Merge pull request #228498 from ktoliver/2033333

[AQ] edit pass: quickstart-configure-dev-box-service.md (2033333/66993)

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/dev-box/includes/note-permission-to-create-dev-box.md

@@ -7,4 +7,4 @@ ms.service: dev-box
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 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> Users assigned the Dev Box User role or Project Admin role can create dev boxes. 
+> A user that's assigned the Dev Box User role or the Project Admin role can create a dev box.

articles/dev-box/includes/note-supported-accounts.md

@@ -7,4 +7,4 @@ ms.service: dev-box
 ---
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Microsoft Dev Box Preview doesn't support the use of guest accounts or Microsoft Accounts (Live IDs). 
+> Microsoft Dev Box Preview doesn't support the use of guest accounts or Microsoft accounts.