 06/19/2023
 ms.author: jasteppe
 ---
 
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.author: jasteppe
 > [!NOTE]
 > [Fast Healthcare Interoperability Resources (FHIR&#174;)](https://www.hl7.org/fhir/) is an open healthcare specification.
 
-In this article, we explore using the MedTech service and the Azure Machine Learning Service.
+In this article, learn about using the MedTech service and the Azure Machine Learning Service.
 
 ## The MedTech service and Azure Machine Learning Service reference architecture
 
diff --git a/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/concepts-power-bi.md b/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/concepts-power-bi.md
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: msjasteppe
 ms.service: healthcare-apis
 ms.subservice: fhir
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 06/15/2023
+ms.date: 06/19/2023
 ms.author: jasteppe
 ---
 
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.author: jasteppe
 > [!NOTE]
 > [Fast Healthcare Interoperability Resources (FHIR&#174;)](https://www.hl7.org/fhir/) is an open healthcare specification.
 
-In this article, we explore using the MedTech service and Microsoft Power Business Intelligence (Power BI).
+In this article, learn about using the MedTech service and Microsoft Power Business Intelligence (Power BI).
 
 ## The MedTech service and Power BI reference architecture
 
diff --git a/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/concepts-teams.md b/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/concepts-teams.md
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: msjasteppe
 ms.service: healthcare-apis
 ms.subservice: fhir
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 06/15/2023
+ms.date: 06/19/2023
 ms.author: jasteppe
 ---
 
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.author: jasteppe
 > [!NOTE]
 > [Fast Healthcare Interoperability Resources (FHIR&#174;)](https://www.hl7.org/fhir/) is an open healthcare specification.
 
-In this article, we explore using the MedTech service and Microsoft Teams for notifications.
+In this article, learn about using the MedTech service and Microsoft Teams for notifications.
 
 ## The MedTech service and Teams notifications reference architecture
 
diff --git a/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/device-messages-through-iot-hub.md b/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/device-messages-through-iot-hub.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: msjasteppe
 ms.service: healthcare-apis
 ms.subservice: iomt
 ms.topic: tutorial
-ms.date: 05/16/2023
+ms.date: 06/19/2023
 ms.custom: devx-track-arm-template
 ms.author: jasteppe
 ---
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ For enhanced workflows and ease of use, you can use the MedTech service to recei
 > [!TIP]
 > To learn how the MedTech service transforms and persists device data into the FHIR service as FHIR Observations, see [Overview of the MedTech service device data processing stages](overview-of-device-data-processing-stages.md).
 
-In this tutorial, you learn how to:
+In this tutorial, learn how to:
 
 > [!div class="checklist"]
 > * Open an ARM template in the Azure portal.
diff --git a/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/how-to-configure-metrics.md b/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/how-to-configure-metrics.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: msjasteppe
 ms.service: healthcare-apis
 ms.subservice: iomt
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 04/28/2023
+ms.date: 06/19/2023
 ms.author: jasteppe
 ---
 
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.author: jasteppe
 > [!NOTE]
 > [Fast Healthcare Interoperability Resources (FHIR&#174;)](https://www.hl7.org/fhir/) is an open healthcare specification.
 
-In this article, learn how to configure the MedTech service metrics in the Azure portal. You'll also learn how to pin the MedTech service metrics tile to an Azure portal dashboard for later viewing.
+In this article, learn how to configure the MedTech service metrics in the Azure portal. Also learn how to pin the MedTech service metrics tile to an Azure portal dashboard for later viewing.
 
 The MedTech service metrics can be used to help determine the health and performance of your MedTech service and can be useful with troubleshooting and seeing patterns and/or trends with your MedTech service. 
 
diff --git a/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/how-to-use-monitoring-and-health-checks-tabs.md b/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/how-to-use-monitoring-and-health-checks-tabs.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: msjasteppe
 ms.service: healthcare-apis
 ms.subservice: iomt
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 04/28/2023
+ms.date: 06/19/2023
 ms.author: jasteppe
 ---
 
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.author: jasteppe
 > [!NOTE]
 > [Fast Healthcare Interoperability Resources (FHIR&#174;)](https://www.hl7.org/fhir/) is an open healthcare specification.
 
-In this article, you'll learn how to use the MedTech service monitoring and health check tabs in the Azure portal. The monitoring and health check tabs provide access to crucial MedTech service metrics and health checks. These metrics and health checks can be used in assessing the health and performance of your MedTech service and can be useful seeing patterns and/or trends or assisting with troubleshooting your MedTech service.
+In this article, learn how to use the MedTech service monitoring and health check tabs in the Azure portal. The monitoring and health check tabs provide access to crucial MedTech service metrics and health checks. These metrics and health checks can be used in assessing the health and performance of your MedTech service and can be useful seeing patterns and/or trends or assisting with troubleshooting your MedTech service.
 
 ## Use the MedTech service monitoring tab
 
diff --git a/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/overview.md b/articles/healthcare-apis/iot/overview.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: msjasteppe
 ms.service: healthcare-apis
 ms.subservice: fhir
 ms.topic: overview
-ms.date: 04/28/2023
+ms.date: 06/19/2023
 ms.author: jasteppe
 ---
 
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.author: jasteppe
 > [!NOTE]
 > [Fast Healthcare Interoperability Resources (FHIR&#174;)](https://www.hl7.org/fhir/) is an open healthcare specification.
 
-This article provides an introductory overview of the MedTech service. The MedTech service is a Platform as a Service (PaaS) within the Azure Health Data Services. The MedTech service enables you to ingest device data, transform it into a unified FHIR format, and store it in an enterprise-scale, secure, and compliant cloud environment. 
+This article provides an overview of the MedTech service. The MedTech service is a Platform as a Service (PaaS) within the Azure Health Data Services. The MedTech service enables you to ingest device data, transform it into a unified FHIR format, and store it in an enterprise-scale, secure, and compliant cloud environment. 
 
 The MedTech service was built to help customers that were dealing with the challenge of gaining relevant insights from device data coming in from multiple and diverse sources. No matter the device or structure, the MedTech service normalizes that device data into a common format, allowing the end user to then easily capture trends, run analytics, and build Artificial Intelligence (AI) models. In the enterprise healthcare setting, the MedTech service is used in the context of remote patient monitoring, virtual health, and clinical trials.
 
